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2011/11/07 20:50:47
Subject: The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
I am reading a fan fiction named My little avengers, and decided to illustrate some of the characters in it.
idolator wrote:That Nob is carrying a big honking gun that happens to have two barrels. You could call it a twin-linked shoota if you want, you could also call it Susan.
Did you do that freehand or start with a base pony?
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/07 21:12:48
Subject: The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
idolator wrote:That Nob is carrying a big honking gun that happens to have two barrels. You could call it a twin-linked shoota if you want, you could also call it Susan.
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
corpsesarefun wrote:So you know one of you wants to make a pony based on me right?
cant draw.
Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
2011/11/08 00:11:26
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 00:18:04
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
Nerivant wrote:Neither can I. Or anything cool, really.
It's why I write. >.>
YEAH! go grimdark!
oh,and on a random note, i met a brony at school. we bro hoofed.
Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
2011/11/08 00:20:21
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
Nerivant wrote:Neither can I. Or anything cool, really.
It's why I write. >.>
YEAH! go grimdark!
oh,and on a random note, i met a brony at school. we bro hoofed.
I don't think I could write anything truly grimdark. Aay'han, I can do, though.
I've yet to meet a brony on the outside. I don't think I'm looking hard enough.
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 00:21:26
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
Nerivant wrote:
lord commissar klimino wrote:
Nerivant wrote:Neither can I. Or anything cool, really.
It's why I write. >.>
YEAH! go grimdark!
oh,and on a random note, i met a brony at school. we bro hoofed.
I don't think I could write anything truly grimdark. Aay'han, I can do, though.
I've yet to meet a brony on the outside. I don't think I'm looking hard enough.
well,i wear an button of fluttershy laughing insanely,so that helped.
and i could write grimdark like i was breathing
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Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
2011/11/08 00:22:55
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
lord commissar klimino wrote:
and i could write grimdark like i was breathing
Breathing is too hopeful for grimdark.
Stop immediately.
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 00:31:19
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
Nerivant wrote:
lord commissar klimino wrote:
and i could write grimdark like i was breathing
Breathing is too hopeful for grimdark.
Stop immediately.
its not when your breathing in toxic gas.
Spoiler:
you throat bleeds and swells. your chocking on blood. whats that? your eyes are melting,and your ears are clogged with pus. you rip at your throat to no avail but riping it open. as you slowly die i walk up and laugh insanely,and drag off you poor body to go feed the homeless.
Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
2011/11/08 00:32:13
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
you throat bleeds and swells. your chocking on blood. whats that? your eyes are melting,and your ears are clogged with pus. you rip at your throat to no avail but riping it open. as you slowly die i walk up and laugh insanely,and drag off you poor body to go feed the homeless.
Instantly stopped by unicorn magic.
NOW WHAT!?
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 00:34:06
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
Nerivant wrote:
lord commissar klimino wrote:
its not when your breathing in toxic gas.
Spoiler:
you throat bleeds and swells. your chocking on blood. whats that? your eyes are melting,and your ears are clogged with pus. you rip at your throat to no avail but riping it open. as you slowly die i walk up and laugh insanely,and drag off you poor body to go feed the homeless.
Instantly stopped by unicorn magic.
NOW WHAT!?
duh? my guy used to be a unicorn. he breaks off your horn with a blast from a magically enhanced projectile. have fun feeding the homeless.
Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
2011/11/08 00:36:00
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
duh? my guy used to be a unicorn. he breaks off your horn with a blast from a magically enhanced projectile. have fun feeding the homeless.
Hmm, can a unicorn's horn be broken in MLP?
Also, is it sharp enough to use as a weapon?
Because I totally already did that in a scene I wrote today.
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There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 00:37:51
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
Nerivant wrote:
Also, is it sharp enough to use as a weapon?
I assume, since we've seen Twilight(and I think Rarity, too) lower her head to use it on a charge.
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2011/11/08 00:41:44
Subject: The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
wait...you wouldnt of seen the gas coming,so while your still stunned by it id remove your horn. by saw or snapping it,whatever works.
oh,and my in completed prologue.
Spoiler:
Prologue.
