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Asgeirr Darkwolf wrote:Hmm... sounds good. I kinda like the idea of night bringer... but that's a C'tan god, so....

You seem to write basically alot (not to be critical ).

Well Its either that or night stalker. And I don't think people want to call my 22nd company the stalkers......
my 8th company i really need aid in.

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Hey guys I really need help with the 22nd company lore. Can any of you lovelys give me a good idea?
I'm fresh out. As I Have to take the plan test tomorrow

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Elephant Graveyard

Stopped a civil war on planet x by uing pin point assisination and lightning deployment to intimidate the rebels into surrender?
Trapped on a newly controlled Tau planet after their ship/s are forced out of orbit (as in the Tau now control it) they begin a several month/year long campaign of sabotage, assassination and lightning raids before confronting the occupying forces and easily defeating the under-strength garrison.

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purplefood wrote:Stopped a civil war on planet x by uing pin point assisination and lightning deployment to intimidate the rebels into surrender?
Trapped on a newly controlled Tau planet after their ship/s are forced out of orbit (as in the Tau now control it) they begin a several month/year long campaign of sabotage, assassination and lightning raids before confronting the occupying forces and easily defeating the under-strength garrison.

That could work accept right now they are in the grimnar systems. Plus That could be the 29th company.

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Sure use it however i have sort of given up remembering where the hell all your companies are and what they do but you know so you sort it out

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
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The worlds of the Storm Crusaders.
The Storm Crusaders have 7 systems under their control. Unlike the ultramarines, the storm crusaders give any human a choice to join the Crusaders, as well as the choice to join the Guardsmen. The Storm Crusaders value free will above all things. The Storm Crusaders worlds are all beautiful in nature, they are balanced, and the citizens of the Drancorian systems all pay their dues. The worlds are not overpopulated, they are indeed devouted to the Imperium. The Most well known and smallest system is the homesystem of Drancoris. The very center of the Storm Crusaders. Drancoris is surronded by 12 moons. Each moon has a colony. And this is where the 12 compainies of the Crusader's companies come from. Though as large as Luna each moon has been terraformed from the dark age of technology. On each moon is a 5 Cities and a Single fortress, and an element. For example Kassis the world of water has large cities under the vast seas, and not only that but the fortress monestary belongs to the 17th company known as the Aqua company, a company that specializes in under water combat, and boarding actions, the 17th is also known for it's captain, Captain Alvaro, the son of Calnor Alrnia. Drancoris the planet itself in the heart of the 12 moons is the fortress monestary, Ashera, and the city of Falos which is located around the monestary. The City of Falos is full of busy work and orgainized crime is a rarity, the City also has a small mechinacum fortress. The City of falos is the center of success and business trading. The Monestary of the Storm Crusaders, Ashera, is located inside the mountain of Mal. The City of falos is 1000 miles away from this mountain. Mt. Mal is a wondrous site to behold as the mountain has only ever been attacked 4 times in its current history. The Fortress monestary itself has a vast network of interlocking somewhat dungeon simply refered to as the Vault.
The Vault is one of the largest Imperial Structure in the ghoul stars. It dwarfs the ultramarines Fortress Monestary, it contains technologies long lost to mankind, the Storm Crusaders hold a brother hood with the Blood Ravens chapter, who both are considered to have a love with all ancient works of alien races, and humanity. The Storm Crusaders have a technological wonder that they only used in the times of great need. The weapon they have used is a weapon that can pierce the armor of a Battle Barge with a single shot. This weapon is a trophy of an alien race during the second war of Drancoris. The Crusaders have sealed parts of the vault to ensure no one outside of the chapter may enter. Also located inside the Vault, is the mutants, where an eternal war between the Guardians and the Mutants are always being fought.
The Crusader's Spire, is the very center of the monastery, it is where the Storm Crusaders High Council meets for all troubles of the chapter, and also its future.
The other systems are vast and almost glorious, stature, the main agricultural producer is the system of Demeter.
Demeter is a system that is a farming lands, where some of the most well trained Guardsmen are produced and trained.
Another system is the Mechaincum and Inqusitional forces, this system is an Inqusitioral fortress for watching the ghoul stars and the Tyranid hive fleets. The system, itself is relatively peaceful as the system is almost barren except for the Inqusitoral planet and the Mechanicum world. All of which provide the Storm Crusaders aide in the Wars the fight in. The Mechanicum has sworn an debt of life, the Mechanicum has sworn to aid the crusaders in their struggle against the enemies of the imperium.
The 4th system is the Nejis system. This ancient system is a shadow of its former self, as it was decimated by a Chaos Renegade force. It was once the very heart of guardsmen, and Crusader recruitment.
(Alrighty I Think i have hammered enough of you guys with my lore. Anyway I hope it is good, as this is the 15th time i have edited this system lore.)

