Lt. 'Tweek wrote:

 Kain wrote:
For anyone who wants to join in my little project, it's going under the working name of the Inciphis region (multiple sectors), part of Ultima Segmentum.

Where heroes are made and the war is never ending. This is the frontier of the Imperium, and here Slaugth, Necrons, Hrud, Thyrrus, Orks, Tyranids, Slann, Rak'Gol, Chaos, Eldar, Dark Eldar, the Imperium, the Tau, Umbra, and countless other factions battle in near constant conflict.

I don't mean normal, run of the mill "there is only war" I mean usually the majority of the region is at Aurielian Crusade level violence and often it conflagrates to an even worse extent. (It is currently in an ultra-violence mode due to the after-effects of the 13th Black Crusade and the en masse arrival of hive fleets Hydra and Leviathan, accompanied by Waaaaghs! Gitbasha, Brainmelta, Gigakilla, 'Ead stompa, and Bloodsmasha amongst others, the awakening of several Necron Dynasties, massive Hrud migrations and Thyrrus troupes, Craftworld Biel-tan and her allies deciding to try out this conquest thing, multiple Kabals focusing on here, a new Imperial crusade to pacify the area, a Slann resurgance, Umbra flocks moving in, the incursions of Kay-Yuss and his allied convens, and a new wave of expansions by the Tau, with responses from all other factions)

As such constant war which despite the arrival of the Tyranids, the awakening of the Necrons, and the Emergence of the Slaugth has remained in a brutal back and forth stalemate since the great crusade (and if Eldar records are to be believed, the region has been home to vast amounts of violence before mankind evolved) this is often seen as a proving ground and training field. While not a pleasant place for civilians, the Inciphis region is a great place for commanders who want some glory.

As of most of my writings, the current time period for anything I write for the Inciphis region is in the second half of M42.

Commanders seeking their fortune, space marine chapters seeking to attain glory, chaos champions hoping to curry favor with the gods, Orks looking for a big scrap, Rak'Gol wanting some action, Dark Eldar seeking thrills, Tyranids in search of biomass, Necrons in reconquest mode, Slaugth desiring experiments, Thyrrus looking for a show, and Tau commanders wishing to test their newest strategies and weaponry come here to make for a self feeding cycle of violence.

A large number of chapters, sisters orders, and guard armies are deployed here to make sure that the violence here doesn't spread to the interior of the Imperium. And the detritus of literally millions of years of conflict (the Slaugth, Hrud, Eldar, Orks, Thyrrus, Umbra, Slann and other old races have been bickering over this area since the war in heaven ended, before that there was of course the war in heaven itself) has left a motherlode of artefacts and long forgotten or hidden secrets.

Welcome to Inciphis commander, welcome to Bellum Infinitus, welcome...to hell.

Every legion has descendant chapters here, every model of imperial guard regiment can be found here, every craftworld has stuck it's nose here at some point, and the violence never stops. Alliances are made and broken constantly. And sometimes a single planet can be fought over by every single faction in the entire region at the same time. While the current overall warmaster here is from Krieg, the last one was Vostroyan. Until lictors ate him. The one before him got stomped to death by a squiggoth, and the Elysian before him was atomized by a Gauss flayer.

Death comes to all.

This sounds brutally astounding!
It seems pretty much what GW want to say, but by the Emperor's will you say it so well!
I think I'm going to make a Kill-Team of DA in honour of this, with more emblems, blood splatter, custom armour and battle damage than any of my other squads... just base coated a couple tactical marines w/assault weapons in DW colours as a test and was looking for a new idea, this is perfect
Maybe field them as veterans until I make substantial enough rules for them
Oh a storm's coming

 dementedwombat wrote:
That's awesome! The one thing I would have questions about is whether Guardian should be able to shoot into combat if he himself is in combat.

 Dakkamite wrote:
Great name mate, I can never come up with a decent one for my Orks, otherwise this thread would be flooded with tons of Orky submissions by now...

"ellfia" missiles sound more like "healthier" than "hellfire" IMO, and "this plane just has a missile lock system" isn't really a good excuse to give them that ability.

The ability to double the amount of planes we can usually put on the table shouldn't be underestimated.

