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Made in us
Rogue Inquisitor with Xenos Bodyguards





Eastern edge

The Spetznats returned, just in time to see that they were smart to get their weapons. They instantly began to open fire on the huge daemon in the chamber. "HAHAHAHA! THOSE TICKLE! WHY NOT LET ME TICKLE YOU WITH A GIFT IN RETURN?" It boomed. The Violators snapped out of it quickly as they readied their weapons, the platoon sections with the Kommissar took time for her to rally, but with Father Orlov there, it was possible. "Listen not to the Daemon, for it is a liar! banish the Daemon for it is unclean! SEND THE DAEMON BACK TO THE WARP!" he finished. this finished rallying the troops.

Rat, Ogre and Cook got their meltas ready. The Daemon erupted from several spots, the Spetznats swarmed by smaller versions of it no higher than their knees.

Mikhail said "Great unclean one, by your description, I have your name and shall use it to send you back from whence you came." The Crusaders had taken positions of defense, shields held at the ready, swords out and prepared to attack. The same with the Adept, who had a large hammer
Valentina was also in battle stance.

The Daemon spoke "BUT I JUST GOT HERE< AND I HAVE SO MUCH PARTYING TO DO< SO MANY GIFTS TO BESTOW!" he chortled as if it were all a big joke. Mikhail got his attentions by raising his hand and uttering an invocation that saw lightning leap from the fingertips to the beast, and that drew a bellow fo rage and pain from it.

"NOW!" he yelled and the Violators and platoon section all fired at once, burns erupted on the monster at where the meltas and krak grenades hit, the las bolts having little effect as they did nothing to the potent creature from the warp. It charged at the men and women of the Khadrovian Iron Guard, who all held their position, the Inspector General read from the book. "N' urg'lethar, na' hoth, return to the place of Nurgle and be banished for a thousand years and a day so sayeth the Emperor, in His Holy name do we command you!"

That made the Great Unclean One stop mid stride, and he then chortled, "OH, SO YOU WISH TO BANISH ME? KNOW MY NAME DO YOU? BUT NOT MY TRUE NAME!" and with a swing of rusty chains, he batted a squad of Khadrovians aside.

The Spetznats were all laying where the tiny daemonic imps had killed them, they ran back to their "father" and nestled amongst his entrails. "NOW YOU WILL ALL BE PUNISHED AS YOU HAVE ANGERED ME!" the greater daemon bellowed.

Mikhail drew his force blade and shield, he and his retinue charged as the Psyker gave them protection from the diseases of the monster, Vasily and the Violators as well as Orlov and Zvedvedov charged, all engaging the monster in melee.

Mikhail drove his sword into the guts of the Daemon, and willed himself into the attack, even as more people were smashed flat by the daemons' mighty fists.

The Great Unclean beast looked surprised and pained. "NOOOOOOOOOOooooooooo!" it shouted as it faded away.

"For a millenia and a day foul one!" Mikhail canted. He then dropped to his knee and prayed with sword in front of him, as did his warriors.

"What was that thing?" Vasily asked. Valentina smiled at him and said, That was a Greater Daemon of Nurgle, very nasty." everyone shook their heads in agreement to that.

Father Orlov spoke next. "All of you will swear yourselves to secrecy about this! By order of the Holy Throne!" Mikhail stood. "The good father is right, you people will have to swear secrecy, and those that have survived may get re-assigned to special units after this is over."

That brought a hushed whispering. "Nothing to worry about, you are all veterans now and worthy of elite postings. The Kommissar and Father will likely be given new troops to whip into shape."

"What about these creatures?" Vasily asked referring to the web making things that had attacked the Spetznats.
"Those will be collected for study by the right departmento. " Mikhail and the adept said together.

As Vasily and Valentina seemed dangerously close, Kommissar Zvedvedov placed herself with her back to the young woman and faced Vasily. "I think we should get back to base and have that Regicide game." she said to him, her eyes boring into his.

Vasily looked at Valentina, who nodded, and then to the Kommissar, "Of course we will."

Mikhail turned and said, "Oh yes, thgere is still the matter of handling that Lt. Troucescau of yours!"

Zvedvedov turned around smiling coolly, "Oh I would not be so worried about trouble from him anymore Inspector General."



"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

oh the great unclean one...*holds his nose closed*...
but seeing all those zombyfighters before i should have thought in that direction...
if they didn´t swear secrecy, would the lot of them be executed by the inquisition for spreading heretical talks?
so the violators have yet again climbed up the social/military ladder due to this mission...fitting and well deserved!
and i hope vassily is smart enough not to anger Zvedvedov any further with sweet looks at valentia.... or this might get very much more ugly than facing the nurglish demon^^

thanks for the quick update^^ was very wellcome to my breakfast^^

vik

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Oh yeah, that was why they had to work to rally the troops.
Yes, spreading of stories of such things could lead to servitor status, or penal legions!