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Asherian Command wrote:I need an idea of how to put together my Thunderhawk O.o


scrape that awful hasbro clone wars paint job off

cut the deck and back haft off and magnetize you a land raider a rhino and fab a detachable troop compartment out of some manufactorum slabs

on the front laser cannon mounts drill some holes to mount magnetized multi las and storm bolter and for the wing gun pods you could leave em empty or you could mount some dakka on em.....

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whalemusic360 wrote:Yeah, I got lost too. When I think tony, I literally think of that nid as you.
 
   
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vignor wrote:
Asherian Command wrote:I need an idea of how to put together my Thunderhawk O.o


scrape that awful hasbro clone wars paint job off

cut the deck and back haft off and magnetize you a land raider a rhino and fab a detachable troop compartment out of some manufactorum slabs

on the front laser cannon mounts drill some holes to mount magnetized multi las and storm bolter and for the wing gun pods you could leave em empty or you could mount some dakka on em.....

Yeah. That could work.
Anyway. I kinda want to expand more on my chapter lore right now. But i can't think of anything. Last thing i need to do is turn up like the ultramarines *shivers*\
And look how they turn up in Dark Lord Sean's lore! Evil!
Yep always new Ultramarines were evil!
Plus ever since malnar is back If the imperium fails my chapter will be ok!


Striking from the skies....
The Repentor Captain of the 10th Company was not use to seeing a Storm Crusader before nor had he ever thought they were actually as immense as the stories had said. It seems that not all stories are false. But these Crusaders show aspects not yet seen. The Repentor Captain Lokis wore black armor that the Crusaders immediately Recognized. The Repentor Captain Lokis was an imposing image but compared to a crusader, he was a folk hero. As the Crusaders were legendary to all chapters but the Ultramarines. The Crusader, that stood looking down at the holofield with the other imperial commanders was imposing, and wore an Eagle Like Helmet. The Crusader looked up. "You have a Problem with me Repentor?"
Lokis shook off his fear of the Crusader. "No, but who are you? You do not seem to be a Captain."
The Crusader laughed, his laugh almost threatening and many of the Imperial Guard Commanders shook at this but one of the Other crusaders in the room. Smiled, the younger crusader had blondish hair stricken with a brown eyes, in no doubt he had been newly inducted into the Captaincy. The Crusader who was laughing spoke finally.
"Good Observation, you have the inspection of the Blood Ravens, I am Calnor Alrnia, I am the Grand Templar of the Storm Crusaders, and you must be Lokis, the captain of the Repentors? I have heard of you from Inquisitor Cortez, do not worry my friend with my experience this war with the Green Skins will be quick and easy."
The Repentor captain felt like as if a land raider had just hit him. He Shook the feelings of awe off him.
"Uhh.. It is good to finally meet you, Calnor Alrnia, you are legend among even my chapter. It is finally good to meet the Daemon's Bane."
The Repentor Captain had meant those words. His eyes darted towards the Crusader Captain who still smiled, the youth was filled with loyalty and authority.
The Repentor Captain spoke. "Who is the young Astrates in the corner, if you don't mind my inquiry?"
Calnor Turned and nodded to the Captain.
The Crusader spoke. "I am Captain Calick, of the 2nd company, don't let my looks fool you. I am much older than I appear, I am probably older than you."
The Repentor couldn't believe what he was hearing. "In no doubt you must be a hundred fifty?"
Calick shook his head. "I am around 350 years old."
The Eepentor had rarely asked the question of how old you are. It seemed like an insult now. He spoke.
"My apologizes, Captain."
Calick smiled, {gloating fool.}
"Commanders!" Spoke Calnor from his helmet. "There are reports of Chaos War bands arriving in the area. Repentors, Blood Angels, Dark Angels, Guardsmen, and my 2nd company! Prepare for battle. The Enemy is at our doorstep. We must ensure the World of Grimnar does not fall. For without it the Gateway to the ghoul stars will be open! For Imperium, For the Emperor, For Mankind, For The People of Grimnar!"
The Commanders in the room nodding their approval. Calick nodded. Calick immediately went onto the vox and started to order his forces into positions and to aid in the civilian evacuation. Well Organized Astrates Honor Guard entered the room all bearing the marks of the Crusaders. Their Image was almost fearful to all those there. The Honor Guard were here to take Calnor to lead from the front.
Calnor spoke.
"Repentor, And Dark Angel Captains, I leave you the overall command, I must kill the Daemon Prince and I must press forward to the Governmental Building which is under Heavy Orc control. I am off." Calnor Alrnia turned and left the room.

All out war.....