You should match up his "Da Sky Kaptin" bonus with a penalty to shooting 'puny little targets'

 Hive Fleet Lazarus wrote:
An upgrade to a character I had posted before, he's gone from captan to chapter master (I have some fluff but its still a bit rough so I won't make you suffer through it). My friend and I are having a discussion over points cost and I wanted to get some outside opinions. He looks a bit complicated but apart from the unique wargear, he doesn't really have many special abilities. Thanks again to pelicanforge for hidden hand


Shadow Guard Chapter Master Elistrin Mallik 385 pts
WS6 BS5 S4 T4 W4 I6 A3 Ld10 Sv2+

Wargear
Frag and Krak grenades
Advanced Spec Op Armour
Spec Op Jump Pack
Integrated Bolters
Two Power Falchions

Orbital Bombardment Relay-Being a fleet based chapter, the Elistrin can call upon a great amount of support from orbits strike cruisers and uses any opportunity to do so, calling down devestating strikes on the enemy.
The orbital bombardment relay follows the same rules for orbital bombardment as found in Codex:Space Marine. However it may be used up to three times a single game, though not in the same shooting phase

Advanced Spec Op Armour-A much more advanved version of the armour worn by the chapters first company veterans, the armour incorporates an advanced energy field similar to that of a storm shield. However the chapters techmarines recognized the need for the chapter master to have mobility and speed and instead integrated the field generator components into the body of the armour instead of a storm shield, allowing for the same level of protection but without compromising the strength or mobility of the armour.
The armour provides a 2+/3++ as well as the shrouded and night vision special rules.

Integrated Bolters-The armour also includes two integrated bolters, one on each arm. By linking them to Mallik's bionics, they can be fired while still fighting with melee weapons.
Counts as two bolters loaded with special issue ammo, they can be fired at different targets in the movement phase

Power Falchion Range- S+1 AP3 Melee, Specialist Weapon, Rending, Shimmering Strike

Special Rules
ATSKNF
Independent Character
Move through Cover
Night Vision

Shimmering Strike-the chapter masters metallic black power falchions weave a pattern of shadow nearly impossible for opponents to see through. If any enemy model wishes to assault or land attacks on the chapter master, they must halve their WS to do so, rounding down.

Hidden Hand: Mallik and any unit he joins may choose to outflank. However he does not enter from a table edge. Instead he treats one terrain piece chosen by the controlling players as one table edge and another terrain piece chosen by the opposing player as the other.

pricing

Spoiler:

Chapter master+125
additional orbital bombardments+50
artificer armour+15
+1W +10
+1I +10
move +5
night +5
shrouded +5
jump pack +35
storm shield +15
bolters with special issue ammo +15
separate targeting +5
2 power falchion+40
shimering strike+50

Rag'norra Edral-The underdark duke. (Part of the Slaugth)

Cost: 500?

Type: Infantry

WS: 3 BS: 8 S: 5(6) T: 5 W: 4 I: 3 A: 5 LD: 10 Sv: 3+ 5++ FNP

Wargear: Shroud of Night, Shroud Cannon, The icon of darkness

Shroud of night: Shroud of the living dead: Like most of the Slaugth, Rag'norra likes to wear a hooded shroud that evokes the image of the grim reaper, but unlike many, Rag'norra' shroud is well armoured, granting him a 3+ save, and it additionally bends light around him, granting him the stealth and infiltration special rules. It has a weak shielding ability around him, granting him a five plus invulnerable save.

Shroud cannon: A strange form of staff that opens up with eight obsidian prongs surrounding the opening, this weapon fires blasts of shadow matter that entrap and ensnare it's victims while ripping them apart and sapping the very energy of life from them. In melee this is counted as a two handed power axe that confers 5+ rending as it renders matter brittle and easily broken as the dark energy saps their vitality.

when used to shoot it May be used as only one of the following per player turn.

Charged

Rng 48" St 10 Ap 1 Assault 1, Blast, twinliked, pinning, 5+rending

Normal

Rng 48" ST 8 AP 3 Assault 2, Blast, Twinlinked, pinning, 5+ rending,

Pulse

Rng 48' ST 6 AP 5 Assault 4, Blast, Twinlinked, pinning, 5+ rending

The Icon of darkness: A strange device on his back that creates a billowing shroud of shadows that hides nearby slaugth under the cover of darkness, providing him and friendly models with the protection of nightfighting rules within 24'. Additionally, due to the sheer difficulty of seeing through this deeper darkness, all friendly units within the effect count as having defensive grenades.

