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SoCal

Those details look great to me.

Will the weapon be unique to her, or will it be available in Valkir or Black Widow kits?

   
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Looks great Mark. Simple but adds quite a bit. It'll also make it look better painted this way. I heartily approve.

Now you can resume your other duties of making me happy

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 Commander Cain wrote:
 NoseGoblin wrote:
alrighty then, I'll as some details to the barrel


This is why I love everything about Dreamforge, you listen to us common folk!


quoted for truth!


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The Void

 NoseGoblin wrote:
Barrel detail. I hope you like it because I am done with the revisions on Ada





Perfect on the barrel details. Really looks great Mark.


*twitches*

Urge... to.... paint... rising!

I beg of you sarge let me lead the charge when the battle lines are drawn
Lemme at least leave a good hoof beat they'll remember loud and long


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Here are a couple of screen grabs from a Skype conversation today. The picture quality is moderate but should give you an idea of the details they were able to capture. Wai Kee will be sending me a set of legs and I will get you some clearer shots once I have them in my grubby little hands

WGF is working on the pledge manager coding and we hope to have it available, barring any issues, by Thursday of next week. As you can see the production side is moving forward regardless of the pledge manager, so I would ask for your understanding as they work out the coding and test the pledge manager.




Any resemblance of this post to written English is purely coincidental.


 
   
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New gun looks great

Shouldnt she have a scopw, or at least iron sights? :p

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 Grundz wrote:
New gun looks great

Shouldnt she have a scopw, or at least iron sights? :p


No cheek weld for a scope or iron sights... The armor is too bulky to use sights. The sniper units have a flip up display on the side of the rifle; I could not fit that here due to the pose and how close it is to the chest, so it needs to be a sci-fi, techno babble explanation with some sort of holographic or retinal projection of a targeting system. You are welcome to kitbash whatever you want

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Shadeglass Maze

Barrel looks fantastic Mark, that's why we love you!! She looks awesome now

Pledge manager end of next week is perfect for me

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The Void

 NoseGoblin wrote:
 Grundz wrote:
New gun looks great

Shouldnt she have a scopw, or at least iron sights? :p


No cheek weld for a scope or iron sights... The armor is too bulky to use sights. The sniper units have a flip up display on the side of the rifle; I could not fit that here due to the pose and how close it is to the chest, so it needs to be a sci-fi, techno babble explanation with some sort of holographic or retinal projection of a targeting system. You are welcome to kitbash whatever you want


<3 I love how you've actually gone through and worked out if it's even possible to get a proper cheek weld with a rifle in this gear.

That's just awesome.

Hi I'm KM and I'm a DFG customer for life.

I beg of you sarge let me lead the charge when the battle lines are drawn
Lemme at least leave a good hoof beat they'll remember loud and long


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DR:90-SG+M+B+I+Pw40k12+ID+++A+++/are/WD-R+++T(S)DM+ 
   
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Gun looks super now Mark. That extra detail is perfect!

Those plastic parts... Wow, I knew they were supposed to be just as good as the resin kits but I always thought that they would come down in quality ever so slightly. But no! If anything details look a tad sharper due to the nice clean edges, this bodes very well for the rest of the model!

   
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 NoseGoblin wrote:
 Grundz wrote:
New gun looks great

Shouldnt she have a scopw, or at least iron sights? :p


No cheek weld for a scope or iron sights... The armor is too bulky to use sights. The sniper units have a flip up display on the side of the rifle; I could not fit that here due to the pose and how close it is to the chest, so it needs to be a sci-fi, techno babble explanation with some sort of holographic or retinal projection of a targeting system. You are welcome to kitbash whatever you want

Just you wait until i have that dev forum access tough guy!

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 Hulksmash wrote:
Looks great Mark. Simple but adds quite a bit. It'll also make it look better painted this way. I heartily approve.

Now you can resume your other duties of making me happy


Far from me to insult you or women, but you sound like a wife.