The Thunder Hawk sped over the Sergeants head it roared as it flew over. The Sergeants ears refocused. All around him fallen Crusaders, and knights littered around him. His right leg was oozing black blood, and his face was burnt, all over him were dents and damage beyond repair. Drearily He pushed himself up, his weight almost giving, to the shells that had been falling from heavy artillery. He eyes darted around as bullets pierced through guardsmen armor, and Crusaders were devoured by Daemonic creatures. His sword arm was still strong.
A Champion of Khorne charged at him with ferocity. All sense of bracing for impact were thrown away as he held firm with his glittering sword, and charged the foul beast. He ignored the pain of his leg and face. Throwing himself at the creature, he instinctively leapt over the Daemon and disemboweled its head from its shoulders.
His short but victorious success was short lived as a Daemon Prince appeared and was slaughtering through squads of guardsmen in the valley below. The once glittering city of Grimnar was now a molten slag. As Repentors, Storm Crusaders, Guardsmen, Dark Angels, and blood angels fought against a Orcish horde and a Chaos Warband.
But from the skies he saw a signal of the Iron wolf. He smiled.
He spoke into the vox. "2nd Company! The Iron Wolves have come! The Grimnar system shall be retaken!"
All around him the Astrates Cryed with a cheer of victory. The 2nd company had done its job. Now the 10th, 22nd and the 1st had arrived with bulk of their forces.
……………….
The First Drop pod hit the ground with a loud thud. Then came a Tactical Squad all bearing the markings of the 10th company. The Sergeant drew a sword and his plasma pistol ready for action. Other Drop pods landed nearby. Soon Thunderhawks dropped rhinos and transports. Giving the 10th more firepower to muster. The vox was busy with activity. The 10th’s captain, Loken, was ready for action.
Loken spoke into the vox.
“Brothers, the enemy will be here soon, we must guard this place from the forces of chaos, and the Green skins. Lucius and Lucifier get your tactical squads into position in those buildings we are building a kill zone here. Devil’s Fool, I need you to teleport when we are ready. Razorback squadron form a ring around this area. Malick use your psychic abilities to communicate to the other Libarians and tell them to set up accordingly.”
A flux of yes my lords came through the vox.
“Captain Loken, I shall peform this communication, I believe the Alpha Squadron is sending a Assissantion Squad to aid us.”
Loken spoke into his helmet. “Good, the more Brothers we have to aid us, the better. Iron Wolves! Let us be their iron death! Honored Brother Jalos Use your jump infantry to scout and to warn of us of any other threats!”
“Yes my lord.” Jalos saluted and his jump pack roared to life. The dust pumped up as he jumped into the air. A few Vanguard’s joined him, they followed accordingly.
The Red skies of Grimnar were once spectacular to see, once they had brought many pilgrims to this world, but as like all things that face time, all must change. The skies above grimnar were now an emerald as toxic fumes from dying engine core reactors had made the planet almost barren to the look from space. Its once green woods were blackened and the once great city of Grimnar’s Capital Helion which once had brilliant white marble was bronzed, and dirty. Thousands of dead corpses littered the streets of Helion as the Planetary Defense Force had fought a losing battle against the Chaos Cultists who had been in the Planetary Defense Forces very own ranks. None could stand to the Wraith of Khorne and Slaaneesh, now the Storm Crusaders had returned to this world, bearing with them the Same man who had wiped it from existence 500 years ago. It had returned from the warp and it was resettled.

“As a Crusader all are suspicious to our ways, but the real fools are the ones that claim that we do not exist. They are more than just fools, they fear us. They are cowards. Beware the suspicious civilian as they will manipulate all that we prize!” –Librarian Captain Raphael Michael of the 18th company.

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Ok i more or less like your stuff but please spell check it more.

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"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
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"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
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purplefood wrote:Ok i lmore or less like your stuff but please spell check it more.

I Will. Just had to type it in a hurry.

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Asherian Command wrote:
purplefood wrote:Ok i lmore or less like your stuff but please spell check it more.

I Will. Just had to type it in a hurry.


Good because if i'm honest that was painful to read... well obviously not painful but you get what i mean.

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in us
Legendary Master of the Chapter





Chicago, Illinois

purplefood wrote:
Asherian Command wrote:
purplefood wrote:Ok i lmore or less like your stuff but please spell check it more.

I Will. Just had to type it in a hurry.


Good because if i'm honest that was painful to read... well obviously not painful but you get what i mean.

Yeah I know. It was hard for me to read too. But considering i'm trying to finnally print this piece of literature that I have been wanting to get out of my mind for weeks. Its been edited it is alot better than before. But still Yeah i'm no god of writters. I'm still getting use to it. But I write ALOT

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Breaking Something Valuable

Please speel check- its hard to wade through grammar mistakes, takes away the fun. Great fulff though.