Creation. Life,warmth,evil,good,chaos,happiness,death. It all came from something. It all had a beginning. a thing that made it. This thing was perfect. It was everything,creation itself. It had a vision. A perfect vision. It tried once, but the reptiles it made were to un evolved,too primitive and savage,and had to be destroyed. So it gave its next creation a gift. Thought. Thumbs. Ideas.
It dubbed them humans,the second try at life. At perfection. But it gave too much,and didn’t look deep enough. Corruption spread. Fast and deadly. War, greed, all spread like a plague. The creator was horrified by it all,and turned its backs of the humans,letting them rot themselves away...away into nothing....
in its anger, the creator took up creation and smashed it,and flooded the gap full of whatever it thought was what had made the humans turn out bad. It sent thought in. it flooded in bright colors. It flooded in freedom,and control,and a want for happiness. What it got,made it surprised. A magical land, filled with similar creatures to the human world. Ponies. But not just ponies, but buffalo, unicorns, zebras,griffons,and more. It saw a odd good in this world. A need to be good,and get rid of evil. Giving life one last chance,it created to beings to rule this world. Immortal,so leadership would never be challenged. Powerful,so they could prove their worth. Beautiful, to make people love them. The creator gave one the sun,the other the moon. It also blessed the rulers with some knowledge of itself.
But fear was still in creation. It did not want to wait and see if this world would fall. So it stripped away is own powers,concealing it in a orb,and let itself die. It hid the orb in an unknown location,never to be found. Of course,some saw and heard about the strange lights and the magical light being. They made myths and maps,trying to find this creature,and the treasure it must have. None did,but some got close.
That is,until HE looked for it. Him. A scorn on the planet that should of been perfect. He found it,he re hid it, and he learned its secrets.
He was the insane pony. His name lost to time. His crimes considered so horrifying ponies wounder it there true. They are. Murder, mutilation,deception,assassination;all true. He was a rare breed among ponies. An evil breed.
His story dates back to before the luna rebellion. He lived an ordinary life. No troubles, no odd happenings, a nice little life. He himself was an normal unicorn. Not bad,not good. Until his mom committed suicide,taking his father and little sister with her. Right before his eyes.
He sat there til the cops showed up,crying over his little sister, his dad,his family,holding the odd weapon his mom had used. The cops startled him. He never meant to,but he jumped and turned, blasting off the weapon,killing one of the cops. The other shot back,shattering his horn and cutting his ear. He barely escaped,and ended up alone,in a dark alley. Darkness took him. Madness shattered his mind,And death became his life. so he decided to hand it out selflessly.
By the end of 5 years,he had killed and robbed countless ponies, evading even leaving simple clues to who he was, and sending fear across canterlot. He became a legend in the underground,and started taking jobs from the crime lords. With his help,they started to rule the city,the royal guards out numbered. Things got so desperate that when the guards got a leak about “the king of murders” hideout,they burned it to the ground hoping to get rid of the problem. Insane pony escaped,but his sides were burned and scarred, leaving his cutie mark gone.
As his fame grew, people wanted to know what to call this shadow pony,who is never seen yet can get anywhere. At some point,he was call “one insane little pony” and the name insane pony stuck.
besides grammar, how is it?
This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/11/08 00:42:25
Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
2011/11/08 00:44:39
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
Nerivant wrote:
Also, is it sharp enough to use as a weapon?
I assume, since we've seen Twilight(and I think Rarity, too) lower her head to use it on a charge.
Ah, I'd forgotten about that. Thanks! That's a much better explanation than "because horns are supposed to be pointy."
lord commissar klimino wrote:wait...you wouldnt of seen the gas coming,so while your still stunned by it id remove your horn. by saw or snapping it,whatever works.
oh,and my in completed prologue.
Spoiler:
Prologue.
Creation. Life,warmth,evil,good,chaos,happiness,death. It all came from something. It all had a beginning. a thing that made it. This thing was perfect. It was everything,creation itself. It had a vision. A perfect vision. It tried once, but the reptiles it made were to un evolved,too primitive and savage,and had to be destroyed. So it gave its next creation a gift. Thought. Thumbs. Ideas.