Special rules: Worm that walks, rapid regeneration, Life sucker, From the dark depths, light sensitive, acute senses, independent character


Worm that walks: Rag'Norra is composed of thousands of writhing grubs in a semi-humanoid shape, and thus counts as a swarm for the purposes of cover. However, he takes triple(!) damage from blast and template weapons due to the absolutely tiny size of the grubs that compose a Slaugth's body. He additionally does not gain the benefits of feel no pain against template weapons.

Rapid regeneration: At the start of each turn, Roll a d6 for each wound, on a roll of a 4+ he may recover that wound. If he has fallen, roll a D6 each turn, on a roll of a 1 he has been damaged too greatly to reform and is thus removed from the game permanently and no more rapid regeneration rolls may be taken, on a two, three, or four he remains out of play, on a roll of a five or six he reenters play with one wound. If removed from play with a template weapon he may not attempt to roll to reenter play.

Life sucker: Rag'Norra drains the vitality out of those he attacks, eagerly drinking in their life force, for every wound he deals in close combat, roll a d6, if he rolls a four or higher, he regains one wound, if already at maximum wounds, add one more to a maximum of ten.

From the Dark Depths: Rag'norra may grant two units the ability to outflank as his mastery of stealth allows him to ambush and surprise his foes. Additionally, he grants a 1+ bonus on reserve rolls, for such is his skill at bringing in the armies of the Slaugth secretly.

Light sensitive: If for any reason, Rag'norra's nightfighting is completely nullified, such as by searchlights, he takes an immediate -1 penalty on Initiative, Weapon Skill, Attack, leadership, and Ballistic skill stats as his senses are overwhelmed. Once the source of this nullification is eliminated, he may use his normal stats.

Fluff: Rag'Norra is an strong ally of Lord Kay-yuss, commanding a conven of thirty systems that have started to become ever more bold in the forty second millennium. A lover of darkness, Rag'Norra spends much of his time underground and usually only emerges at night. Even when he emerges, it is never without his icon of darkness, which helps extinguish the hated light. He is is capable of limitless and extreme cruelty, taking relish in the suffering of his prey before he devours them utterly. He particularly hates those who would dare bring the painful light to bear on him, and thus bears particular loathing for Humans, Tau, Eldar, and Orks, for they always bring such bright and flashing lights.

Whereas many of the other Slaugth relish in close combat, Rag'Norra prefers to fight at a range, where his murderous shroud cannon can deal catastrophic amounts of damage to his foes, this is perhaps born out of his relative slowness compared to other slaugth, so he has instead practiced his marksmanship, which is with few equals in the entire galaxy, it is a rare occasion indeed that he misses. Whether his target is on foot or in a vehicle, he is more than capable of eliminating them from a comfortable distance.

When he has been beaten in personal combat, it was almost always because his targets charged him and overwhelmed him in the field of melee, where his skill is lackluster at best compared to most other slaugth lords. But with the sudden rise of the Slaugth, who have begun to explosively expand out of their corner of the galaxy, he has been found leading their armies in their implacable march forward from the Calaxis sector and it's neighbours.

Recently, Dem'Orcus, Kay'Yuss, and Rag'Norra pooled their resources to attack a Chaos Forge World. The three's armies dropped out of their inertialess drives and quickly crippled the surprised dark mechanicus fleet before vomiting forth their hordes of Bio-constructs and mercenaries, lead by a fearsome core of Slaugth and their arcane techno-sorceries. Rag'norra himself ambushed the Blood Pact styled Armoured Regiment, unleashing harbinger tanks and ulugurstas upon the armoured regiment, while he himself came up from behind and took out an entire leman russ squadron, aiming at their vulnerable rear armour and puncturing them with the lethal shroud cannon.

When the World's native Titan legion came to eliminate Rag'norra's contingent, his forces melted in the shadows, allowing for Kay-yuss and his Obyrith bio-monstrosities and Slaugth Colossi to engage the titan legion in a furious battle that laid countless square miles of Forgeworld Hjar to waste while Rag'norra, under the cover of night, launched a surprise raid on the centre of administration and with a contingent of burrowing avolkias, got within Chaos Lord Varaxar's personal lair.

Spitting with rage, Varaxar attempted to lead a personal counter attack, spearheaded by his Chosen Terminator Bodyguard. Once again melting into the shadows, the Slaugth shrouded the entire area in noxious gas and darkness, incapacitating those marines who had chosen to forgo their helmets long enough for them to be picked off. Unleashing a horde of Slaugth zombies, the chaos marines and their daemons were occupied long enough for Varaxar and his ten chosen to become split off from the rest of their force.