Automatically Appended Next Post:
As RiTides said: pledge manager will come in its own time, it's great to see that production is trundling along.

If "another company" wants to take notes, this is how to drum excitement up and get people frothing at the mouth for your product. Just sayin'

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 GamesWorkshop wrote:
And I would have gotten away with it too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!

 
   
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 NoseGoblin wrote:
Ada is near completion, just some hair details to add,
Enjoy!

Aren't you a little short for a stormtrooper?



Ada's rocking the badonkadonk.

THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!!! 
   
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Norristown, PA

Maybe I missed the infos, but for the ladies, will it be possible to mix them in with the normal troopers? So your squad can have both boys an girls? or will they just be a one special unit?

 
   
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[quote=MightyGodzilla

Ada's rocking the badonkadonk.


High waist and a heart shaped badunk


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 Necros wrote:
Maybe I missed the infos, but for the ladies, will it be possible to mix them in with the normal troopers? So your squad can have both boys an girls? or will they just be a one special unit?


I will try to outfit them with some variation. You need to get your tank killers to the target and to do that you need a good variation of weapons.


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 BobtheInquisitor wrote:
Those details look great to me.

Will the weapon be unique to her, or will it be available in Valkir or Black Widow kits?


To be honest, I have not decided.. I know they will have AT rifles but perhaps not the coil gun 'Capacitor Rifle', Ada is supposed to be something special


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 Grundz wrote:

Just you wait until i have that dev forum access tough guy!


I look forward to it

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I think he was asking if they could mix into a normal stormtrooper unit... but it is fantastic to hear they'll get a variety of weapons

I'll have a lot of leftover guns from the accessory sprues I think, so if the ladies' guns aren't too integral to the model, I can probably do some easy conversions (I imagine the arms won't be able to swap on directly since they might be shorter on the female models, but at least the guns themselves should be usable ).
   
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 Moopy wrote:
As a student studying 3d sculpting, I LOVE these updates! Keep them coming! If there's anyway we could see a wireframe of the the finished ones, I'd be in heaven.


No wire frames to show you, Rhino is a NURBS modeler, so no mesh is used.


Automatically Appended Next Post:
 RiTides wrote:
I think he was asking if they could mix into a normal stormtrooper unit... but it is fantastic to hear they'll get a variety of weapons

I'll have a lot of leftover guns from the accessory sprues I think, so if the ladies' guns aren't too integral to the model, I can probably do some easy conversions (I imagine the arms won't be able to swap on directly since they might be shorter on the female models, but at least the guns themselves should be usable ).


Ahh I see, yes, no reason men and woman would not serve in the same unit. As far as the conversion, the parts should work fine.


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Forgot to mention.... Ada will be a multi part plastic just like the Stormtrooper sets ENJOY!

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 NoseGoblin wrote:


No wire frames to show you, Rhino is a NURBS modeler, so no mesh is used.

How am I supposed to make a papercraft costume from THAT then?

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Shadeglass Maze

 NoseGoblin wrote:
Forgot to mention.... Ada will be a multi part plastic just like the Stormtrooper sets ENJOY!

YES.

This is awesome news

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Pennsylvania

 NoseGoblin wrote:
Barrel detail. I hope you like it because I am done with the revisions on Ada

<snip>


Ah, artists! Gotta have her standing while she shoots her suicide gun eh?

Seriously though, much better (still looks like a sausage, but a better kind of sausage... a merguez, perhaps, rather then a ballpark frank); but the female troopers are compatible with the upgrade arms for normal troops? Outstanding!


   
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 Buzzsaw wrote:
 NoseGoblin wrote:
Barrel detail. I hope you like it because I am done with the revisions on Ada

<snip>


Ah, artists! Gotta have her standing while she shoots her suicide gun eh?

Seriously though, much better (still looks like a sausage, but a better kind of sausage... a merguez, perhaps, rather then a ballpark frank); but the female troopers are compatible with the upgrade arms for normal troops? Outstanding!