It dubbed them humans,the second try at life. At perfection. But it gave too much,and didn’t look deep enough. Corruption spread. Fast and deadly. War, greed, all spread like a plague. The creator was horrified by it all,and turned its backs of the humans,letting them rot themselves away...away into nothing....
in its anger, the creator took up creation and smashed it,and flooded the gap full of whatever it thought was what had made the humans turn out bad. It sent thought in. it flooded in bright colors. It flooded in freedom,and control,and a want for happiness. What it got,made it surprised. A magical land, filled with similar creatures to the human world. Ponies. But not just ponies, but buffalo, unicorns, zebras,griffons,and more. It saw a odd good in this world. A need to be good,and get rid of evil. Giving life one last chance,it created to beings to rule this world. Immortal,so leadership would never be challenged. Powerful,so they could prove their worth. Beautiful, to make people love them. The creator gave one the sun,the other the moon. It also blessed the rulers with some knowledge of itself.
But fear was still in creation. It did not want to wait and see if this world would fall. So it stripped away is own powers,concealing it in a orb,and let itself die. It hid the orb in an unknown location,never to be found. Of course,some saw and heard about the strange lights and the magical light being. They made myths and maps,trying to find this creature,and the treasure it must have. None did,but some got close.
That is,until HE looked for it. Him. A scorn on the planet that should of been perfect. He found it,he re hid it, and he learned its secrets.
He was the insane pony. His name lost to time. His crimes considered so horrifying ponies wounder it there true. They are. Murder, mutilation,deception,assassination;all true. He was a rare breed among ponies. An evil breed.
His story dates back to before the luna rebellion. He lived an ordinary life. No troubles, no odd happenings, a nice little life. He himself was an normal unicorn. Not bad,not good. Until his mom committed suicide,taking his father and little sister with her. Right before his eyes.
He sat there til the cops showed up,crying over his little sister, his dad,his family,holding the odd weapon his mom had used. The cops startled him. He never meant to,but he jumped and turned, blasting off the weapon,killing one of the cops. The other shot back,shattering his horn and cutting his ear. He barely escaped,and ended up alone,in a dark alley. Darkness took him. Madness shattered his mind,And death became his life. so he decided to hand it out selflessly.
By the end of 5 years,he had killed and robbed countless ponies, evading even leaving simple clues to who he was, and sending fear across canterlot. He became a legend in the underground,and started taking jobs from the crime lords. With his help,they started to rule the city,the royal guards out numbered. Things got so desperate that when the guards got a leak about “the king of murders” hideout,they burned it to the ground hoping to get rid of the problem. Insane pony escaped,but his sides were burned and scarred, leaving his cutie mark gone.
As his fame grew, people wanted to know what to call this shadow pony,who is never seen yet can get anywhere. At some point,he was call “one insane little pony” and the name insane pony stuck.
besides grammar, how is it?
It feels very... rushed. Even for a prologue. Like you're trying to inject as much backstory as possible into their brains at once.
This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/11/08 00:52:59
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 02:18:45
Subject: The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 06:00:43
Subject: Re:The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
Next avenger - Firebird (not a very well known one):
idolator wrote:That Nob is carrying a big honking gun that happens to have two barrels. You could call it a twin-linked shoota if you want, you could also call it Susan.
idolator wrote:That Nob is carrying a big honking gun that happens to have two barrels. You could call it a twin-linked shoota if you want, you could also call it Susan.
Everyone should post their creations. It'd inject some much needed life into this thread. Art, music, videos, fiction... everything. Post what you've made.
*sweeps own stuff under the rug*
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 22:09:36
Subject: The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
There are some who walk until their legs fail them and they fall to the ground. I find that respectable.
Then there are those who drag themselves further. I find that admirable.
2011/11/08 22:14:04
Subject: The DakkaDakka OT My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Thread
2350pt W/D/L: 4/2/3--
600pt 2/0/1 --
280pt
g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f 
1750 points of Imperial Guard 
500 points of Biel Tan Mech-dar 
250 points of Dark Angels 