Though the chosen easily slaughtered the slaugth zombies in their thousands, leaving a veritable mountain of corpses, and they themselves killed hundreds of bio-constructs, Varaxar's dark blade claiming the lives of no less than four ulurgurstas, they were unprepared for a charged shroud cannon blast that killed half of the chosen in a single shot, enwrapping them in tendrils of shadow matter that made them brittle and fragile.

The remaining chosen fired off their weapons, spitting curses and litanies of hatred as they attempted to find their targets, but one by one, they would be dragged off by Avolkias to be slaughtered until only Varaxar was left, having killed dozens of avolkias himself. Screaming his hatred and challenging Rag'norra to show himself, he was answered by a charged shroud cannon blast that finally ended his reign. With the death of Varaxar, the Slaugth overwhelmed the Chaos World, leaving an entire grand company of the Black Legion and their armies of daemons and heretics dead.

Darkbeak:

Cost 250?

Type: Jump infantry

WS: 6 BS: 3 S: 4 T: 4 W: 3 I: 7 A: 6 LD: 10 Sv: 4+, 5++

Wargear: twinlinked Heavy Rot gun, razor claws, thruster modulators, stealth shroud, meltabombs, assault grenades, defensive grenades

Twin Linked Heavy Rotgun

S5 AP4 Heavy 3 36' Autowounds on a five plus to hit with armour saves allowed, on a glancing or penetrating hit against vehicles, vehicles lose one AV point on that facing, if vehicle armor drops below zero, it is automatically destroyed.

Razorclaws: Darkbeak's claws and beak are razor sharp, capable of clawing through most matter with ease, they confer 4+ rending and rerolls to hit and wound and count as power weapons, as it has two talons and a beak of equal sharpness, it gains a bonus attack as if it had two CCWs. .

Thruster modulators: Darkbeak may roll a 3d6 for running checks and may take the highest result.

Stealth Shroud: Darkbeak's hide has been laced with special light absorbing meshes, giving it the benefit of the stealth and shrouded special rules rules. Additionally, those firing at dark beak find that it's body absorbs light around it, granting it personal nightfighting that is always on.

Special rules: Furious charge, Move through cover, Relentless, Rag'norra's favoured, counter attack, tank hunter, monster hunter, defend the master, regeneration, independent character, dive bomb.

Rag'norra's favoured, Darkbeak must always be taken with Rag'norra (but Rag'norra need not be taken with Darkbeak) and does not count against the force organization chart, when within 24' of Rag'norra, it becomes fearless and gains feel no pain, ignoring threat to both body and mind to defend it's master.

Defend the master: If Darkbeak would confer cover onto Rag'Norra, it's instinctive bond with Rag'norra improves the save granted by 1, and if it is within 6' it can automatically pass Look out sir checks to take a wound in Rag'Norra's stead . It cares nothing for it's own safety.

Dive bomb: Darkbeak may opt to start a turn as if it were swooping, despite not being a monstrous creature. It follows all such rules of swooping, but if it has been swooping for two turns consecutively, it may forgo shooting and halve it's base attacks to engage in a smash attack (as per the USR) rather than a vector strike against either fliers or ground units. If used against ground units, upon resolution, Darkbeak is treated as grounded until it's next turn where it may fly again.

Regeneration: For each wound on Darkbeak, roll a d6, on a roll of a five or higher, it recovers that wound, if removed from play, it may roll a d6 for every turn, on a roll of a six, it returns to play with one wound remaining. While not a Slaugth, the strange creature known only as Darkbeak shares a measure of their incredible powers of healing, recovering from even the most debilitating of injuries with surprising speed.

Fluff: Darkbeak is a mysterious creature that seems to combine the worst aspects of a vulture and a pterodactyl with just a dash of centipede into one entirely unwholesome creature. This being, with a wingspan of nearly twelve feet, stands some five feet tall, and can perch itself on the arm of the twelve foot high Rag'Norra or even upon it's shoulder should it choose to scrunch itself up enough. The being is never far apart from Rag'Norra unless it is specifically commanded by him to embark on a long distance mission, which it always attempts to the very best of it's ability.