LOL Buzzsaw..

It should be said that the arms will not look right, the female ST have smaller arms. but the accessories, packs etc. should work out fine. I will provide enough arms in the female box set to deal with having a nice selection to choose from.

Any resemblance of this post to written English is purely coincidental.


 
   
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SoCal

Is it too late to add more Adas?

   
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The Void

So... ahh I got a little excited.

Ada's just so awesome I HAD to write some fluff... word of warning this is probably in horrible need of an editor and to be beaten into line with the proper Eisenkern rank structure and the like. I ended up using terminology from the Bundeswehr/Herr because I guessed they'd be a little similar at least. I also made it kinda generic by necessity. I wasn't sure what to call a Keilerkopf APC with the Stuka zu Fuss upgrade for example, and I didn't want to use any of the factions specifically simply because we don't have enough information on them.


Spoiler:
1700 Hours
Ambush Position Gamma 7

This frozen canyon had to be one of the most miserable hellholes she'd ever had the pleasure of serving her people. She took a final drag of the rough tobacco, herr issue, probably less painful to get shot then keep smoking them but they all still managed. She surveyed the steep and craggy cliff faces below her, uninspiring and snow covered grey as far as the eye can see, trained markswoman's eye seeking the well hidden explosives packages at either end of what was about to be become a choke point... and a violent end to the enemy force.

A slightly out of breath female junior officer, the commander of one of the Black Widow squads, raced up behind her, knocking the Hauptmann from her slight revery and back in to the realities of command.

"Hauptmann Ada! sentries report that the enemy armored convoy is at the first picket!"

"Excellent Oberleutenant, pull the sentries back, get everyone in position and alert the vehicle crews, they'll fire their rocket barrage on my mark!"

"Jawohl!"

The lieutenant's heels clicked together as she turned to carry out her orders, a little formal for the field but the younger woman clearly didn't want to be seen as lacking in any way under the eyes of her famous superior. It's not every day one's unit was hand picked by a legendary anti-tank specialist for her ambush.

The plan was simple enough, an enemy armored column was moving up this pass. Intelligence had managed to confirm it after the capture of some senior officers last night by a unit of Valkir deep behind enemy lines. The remote detonated explosives the pioneers under Ada's had laid early would trap them, combined fire from her troops and the rocket artillery fire from their Keilerkopf would crush the enemy, assault troops would clean up any survivors once the smoke cleared.

Ada stretched and flicked the cigarette away, grinding it under her heel as she strode slowly towards her chosen fighting position. It offered a commanding view of the engagement zone, the prize pick of any marksman, so what if she hunted tanks instead of men? They were simply that much more challenging. The huntress grinned as she dropped into position bracing hard into the the stock of her capacitor rifle, wanting to feel the pressure even through her armor before settling into a more relaxed shooting stance. Her shrouded holographic sights pop up as she begins to regulate her breathing, the soft hum of the capacitor charging keeping her company as the second line of pickets report visual contact with the enemy and the sound of heavy vehicles began to fill the canyon.

She whispered into her head set "All troops, weapons tight, radio silence at this time. Engage on my order."

A chorus of "acknowledged" rang back in her ear as the officers and SNCOs on her command circuit set about a fast and quiet final check of their troopers. The dull thud of an enraged sergeant smacking one of his charge's helmets over a critical mistake of some kind echoing across the fighting holes for a soft second before the first heavy tank turned the corner. Seconds dragged by like minutes as the convoy moved deeper into the stretch of canyon that had been chosen as their graveyard, the lead vehicle finally crossing the invisible line that marked the point of no return. A silent cutting motion across her throat, directed at the Pioneer Feldwebl that was crouched down next to her was all it took. She tightened up on her rifle, scope fixed on what she knew had to be a weak point in the vehicle's armor, one breath, one half breath, hold, one breath, one half breath, hold. The rhythm was familiar and comforting, as easy to fall in to for her as others walk through out their day. A second of that routine was all it took, and she issued the command, sharp and terse.