Vasily lives dangerously!^^

Figured that would be a good update.

Soon I will make a story from the POV of a Necron Lord.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

now this is something i would found totally new^^ necron fiction...never seen that around here...mind you it isn´t as if i had a lookaround for that but there you go^^

of course he loves danger...in all it´s shades^^ and he uses all weapons at his disposal...meltas, grenades, powerswords...and if all else fails amasec and some flowers possible to sooth the tides of war between sexes^^


do servitors perserve a sense of self after their treatment? or is it rather like death to a personna?

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Death of persona as they scrub your mind out, and then half your brain is replaced with a cogitator to do the job they assign to your modified body.

Yep, that Vasily is one smooth guy.

Oh, it will be a new story telling for me as it will be first person telling.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
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Ol' Blighty

Nice work!
Getting reprogrammed into a servitor is one of the worst punishments the inquisition can give without direct death.


DS:90-S++G+++M++B++I+Plotr06#+D+++A++++/eWD251R+++T(Ot)DM+
JB: I like the concept of a free Shrike roaming through the treetops of the jungle. I'm not sure that I like the idea of a real Shrike sitting on my couch eating my Skittles.
corpsesarefun: Thank god I missed be nice to shrike day.
greenskin lynn: because of all the skittles and soda, you basically live off sugar water, like some sort of freakish human-hummingbird hybrid. 
   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Thanks Shrike.

Yeah, Inq is bad to piss off.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

i think i have aquired their codex but never came around to read it.... be sure to give me a line when you write the story^^

well sometimes i think the IoM is the cruelest one of the factions around... not even the peaceful death is allowed to their servants... but i guess nothing better is to be expected from a faction that believes and serves a rotting emperor and sacrifizes thousands of special people each day...

   
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Eastern edge

Yep, they are doing it to save humanity in the long run, cruel to be kind

My oddball tank thread has some inspirationals for you as well Vik.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

jep^^ saw them and ansered in my blog to them^^.... we get a bit tangled up don´t we?^^

   
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Eastern edge

LOL! Yeah, I was also hoping for a boost as it is sinking!

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

ah well. I need to do the wrap up to the story so it ends well.


"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

raised it^^

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Thanks. now for resting.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

oh....will the story not be a neverending one?...well you can return whenever you want to...after all it is your universe^^

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Let us just say that this was a chapter in the Vasily Saga.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Ammendment pending rewrite to be added later on this thread!

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/04/19 02:52:05


"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

seems as if i missed an installment... all too soon ended...for my taste mate...

you took all lose ends and tied them all together but the overall feeling of me now is a bit unsatisfied...the whole issue with the "rectangle" of love between vassily and his numerous interests is way to short and for now leaves me wanting...

the Lt. Troucescau issue is also a bit of a too short ending and is not showing some of the i think nneded aspects to deal with some matters brought up in the storyline... for instance if a commissar breaks a Lt.s nose in midcommand during a battle... there has to be a fitting aftermath...

lets make a deal ole chap...i redo my poste here if you redo yours^^....please... for the sake of the story and the joy and hurt of the charcters we all came to feel for and love...please?












































please?



































yet again please?

vik *sobs*

   
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Eastern edge

No worry Vik, think of that post as a note for me to reference so I can redo it all with dialogue and details.


"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

*a big stone drops of my heart*

( in german this is a sign of great relief, figure of speach^^)

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Ich verstehen. In english it translates to "a great weight is lifted from my heart.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

ah yup^^
and you know the play: great expectations?^^ hint hint^^

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Know of it, but alas, have never read it nor seen it performed. I was more the one to pursue Hamlet and Macbeth

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in us
Rogue Inquisitor with Xenos Bodyguards





Eastern edge

For my mood was dark, and my outlook desolate in my youth.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

goes with the show to be a youngster...grim and dark and possibly with some zits to boot... which explains most of the grim and dark...less seeable those zits then^^

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

LOL! Not as many as my friends suffered from, but a Huge block on my shoulder. Age has mellowed and tempered me some bits.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

if you want to talk then pm with me...this seems a bit to personell with open com like this here...

personaly i get grimmer when gtting older...

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Then let us save the channels for the story to be finished later, for now i go for rest, and you have tanks to make!

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

unique combination... tank making and resting^^

have a good night mate!

   
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Ol' Blighty

I CAN'T READ IT BECAUSE OF THREAD ROLLBACK!


DS:90-S++G+++M++B++I+Plotr06#+D+++A++++/eWD251R+++T(Ot)DM+
JB: I like the concept of a free Shrike roaming through the treetops of the jungle. I'm not sure that I like the idea of a real Shrike sitting on my couch eating my Skittles.
corpsesarefun: Thank god I missed be nice to shrike day.
greenskin lynn: because of all the skittles and soda, you basically live off sugar water, like some sort of freakish human-hummingbird hybrid. 
   
 
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