Many who have attempted to slay Rag'Norra have noted the suicidal devotion it has to it's master, throwing itself in front of incoming attacks to defend the Slaugth from them with little regard for it's own safety, sometimes even going so far as to directly interpose itself in front of the shot. But for all of this, it is not a particularly durable creature, so many would question why it would be created as a body guard. The simple answer is that it is actually not a bodyguard, but more of an assassin.

Created to help Rag'Norra's noted deficiency in melee combat, the creature launches itself outwards to attack and assault foes in melee, slicing them into ribbons with it's extremely sharp claws, making full usage of a body that is significantly more powerful than it's slender form would suggest. When divebombing a foe, the being has a documented ability to carve open tanks, it's sharp claws latching onto the metal and ripping at it, carving open the top hatch and then quickly slicing the crew into ribbons.

A lictor brood that was once dispatched to assassinate Rag'Norra launched their ambush from within the cover of jungle, only for Darkbeak to quickly throw itself into the path of their flesh hooks, fouling their aim frequently and taking several hits in it's master's stead. Before it's body had even begun to regenerate, Darkbeak took to the skies and flung itself at the Lictors, divebombing them with incredible lethality. The first lictor's head was immediately crushed by a massive beakfirst slam that pulped it's skull. The second lictor followed soon after in death after having the talons of Darkbeak impaled through it's skull, and the final one was dispatched with a rapid barrage from the creature's rotguns.

Lt. 'Tweek wrote:

 Hive Fleet Lazarus wrote:
An upgrade to a character I had posted before, he's gone from captan to chapter master (I have some fluff but its still a bit rough so I won't make you suffer through it). My friend and I are having a discussion over points cost and I wanted to get some outside opinions. He looks a bit complicated but apart from the unique wargear, he doesn't really have many special abilities. Thanks again to pelicanforge for hidden hand


Shadow Guard Chapter Master Elistrin Mallik 385 pts
WS6 BS5 S4 T4 W4 I6 A3 Ld10 Sv2+

Wargear
Frag and Krak grenades
Advanced Spec Op Armour
Spec Op Jump Pack
Integrated Bolters
Two Power Falchions

Orbital Bombardment Relay-Being a fleet based chapter, the Elistrin can call upon a great amount of support from orbits strike cruisers and uses any opportunity to do so, calling down devestating strikes on the enemy.
The orbital bombardment relay follows the same rules for orbital bombardment as found in Codex:Space Marine. However it may be used up to three times a single game, though not in the same shooting phase

Advanced Spec Op Armour-A much more advanved version of the armour worn by the chapters first company veterans, the armour incorporates an advanced energy field similar to that of a storm shield. However the chapters techmarines recognized the need for the chapter master to have mobility and speed and instead integrated the field generator components into the body of the armour instead of a storm shield, allowing for the same level of protection but without compromising the strength or mobility of the armour.
The armour provides a 2+/3++ as well as the shrouded and night vision special rules.

Integrated Bolters-The armour also includes two integrated bolters, one on each arm. By linking them to Mallik's bionics, they can be fired while still fighting with melee weapons.
Counts as two bolters loaded with special issue ammo, they can be fired at different targets in the movement phase

Power Falchion Range- S+1 AP3 Melee, Specialist Weapon, Rending, Shimmering Strike

Special Rules
ATSKNF
Independent Character
Move through Cover
Night Vision

Shimmering Strike-the chapter masters metallic black power falchions weave a pattern of shadow nearly impossible for opponents to see through. If any enemy model wishes to assault or land attacks on the chapter master, they must halve their WS to do so, rounding down.

Hidden Hand: Mallik and any unit he joins may choose to outflank. However he does not enter from a table edge. Instead he treats one terrain piece chosen by the controlling players as one table edge and another terrain piece chosen by the opposing player as the other.

pricing

Spoiler:

Chapter master+125
additional orbital bombardments+50
artificer armour+15
+1W +10
+1I +10
move +5
night +5
shrouded +5
jump pack +35
storm shield +15
bolters with special issue ammo +15
separate targeting +5
2 power falchion+40
shimering strike+50

Umm, nice idea, but at first glance it's too much/
The drawback of a storm shield is the lack of attack, so I'm guessing the dual melee weapons are to take advantage of the extra attack
I don't entirely agree with the inv on regular armour, but I guess he's HQ so fair enough
Then I saw the bolters... they are...unfair. They shoot in the 'movement phase'? - so he can move 12" (with his jump-pack), while shooting spec issue ammo at two different targets, then call down orbital bombarbment, presumably to then charge gaining A+2 with the opponent halving their WS?
I really hope I misunderstood this
As it stands, 420 points, I think he needs to be sanded down a bit