"First rank! Fire!"

The canyon was filled with the sharp cracks of heavy anti-tank rifles, followed by the booming discharge of her own capacitor rifle as her practiced finger whispered across the trigger of the big rifle, breath caught in her throat at the exact instance of discharge. The recoil kicked Ada back, her dug in toes dragging furrows in the hardened earth. She recovered instantly, all ready on the radio.

"Second rank! Fire!"

The softer roars of panzerschreck rockets leaping from launchers, the sharp booms as they found their target. Ada moved back into her shooting position, lining up another target already. As she continued to work her radio, resenting the machine keeping her from her hunt.

"All forces, fire at will, Hauptmann Konnig, you may fire your bombardment when ready."

The crisp and taciturn vehicle commander responded at once, letting his force's missiles report the launch, the deep roar of the boosting vehicle launched heavy rockets filling the air as the heavy missiles arched down into the canyon, a rain of death and flame.

It ended quickly. The assault troops were not even needed to go into battle, no call to repel a counter attack, or clean up survivors came. The enemy simply died as they were bidden, the funeral pyres of their vehicles the only things left to mark them. Another job well done.

I beg of you sarge let me lead the charge when the battle lines are drawn
Lemme at least leave a good hoof beat they'll remember loud and long


SoB, IG, SM, SW, Nec, Cus, Tau, FoW Germans, Team Yankee Marines, Battletech Clan Wolf, Mercs
DR:90-SG+M+B+I+Pw40k12+ID+++A+++/are/WD-R+++T(S)DM+ 
   
Made in us
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Pennsylvania

 NoseGoblin wrote:
 Buzzsaw wrote:
 NoseGoblin wrote:
Barrel detail. I hope you like it because I am done with the revisions on Ada

<snip>


Ah, artists! Gotta have her standing while she shoots her suicide gun eh?

Seriously though, much better (still looks like a sausage, but a better kind of sausage... a merguez, perhaps, rather then a ballpark frank); but the female troopers are compatible with the upgrade arms for normal troops? Outstanding!



LOL Buzzsaw..

It should be said that the arms will not look right, the female ST have smaller arms. but the accessories, packs etc. should work out fine. I will provide enough arms in the female box set to deal with having a nice selection to choose from.


Heh, can I help it if she reminds me of certain foibles?

More seriously, so the arms are particular to the female STs, but they are compatible with the guns from, for example, the "Eisenkern Trooper Accessory Pack" (the panzerfaust, the SMGs and rifles)?

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2012/09/22 00:40:58


   
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 KalashnikovMarine wrote:
So... ahh I got a little excited.

Ada's just so awesome I HAD to write some fluff... word of warning this is probably in horrible need of an editor and to be beaten into line with the proper Eisenkern rank structure and the like. I ended up using terminology from the Bundeswehr/Herr because I guessed they'd be a little similar at least. I also made it kinda generic by necessity. I wasn't sure what to call a Keilerkopf APC with the Stuka zu Fuss upgrade for example, and I didn't want to use any of the factions specifically simply because we don't have enough information on them.


Spoiler:
1700 Hours
Ambush Position Gamma 7

This frozen canyon had to be one of the most miserable hellholes she'd ever had the pleasure of serving her people. She took a final drag of the rough tobacco, herr issue, probably less painful to get shot then keep smoking them but they all still managed. She surveyed the steep and craggy cliff faces below her, uninspiring and snow covered grey as far as the eye can see, trained markswoman's eye seeking the well hidden explosives packages at either end of what was about to be become a choke point... and a violent end to the enemy force.

A slightly out of breath female junior officer, the commander of one of the Black Widow squads, raced up behind her, knocking the Hauptmann from her slight revery and back in to the realities of command.

"Hauptmann Ada! sentries report that the enemy armored convoy is at the first picket!"

