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Haha, no prob bud, funny how my philosophy teacher seems to think I am a crappy writer, though hes a TA and a bit of an arrogant ass as most TAs are, but you are very welcome to use it. That being the reason I wrote it!

OK, the tounge should be long with the stud idea, the lips thin, the eyebrows subtly sculpted on and the horns aren't necessary, but whatever you want you keep.

You've got a strong diagonal movement going with the models leaning back position. For me the horns currently look stuck on as an afterthought. Now if the horns were rotated 90degrees and straightened out a little, it would complement the overall model far more.

I'm just nit-picking here; it's still a brilliant model, and you are truly talented!

Hope that helps.

I have to say that the horns art up to your usual great work. Prehapse if they had more of a striking angle, almost like those on a bull, but forward-pointing.
Everything else, is top notch.

i dont likethe idea of baldy horn headd. i think the grinder would be better if it had really long hair flowing ddown behind it. also, i agree about the long tongue, but hav it hangin down between her (searches for appropriate word) breasts and hangs down onto her stomach

the hanging tongue would be awsome especially if it were holding open part of her stomach or something. I would personally go withno more then 3 piercings. Otherwise it almost feels over the top. What could also be ool though maybe a little much would be to have a demonetter crawling over her side to hold open the other stonach liner for the cannon to come out.

ooh yeah i can see it now:
"the hulking monstrosity loomed out of the darkness, its dark eyes glinting in a foul mix of pain and exstasy. the pregnant demon-mother lay, fused to a bed oof metal legs and talons. its hair swayed as it rolled its head from side to side, its loling tounge running down its chest. it held its swollen belly between its hands as it screamed out its pleasure. a huge cut ran its way down her belly, slashing it open to reveal a barbed metal contraption that oozed a clear liquid that dripped down onto the ground behind it. the huge rent was held open to reveal the cannon by two lengths of wire, held by a demonette atendant, and by the demons tongue."

Basically, for the things belly cannon, have the slashed skin of her belly stretched to either side, one side held by a demonnette atendant, and have the other pulled back by the creatures mega long tongue. out of this slash should protrude the maw (or belly?) cannon, either mechanical, or organic.

Sersi wrote:
Mellon:

I don't know what to say to all that, but some small dark voice in my mind seems to like where your going. How about a nice painful looking chastity belt as a compromise?

That voice tells you the truth. It is the only thing you need to listen to, they will tell you everything you need to know. Everyone else is lying to you.

Chastity isn't quite the first and foremost command of slaanesh, but using the chastity belt as a seducing tool is right up his/her alley (no pun intended). Compare to how nuns can be a powerful fetish, we always wants whats hard to get. Make a big padlock or keyhole clearly visible and have a daemonette attendant carry the golden key on a red satin pillow, offering it to the bravest of the heroes facing her. The belt also carries with it a lower risk of getting banned from any gaming club that minors frequent :-)

Considering the rest of the things in this army, I'm thinking adding a chastity belt may make you less likely to get banned.

Granted, I'm not sure that counts for much.


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I just found these Helldorado models, and thought that they might be up your alley for this army, Sersi. I can't comment on the site itself, I can't read it.

A stomach/mouth demon thing with too many teeth
An interesting take on the 'puppet master' idea

didn't any1 read MY post?

I like the horns but I would add some hair as well. Never been to fond of the baldies.

Also definately should have the tongue sticking out. Long but not uber long just enough to give people ideas about what the tongue can do...

walker90234 wrote:didn't any1 read MY post?

The guy who's thread this is (Sersi) hasn't posted since you did, so he'll probably respond when he reads his thread again.

lol that heads really creepy. knowone should look happy giving birth. ITS UNNATURAL

either way, i thought it looking bald looks slightly disturbing on its own, the horns seemed a bit weird.

a really long tongue might look weird though.

but its your scary multilimbed pregnant daemon from hell.

but, its incidently the best model i have ever seen. undeniably origonal and so damn creepy

keep up the good work

waga waga whooo, Im a stinky poooooooo!


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I'm sorry, i dont quite know what possesed me to do that...

Hiya!

Update time.

So, I've made some revisions on the Pregnant Soul Grinder who's working name is now "Carna", after the roman goddess of flesh, from whose name the word carnal; as in "carnal knowledge" was derived. Until of unless someone thinks up a better one for me.

Changes:

- decided to go with a short tongue in the mouth as it looked best.
- cut off and re-sculpted a smaller chin and re-sculpted the teeth.
- changed the pose of the praying hand to simply having the fingers interlaced.

Likely Changes:

- for the horns I'm going with some very small subtle horns.
- long hair tied to a ring on the dais, to restrain the movement of her head.
- the supporting hands will be shackled to the dais.
- subtle veining on the abdomen.
- claw marks from the hands holding the abdomen.

I need feedback on:

- inspired by the "6" wings of Seraphim, she will now have 3 pairs of wings to tie her into the them of the other models.
- idea for the dais that she resting on. Its the only thing holding me up now.