 Hive Fleet Lazarus wrote:

Lt. 'Tweek wrote:

 Hive Fleet Lazarus wrote:
An upgrade to a character I had posted before, he's gone from captan to chapter master (I have some fluff but its still a bit rough so I won't make you suffer through it). My friend and I are having a discussion over points cost and I wanted to get some outside opinions. He looks a bit complicated but apart from the unique wargear, he doesn't really have many special abilities. Thanks again to pelicanforge for hidden hand


Shadow Guard Chapter Master Elistrin Mallik 385 pts
WS6 BS5 S4 T4 W4 I6 A3 Ld10 Sv2+

Wargear
Frag and Krak grenades
Advanced Spec Op Armour
Spec Op Jump Pack
Integrated Bolters
Two Power Falchions

Orbital Bombardment Relay-Being a fleet based chapter, the Elistrin can call upon a great amount of support from orbits strike cruisers and uses any opportunity to do so, calling down devestating strikes on the enemy.
The orbital bombardment relay follows the same rules for orbital bombardment as found in Codex:Space Marine. However it may be used up to three times a single game, though not in the same shooting phase

Advanced Spec Op Armour-A much more advanved version of the armour worn by the chapters first company veterans, the armour incorporates an advanced energy field similar to that of a storm shield. However the chapters techmarines recognized the need for the chapter master to have mobility and speed and instead integrated the field generator components into the body of the armour instead of a storm shield, allowing for the same level of protection but without compromising the strength or mobility of the armour.
The armour provides a 2+/3++ as well as the shrouded and night vision special rules.

Integrated Bolters-The armour also includes two integrated bolters, one on each arm. By linking them to Mallik's bionics, they can be fired while still fighting with melee weapons.
Counts as two bolters loaded with special issue ammo, they can be fired at different targets in the movement phase

Power Falchion Range- S+1 AP3 Melee, Specialist Weapon, Rending, Shimmering Strike

Special Rules
ATSKNF
Independent Character
Move through Cover
Night Vision

Shimmering Strike-the chapter masters metallic black power falchions weave a pattern of shadow nearly impossible for opponents to see through. If any enemy model wishes to assault or land attacks on the chapter master, they must halve their WS to do so, rounding down.

Hidden Hand: Mallik and any unit he joins may choose to outflank. However he does not enter from a table edge. Instead he treats one terrain piece chosen by the controlling players as one table edge and another terrain piece chosen by the opposing player as the other.

pricing

Spoiler:

Chapter master+125
additional orbital bombardments+50
artificer armour+15
+1W +10
+1I +10
move +5
night +5
shrouded +5
jump pack +35
storm shield +15
bolters with special issue ammo +15
separate targeting +5
2 power falchion+40
shimering strike+50

Umm, nice idea, but at first glance it's too much/
The drawback of a storm shield is the lack of attack, so I'm guessing the dual melee weapons are to take advantage of the extra attack
I don't entirely agree with the inv on regular armour, but I guess he's HQ so fair enough
Then I saw the bolters... they are...unfair. They shoot in the 'movement phase'? - so he can move 12" (with his jump-pack), while shooting spec issue ammo at two different targets, then call down orbital bombarbment, presumably to then charge gaining A+2 with the opponent halving their WS?
I really hope I misunderstood this
As it stands, 420 points, I think he needs to be sanded down a bit

yeah sorry I need to fix that. It should say "they can fire at two different targets in the shooting phase"
I'm following normal orbital bombardment rules so he has to forgo his shooting attack to use it and is not allowed to have moved. Its a large blast that scatters 2D6. He can charge after orbital bombardment but theres a chance it will completely miss or hit him. The only different thing is that he can call down three instead of one.
I think in terms of pricing, its just a lot of little things that add up, not so much the few bigs ones

raverrn wrote:
Chapter Master Hyrel Sven of the Eagles Ascendant

WS BS S T W I A LD Sv 5 6 4 4 3 5 - 10 3+/4++
Special Rules:
And They Shall Know No Fear, Combat Tactics, Independent Character, Relentless, Split Fire, Orbital Bombardment,

True Grit: Chapter Master Sven is so practiced in the use of his weapon that when he fires his Stormbolter he may make an additional attack with a combi-weapon or an Orbital Bombardment.