"Excellent Oberleutenant, pull the sentries back, get everyone in position and alert the vehicle crews, they'll fire their rocket barrage on my mark!"

"Jawohl!"

The lieutenant's heels clicked together as she turned to carry out her orders, a little formal for the field but the younger woman clearly didn't want to be seen as lacking in any way under the eyes of her famous superior. It's not every day one's unit was hand picked by a legendary anti-tank specialist for her ambush.

The plan was simple enough, an enemy armored column was moving up this pass. Intelligence had managed to confirm it after the capture of some senior officers last night by a unit of Valkir deep behind enemy lines. The remote detonated explosives the pioneers under Ada's had laid early would trap them, combined fire from her troops and the rocket artillery fire from their Keilerkopf would crush the enemy, assault troops would clean up any survivors once the smoke cleared.

Ada stretched and flicked the cigarette away, grinding it under her heel as she strode slowly towards her chosen fighting position. It offered a commanding view of the engagement zone, the prize pick of any marksman, so what if she hunted tanks instead of men? They were simply that much more challenging. The huntress grinned as she dropped into position bracing hard into the the stock of her capacitor rifle, wanting to feel the pressure even through her armor before settling into a more relaxed shooting stance. Her shrouded holographic sights pop up as she begins to regulate her breathing, the soft hum of the capacitor charging keeping her company as the second line of pickets report visual contact with the enemy and the sound of heavy vehicles began to fill the canyon.

She whispered into her head set "All troops, weapons tight, radio silence at this time. Engage on my order."

A chorus of "acknowledged" rang back in her ear as the officers and SNCOs on her command circuit set about a fast and quiet final check of their troopers. The dull thud of an enraged sergeant smacking one of his charge's helmets over a critical mistake of some kind echoing across the fighting holes for a soft second before the first heavy tank turned the corner. Seconds dragged by like minutes as the convoy moved deeper into the stretch of canyon that had been chosen as their graveyard, the lead vehicle finally crossing the invisible line that marked the point of no return. A silent cutting motion across her throat, directed at the Pioneer Feldwebl that was crouched down next to her was all it took. She tightened up on her rifle, scope fixed on what she knew had to be a weak point in the vehicle's armor, one breath, one half breath, hold, one breath, one half breath, hold. The rhythm was familiar and comforting, as easy to fall in to for her as others walk through out their day. A second of that routine was all it took, and she issued the command, sharp and terse.

"First rank! Fire!"

The canyon was filled with the sharp cracks of heavy anti-tank rifles, followed by the booming discharge of her own capacitor rifle as her practiced finger whispered across the trigger of the big rifle, breath caught in her throat at the exact instance of discharge. The recoil kicked Ada back, her dug in toes dragging furrows in the hardened earth. She recovered instantly, all ready on the radio.

"Second rank! Fire!"

The softer roars of panzerschreck rockets leaping from launchers, the sharp booms as they found their target. Ada moved back into her shooting position, lining up another target already. As she continued to work her radio, resenting the machine keeping her from her hunt.

"All forces, fire at will, Hauptmann Konnig, you may fire your bombardment when ready."

The crisp and taciturn vehicle commander responded at once, letting his force's missiles report the launch, the deep roar of the boosting vehicle launched heavy rockets filling the air as the heavy missiles arched down into the canyon, a rain of death and flame.

It ended quickly. The assault troops were not even needed to go into battle, no call to repel a counter attack, or clean up survivors came. The enemy simply died as they were bidden, the funeral pyres of their vehicles the only things left to mark them. Another job well done.


Well done! I loved it.

Sooo much better than my writing style, you painted a great mental image as I read it.


"More seriously, so the arms are particular to the female STs, but they are compatible with the guns from, for example, the "Eisenkern Trooper Accessory Pack" (the panzerfaust, the SMGs and rifles)? :

Correct, the shoulders are thinner and ams smaller but the weapons will be the same size... as they should be


Automatically Appended Next Post:
 BobtheInquisitor wrote:
Is it too late to add more Adas?


