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The Mangalores were the inspiration for my orks, but with a hint of green wash over their skin as you saw in the one pic behind my Necrons. Part of Waaagh! Magnotz! an enemy of the Konfederacy.

yep the Mangalores represent a slice of orks quite good... stuborn and brutal and not that bright^^ and a fairer colored version of orks was also my intention to create orks whenever i get around to that project...not in the nearer futeur tho...^^

Well, it was either those guys with tan outfits and black eyes, or Trek based Orks, lead by a warboss named Kurkh

Glad you enjoyed the latest installment for Vasily as well!^^

of that you can be sure mate^^... about to be off for now as the chores are screaming havoc to me^^

see ya in the evening/morning^^


vik

Okay, I may have more later as well.

Viktor von Domm wrote:me favorite scene^^

and then..."what does dis button do?"
*KABOOM!*

Lt. Troucescaeu was sipping a small glass of amasec, a good 12yr old variety, and eating fresh foods from a table He was looking at the map of the area, and likely zones that 1st platoon could avoid enemy panzer units. "Hmm, with that valley, there is no way the tanks could be used by either side, brilliant! we will be able to avoid using Vasily and his hooligans!" and at that he smiled a broad smile.

He was interrupted by a voice that spoke, yet had not made noise until it did so. "I see that you consider yourself a man of taste Lieutenant." Troucescaeu almost dropped his drink, he leaped up and placed the glass of amasec down on the table. "how dare you interrup.....Forgive me! I had no idea that you were S.C.H.M.E.R.T.Z.!" he said as he saw who had cut into his reveries. "I was going over some plans for tomorrow's mission." he let out to the ornately dressed man in his quarters.

Standing a head taller than him, in golden armor with silver filigree stood the imposing figure of power, a shield on his arm, a stormbolter and force sword at his back. "I will let the shock of seeing me for the first time excuse your ill manners Lieutenant,,,this time, I am "Inspector General" Mikhail Illyavik Romanov and I am from the organization that you blurted out." he said as he picked up and sniffed the decanter of amasec, hm, a little over twelve years old, the Kedgeree is a little old, but still viable, and the bread is fresh." he said as he poured a snifter of amasec for himself.

Troucescaeu replied, "Thank you sir, he-help yourself." the larger man looked at troucescaeu, "I see the map section is a very bad place for tank support, by both our forces and the enemy, an interesting attack route. explain why you chose it." Romanov ordered.

Composing himself, "Of course sir." he thought, how is he so huge!? It's not just the power armor he is in. "The route should be able to allow us to move albeit slowly, but we could get aerial support instead of tank support since the enemy seems to rely heavily on tanks to support and less on infantry." He did not say anything about his wanting to avoid the use of the hero of the Konfederacy that he had brought charges against. "If this plan succeeds the way I think it will, we can then have engineers clear a roadway for tank support and surprise the enemy at this town nearby, a lethal blow to their supply lines once we secure the town!"

"An interesting plan Lieutenant, hopefully there will be no hitches such as the enemy already covering that route for such a thing." Mikhail said.

"Sir, my latest patrols indicate the enemy has not even considered the pass a problem as they expect us to bypass it due to the same reasons that they would, it is not hospitable to tracked or wheeled assault vehicles." He replied confidently.

"Good, now where can I find Sgt Vasily? I have something to discuss with the man." Mikhail asked

How many people has this Vasily befriended? Troucescaeu thought as he answered, "Aheh, you can find him in section blue 4 sir, he has gotten some time off for the present."

"Very well, I will be leaving to see him now, and thank you for the amasec, it was a nice vintage Lieutenent." He bowed, as the Lieutenant saluted. As he was leaving, Father Orlov was coming in, making complaints about the special Spetznats troopers guarding the entryway. "Damned insufferable wind up soldiers! MIKHAIL! a pleasure to see you my friend! how goes the Inspection business?" he said embracing Mikhail who embraced him back, "Good to see you too Anton! I was about to speak to another old friend, and you?"

"Oh I was going to speak tot he good lieutenant here about tomorrow, morale, and other righteous things" he said glancing Troucescaeu's way. The lieutenant did not like the glare Orlov gave him. Mikhail Romanov was a bit taller than Orlov!

As both men left chatting away, he sighed relief and sat back down, "What kind of freaks are they breeding these days?" he said to himself.

Meanwhile, as they walked , troopers in tow, "So, I see you have kept to shaving your head down a bit." said Mikhail, "All the better for fighting!" Orlov replied. "Look that lieutenent,m he is new and already has launched charges against Vasily and the sqaud he leads, I know that is none of your concern, but I fear he is looking to make a career out of scapegoating his failures onto others Mikhail."

"Oh, I have seen his kind before Anton, and they always think they have it all under control, then a hammer lands on their plans and shatters the plan and the psyche of such a weak mind as his. But I have a lot more leeway than most and I have a favor to ask of you, I want you to keep the platoon of yours safe and help them get out of any crap fest he leads you into."

"Of course Mikhail, they are my "flock" and I their shepherd, I will be ready, I assume you have a "special" thing planned yourself?" Orlov asked.

"You know I can never be so honest as you can good father." Mikhail replied as they entered the Blue section of the base trench-works.

ohoh seems the Lt. has poked his crappy finger in a nest of scorpions...

"What kind of freaks are they breeding these days?" he said to himself.

indeed! one might ask oneself... only who is the freak and who is the asking one...^^

*rubs hand together*

this will be nice thing to see...the Lt. will i suppose be able to get a chimera inside his abdomen^^ after this whole affair is finished...and the guys from S.C.H.M.E.R.T.Z are indeed finished with him...

I have a lot of balls rolling along the tracks on this story!^^

lol.... i hope that you are attached to your balls as i am to mine...
but a good story you can always roll over to me^^

LOL! Wrong kind of balls Vik! But just when you though things were fairly predictable,,,,,,BAM!

a good story needs twists and turns^^

give it to us^^

Now that I have warmed you all up, the next phase ids to speed the roller coaster!

rollercoaster is a nice idiom for your story^^

LOL! As long as you guys who are reading it enjoy the ride, all is good!

yup^^

Can't wait to see Shrike's reaction to this new development.^^

shasolenzabi wrote:Spetznats troopers

spetznats? COD?

Anohter little side passage...or is this just a twist to the main story?
The latter, methinks...

great fluff, and I'd say any publisher who won't use it is either an idiot or...an idiot.

Spetznats=Stormtroopers.

It is a part of the plot.

Well, I may collect it all, make needed changes and present it to the right people for this in the future, see what they decided to do. It would be nice to be published, and thanks for the vote of confidence^^

When you have fluff as good as this, it's hard not to.

Well, I always wonder if it is that good or not. Helps to have other's input.

i have not seen a single lie i would have needed to change... the whole plot is an entertaining read and i could see lots of people to look for this kind of storyline...also and this is quite a big feature you write it in small heaps so it has a tendency to develop itself as you go along...meaning we the readers and you the author might not know whats behind the next corner... funny feature and very much unique to the whole storybuilding process... you can only get something like that in the internet^^

And I thank you for the input.

but dont let that sweettalk let you hinder you from writing more real soon ^^

as like in shakespear: "I come to bury Caesar, not to praise him..."

I think the next installment will have folks on the edge of their seats.

hehe... you tease^^

Have I ever not delivered?

lol...

I am working in my head the sequences of the actions and what actions will occur for the installment so that folks will be enjoying the story.