In addition, when Sven is locked in combat instead of striking blows he fires his ranged weapons, using his Weapon Skill to hit as normal, but the strength and AP values ofthe weapon. In practice, this will be 2 attacks at S4 AP5 and either 1 attack at S8 AP1 or D6 hits at S4 AP5. Sven may not use Orbital Bombardments while in melee.

Prepared: In any game that Sven's controlling player did not go first he may fire his Orbital Bombardment twice.

Scorched Earth: Sven may target objectives with his Orbital Strike - center the hole of the template over the objective and scatter it normally. If an objective is under the final position of Sven's Orbital Strike (even if he did not target it!), roll a D6. On a 1 or 2, the objective ceases to be mysterious and loses any revealed special properties. On a 3 or greater the objective is removed from the game entirely. For each objective removed in this manner Sven's controller scores two less victory points than normal (His allies are not pleased!).

Wargear: Power Armor, Iron Halo, Frag Grenades, Melta Bombs.

The Trinity: The Trinity is a expertly crafted combi-weapon, a Stormbolter with a built-in Flamer and Meltagun. Unlike a normal combi-weapon these may be fired more than once per battle, but the same attachment may not be fired twice in a row. When fired in melee the Flamer causes D6 automatic hits on one enemy unit in base contact.

~220pts

Lt. 'Tweek wrote:
Did I kill this forum?
Well, I got another idea... Witch Hunters!

Not settled on a profile, but they will probably be a variation of space marines

They will be immune to instant death caused by force weapons
They get +2 to Deny the Witch rolls
They never take a Ld test when shooting at a psyker, even if it's not the closest unit
However, they must always take a Ld test when shooting at a non-psyker
They'll also have Hatred (Psker) and Preferred Enemy (Psyker)

Any thoughts?

 Ovion wrote:
Need to get round to updating my Tau and remaining DE characters to 6th ed..
Maybe later xD
Or maybe I should take votes on who gets updated first!
To Do:
Dark Eldar:
Persephone - Queen of the Damned
Eh'khas-haedrine, Lord of Broken Spires
Drychera, Mistress of Flesh
Varjostaa, Lord of Shadows
Barney, Elder Warp Beast
Eth Olrion Reaver Champion

Master of Shards
Harlequin Solitaire
The Laughing God

Tau Empire:
O'R'ashmya - Commander Mourning Sorrow
Keeper of Twilight Aun'fio

BaconUprising wrote:

 Ovion wrote:
Need to get round to updating my Tau and remaining DE characters to 6th ed..
Maybe later xD
Or maybe I should take votes on who gets updated first!
To Do:
snip~

Can we please see your Solitaire and Eh'khas-haedrine, Lord of Broken Spires+Eth Olrion Reaver Champion asap I love DE special characters

 Kain wrote:
I'm thinking on whether to do an Ork, a Tyranid, IG, Space Marine, or another Slaugth character.

sorcerorofkhorne wrote:
ok no 2++ invun do you recon 230 points for him

 Mitranekh the Omniscient wrote:
BaconUprising you may want to rename Valossian Sythrac, GW used that in the DE codex and the two DE WD batreps. You don't have to but it's more original that way.

As for Zealos he's a bit like Lelith-just less kick-ass. But he is good don't get me wrong, just a bit killable (I don't know the DE book so I don't know all the wargear but he appears to lack an inv sv?)

CalasTyphon216 wrote:
Jartho Zeiss, Captain of the 3rd Company, Iron Knights Chapter

Captain Zeiss goes to war in the manner of the Terran knights of old. His company is famed for bike charges rivalling those of the White Scars.

245 points

Type: Bike (character)

Composition: 1 (unique)

WS7 BS5 S4 T5 W4 I5 A4 Ld10 Sv2+

Wargear: Artificer armor, power sword, bolt pistol, frag and krak grenades, iron halo space marine bike with twin-linked bolter

Vengeance: This is a long powered lance. Close combat weapon. S7 AP2 on the charge, cannot be used if didn't charge.

Special Rules: Independent Character, ATSKNF, Furious Charge, Combat Tactics

Bike Lord: Bike squads are troops.

Chapter Tactics: Replace Combat Tactics with Hit and Run