Nope.. what you will have, is basically an open shopping cart to pick and choose but there will still be a limit of 5 Ada to each backer ( 1free 4 optional adds.)

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2012/09/22 00:51:42


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Dankhold Troggoth






Shadeglass Maze

 NoseGoblin wrote:
 BobtheInquisitor wrote:
Is it too late to add more Adas?


Nope.. what you will have, is basically an open shopping cart to pick and choose but there will still be a limit of 5 Ada to each backer ( 1free 4 optional adds.)

Excellent, just what I was hoping for (regarding the cart/manager)
   
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The Void

 NoseGoblin wrote:
 KalashnikovMarine wrote:
So... ahh I got a little excited.

Ada's just so awesome I HAD to write some fluff... word of warning this is probably in horrible need of an editor and to be beaten into line with the proper Eisenkern rank structure and the like. I ended up using terminology from the Bundeswehr/Herr because I guessed they'd be a little similar at least. I also made it kinda generic by necessity. I wasn't sure what to call a Keilerkopf APC with the Stuka zu Fuss upgrade for example, and I didn't want to use any of the factions specifically simply because we don't have enough information on them.


Spoiler:
1700 Hours
Ambush Position Gamma 7

This frozen canyon had to be one of the most miserable hellholes she'd ever had the pleasure of serving her people. She took a final drag of the rough tobacco, herr issue, probably less painful to get shot then keep smoking them but they all still managed. She surveyed the steep and craggy cliff faces below her, uninspiring and snow covered grey as far as the eye can see, trained markswoman's eye seeking the well hidden explosives packages at either end of what was about to be become a choke point... and a violent end to the enemy force.

A slightly out of breath female junior officer, the commander of one of the Black Widow squads, raced up behind her, knocking the Hauptmann from her slight revery and back in to the realities of command.

"Hauptmann Ada! sentries report that the enemy armored convoy is at the first picket!"

"Excellent Oberleutenant, pull the sentries back, get everyone in position and alert the vehicle crews, they'll fire their rocket barrage on my mark!"

"Jawohl!"

The lieutenant's heels clicked together as she turned to carry out her orders, a little formal for the field but the younger woman clearly didn't want to be seen as lacking in any way under the eyes of her famous superior. It's not every day one's unit was hand picked by a legendary anti-tank specialist for her ambush.

The plan was simple enough, an enemy armored column was moving up this pass. Intelligence had managed to confirm it after the capture of some senior officers last night by a unit of Valkir deep behind enemy lines. The remote detonated explosives the pioneers under Ada's had laid early would trap them, combined fire from her troops and the rocket artillery fire from their Keilerkopf would crush the enemy, assault troops would clean up any survivors once the smoke cleared.

Ada stretched and flicked the cigarette away, grinding it under her heel as she strode slowly towards her chosen fighting position. It offered a commanding view of the engagement zone, the prize pick of any marksman, so what if she hunted tanks instead of men? They were simply that much more challenging. The huntress grinned as she dropped into position bracing hard into the the stock of her capacitor rifle, wanting to feel the pressure even through her armor before settling into a more relaxed shooting stance. Her shrouded holographic sights pop up as she begins to regulate her breathing, the soft hum of the capacitor charging keeping her company as the second line of pickets report visual contact with the enemy and the sound of heavy vehicles began to fill the canyon.

She whispered into her head set "All troops, weapons tight, radio silence at this time. Engage on my order."