Well enough talk...on with the pictures:


Close ups of the head and face:








Torso:










Full Body:














Walker Legs:

These are done they just need to be cast up. There fully articulated, so I should be able to get some great dynamic when it comes time to pose the walker.









As always more later!

hrmmm truthfully since your going with a fall of the eldar type style with this you could have her resting at the edge of a bed with demonettes laying in each others embrace behind her. Might be a little much but could fit in the whole style of it all. Or you could go with a palaquin style and have her on a luch bed being carried under by slaves of sorts to the pleasure god.

I honestly think that this model should be as close to her original form as possible, maybe sculpt on a helmet like your avatar(I like that idea!) and the wings really feel like they should be part of her throne, not actually a part of her. Just an idea...

Jebus that looks good! The only things I might add are small fangs or enlongated canines, and then perhaps a tiara with tentacle hair.

Also, I am not sure that I dig the wings. I think they take away from the more terrestrial nature of the model, with its spider legs and many arms and such. 6 limbs, 6 robot legs and 6 wings... just seems like it is gilding the lily a bit for no thematic gain. (Angels don't have multiple arms etc.) I might be completely wrong, but they just look really out of place to me.

LOVE the nipples! ( I almost get a "semi" every time I check 'em out! LOL)

The big-round Jay-Low booty is great too!

Not real keen on those wings, I think more traditional wings either leathery demon/dragon type- or feathers, but just 2 big ones rather than multiple tiny ones......

Geek-Squad-Man wrote:LOVE the nipples! ( I almost get a "semi" every time I check 'em out! LOL)

ummm... TMI you SICKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, and ewww.

DC

Geek-Squad-Man wrote:LOVE the nipples! ( I almost get a "semi" every time I check 'em out! LOL)

The big-round Jay-Low booty is great too!

LMAO . Dakka has just reached a new low...

I agree about the wings, not 100% sure about them. Then again, its your model and you're probably (definitely) more of an expert than me on these sorts of things, so if you like them then I have no complaints.

wings! Hisssssskk, wins, bad! hisssssss *crosses ffingers to ward of evil of satan* hiskkk

(*realise he is satan and has just cursed himself *) hisssssssk, wings bad!!!! (death words) *dissapears in a puff of smoke and turns to ash...

ash whisperes "hisssssk, wings bad, hiskkkk, no wings HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSK!!!!! (i think we can saftley sumarize that he doesn't like wings - walkers concience)

Outstanding! will there be alternates?

First things first, good job and thanks for losing the curly horns!

Hmmmm....

Not sure about the wings as they are. If you want them Sersi then IMO you should have one, larger pair. They should also be heavily damaged and chained to the throne. Sort of a captured-daemon-forcibly-made-pregnant kind of thing.

I also agree with wherkind: some sharp teeth might be fun! (but if youre done sculpting the head then don't bother, I bet it's a pain to re-make!)

Anywhoo, keep up the good work, and any chance of a whole army shot in the near future?

Just spent some time reading this blog, and I must say, I love it! (sort of hard to read at work though!)

Here is an idea for the prego-grinder. You do not currently have the typical Slanneshi crab claws on the model.

Suggestion is to change the hands holding the belly to small, delicate versions of these claws, and have them pinching the flesh of the belly. I think that will add in the crab claw look in a way that also adds to the... flavor of the model.

Keep up the good work, and appreciate your posting this!

Like OMG! I love the wings!

Wings are win.

I agree with the small, subtle horns. Your model is daemonic enough, i dont think you need to worry about people thinking she aint that evil.


Maybe have talons/nails on each hand 'piercing' but not pulling at the skin...

Gold all round tho.

Beautiful figures, and I can't wait to see more.

What about doing ridged horns that are flat against her head? Could even form kind of a natural circlet. They'd be textured like the ones from the bloodletter on the right in this photo: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warhammer40k/images/2/20/Bloodletter.gif

Well the wing idea seems to have gone over like a lead balloon. Hmmm...Maybe this image will sell you on them. Or not...



Not my work by the way, but cool none the less. Also pretty similar to what I'm trying to do here, well except for her having an alligator for her crotch!

I'll shelve the wing Idea for now, though. The following is in the cards for today.

Carna:

1. some sort of crown or tiara.
2. small subtle horns.
3. normal hair hanging down to the dais.
4. shackles on the supporting hands and feet

Spiderwalker:[u]

1. a cushion dais with lounging daemonettes sounds interesting.
2. the legs are looking pretty plain, I will probably scribe in some details to break up the surface.

Anybody still like the idea of it being a corrupted Eldar Farseer? Or is her just being a daemon bad/good enough?


Oh I also started on a na alternate head for the Male KOS. Similar to this:



I'll be altering the body after casting to add the bony spines and spikes, etc.



Keeps the comments and suggestions coming, the certainly help.