A chorus of "acknowledged" rang back in her ear as the officers and SNCOs on her command circuit set about a fast and quiet final check of their troopers. The dull thud of an enraged sergeant smacking one of his charge's helmets over a critical mistake of some kind echoing across the fighting holes for a soft second before the first heavy tank turned the corner. Seconds dragged by like minutes as the convoy moved deeper into the stretch of canyon that had been chosen as their graveyard, the lead vehicle finally crossing the invisible line that marked the point of no return. A silent cutting motion across her throat, directed at the Pioneer Feldwebl that was crouched down next to her was all it took. She tightened up on her rifle, scope fixed on what she knew had to be a weak point in the vehicle's armor, one breath, one half breath, hold, one breath, one half breath, hold. The rhythm was familiar and comforting, as easy to fall in to for her as others walk through out their day. A second of that routine was all it took, and she issued the command, sharp and terse.

"First rank! Fire!"

The canyon was filled with the sharp cracks of heavy anti-tank rifles, followed by the booming discharge of her own capacitor rifle as her practiced finger whispered across the trigger of the big rifle, breath caught in her throat at the exact instance of discharge. The recoil kicked Ada back, her dug in toes dragging furrows in the hardened earth. She recovered instantly, all ready on the radio.

"Second rank! Fire!"

The softer roars of panzerschreck rockets leaping from launchers, the sharp booms as they found their target. Ada moved back into her shooting position, lining up another target already. As she continued to work her radio, resenting the machine keeping her from her hunt.

"All forces, fire at will, Hauptmann Konnig, you may fire your bombardment when ready."

The crisp and taciturn vehicle commander responded at once, letting his force's missiles report the launch, the deep roar of the boosting vehicle launched heavy rockets filling the air as the heavy missiles arched down into the canyon, a rain of death and flame.

It ended quickly. The assault troops were not even needed to go into battle, no call to repel a counter attack, or clean up survivors came. The enemy simply died as they were bidden, the funeral pyres of their vehicles the only things left to mark them. Another job well done.


Well done! I loved it.

Sooo much better than my writing style, you painted a great mental image as I read it.


Glad you enjoyed it, if you want to use to for real I'll clean it up, run it past my elite team of editing ninjas and send it to you.

Edit:

And yesssssss very excited to get to the pledge manager, hopefully my pay gets worked out shortly!

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I beg of you sarge let me lead the charge when the battle lines are drawn
Lemme at least leave a good hoof beat they'll remember loud and long


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 NoseGoblin wrote:
Barrel detail. I hope you like it because I am done with the revisions on Ada


While not amazing, it's still much better. (I'd rather give honest feedback than be a fanboi and blow smoke up your arse.) (note, I'm not suggesting that anyone who actually does love the new barrels is nothing but a fanboi.)


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 Commander Cain wrote:

This is why I love everything about Dreamforge, you listen to us common folk!


Also, this.

Make no mistake, It's a big part of the reason I went back in after dropping to $1.


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 NoseGoblin wrote:

It should be said that the arms will not look right, the female ST have smaller arms. but the accessories, packs etc. should work out fine. I will provide enough arms in the female box set to deal with having a nice selection to choose from.


Will they have some weapon options (SMG/Rifles/LMG?) or just those antitank rifles?


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 MightyGodzilla wrote:
 NoseGoblin wrote:
Ada is near completion, just some hair details to add,
Enjoy!

Aren't you a little short for a stormtrooper?



Ada's rocking the badonkadonk.


So is Hans!

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So is Hans!

That's what I was going to say

Although it's augmented muscle-type structure in the armor, right, not skin tight. But at least it's similar for both the male and female models
   
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 scipio.au wrote:
It should be said that the arms will not look right, the female ST have smaller arms. but the accessories, packs etc. should work out fine. I will provide enough arms in the female box set to deal with having a nice selection to choose from.


Yep, I agree… not fantastic but I just don’t have time to tweak it any more, she is a phase 1 shipping so the model needed to be at the manufacturer yesterday. Luckily I will have more time for the other new models, but anything new in stage 1 was a major time issue





"Will they have some weapon options (SMG/Rifles/LMG?) or just those antitank rifles? "

I will try to outfit them with some variation. You need to get your tank killers to the target and to do that you need a good variation of weapons.

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