You can always call the company Night Hunters... then they'd be hunters, not stalkers. Just don't say haunters, that name is FOR KONRAD CURZE!

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Asgeirr Darkwolf wrote:Please speel check- its hard to wade through grammar mistakes, takes away the fun. Great fulff though.

You can always call the company Night Hunters... then they'd be hunters, not stalkers. Just don't say haunters, that name is FOR KONRAD CURZE!

the 22nd's company name is the Angels of Fate. The Captain is named Night Hunter.
Sorry I suck at grammar just ask my teachers.

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call em gengar then "." the evolved version of haunter and ghastly

mwnciboo said 40K Tours just because the Galaxy's Burning doesn't mean you can't enjoy the heat

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vignor wrote:call em gengar then "." the evolved version of haunter and ghastly

Lol. I see what you did there!

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Hey guys I've been going around the interwebs. And lookie what i found!
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003DL1TTY/ref=asc_df_B003DL1TTY1285694?smid=A2FFTRJOJOPE5H&tag=pgmp-1536-95-20&linkCode=asn&creative=395129&creativeASIN=B003DL1TTY
And minus the sangurinary guard i can buy the death company and assualt squad for 45$! Now that is a saver XD
Anyway As I am about to hit 2000! I will rank off my chapter names, colors, and pervious histories in order to current times!


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"Do not question me, for I can tell you all the secrets you hold dear to your heart. Do not judge my powers, for I shall rip your soul from your body. To question my Authority is to question the law, remember this guardsmen, for it shall be your last thought." Guardian Zacharia.

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Alrighty so Today I have been working on some of my eldar lists. But I cannot show right now. But as promised I said I will get up some lore surronding the Storm Crusaders Training.
Well here it is.

The Storm Crusaders Training
The Storm Crusaders train almost every day. Their training includes fake battlefield training, in where Battle Brothers, and Crusaders are taught how to fight in close quarters, firing weaponry, and how to successfully retrieve targets with minumial loses. This training is also given to the Imperial Regiments in the Drancorian systems, as the Planet of Nejis now provides suitable training for survivalists, and how to surivive against the creatures of nejis as well. Also the Planet of Drancoris's vast jungles are so dangerous, that are creatures that dwarf the krakens of Fenris. The jungle of Drancoris is nickname named Hell's Kurast. As a recurit of the Storm Crusaders 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th and 6th, you are expected to of gone into the Jungle's of Kurast with 9 other battle brothers. But you are given 2 clips all of which are filled with 50 bullets each. The jungles itself are filled with a Creature called the Draconian, and the Clawed Fiend. Which is known for tearing through Carapace armor with only 3 strikes. This also tests the aspect of Teamwork, survivability, use of weaponry, and decision making. In the Storm Crusaders a Recruit is expected to come back with at least 1 surviving member. It is rare for even 3 recruits to survive. The only Battle Brother to return with all 9 is Calnor Alrnia and Val. All of which were veterans of a long forgotten war.
The Storm Crusaders regularly retrieve recruits every 3 years. Each Recruit is given a choice to join the chapter, if he does not accept, he may stay, if he accepts, the recruit is immediately taken to the nearest Company or Chapter Fortress to be given the Trials. Their are at least 12 Trials. The Trial of Choice is the 1st which is a yes or no question. The 2nd Trial the Trial of endurance is where a recruit must run from one mountain valley to the very top of the Fortress. The 3rd Trial is the Trial of Power, a Trial in which you must fight a unarmed against a wounded Clawed Fiend. The 4th Trial is the Trials of Honor, in where you are given mêlée weapon of your choice and you must best one of the recruits in battle, if you kill your opponent you allowed access but if you spare his life you are allowed access. (This is the Trial to see if you have psychic potentials) The 5th Trial is the Trial of Skill, where you must go through the dungeons underneath the fortress and come out alive. The 6th Trial is the Trial of Hope, in where a Recruit must learn how to use resourcefulness on a survivability using only a knife and a single pistol with one clip. The 7th Trial is the Trial of the Crusader, where you are given a weapon and you fight a mutant force with a squad assigned to you. Depending upon how many soldiers you lose you are allowed to pass. needless to say at least half the recruits die on this test.
The 8th Trial is the Trial of torture, where your mind is broken down and your mind is wiped of your past before the Trials. You must be able not to tell the chaplain your chapter no. and you must repeat a single phrase "The Emperor is my Guardain." Until the chaplain sees you fit. The 9th Trial in which case is the hardest is the indicition of the organs. In where you are given organs to boost you up for the next test. Weak and almost frail the 10th test is more difficult. The 10th Trial Inspects your mind and your soul, and looks for impurities, you are suspect to mental images of demons, wars, everything a normal battle brother would see, but these are not just images, depending on the reaction of the neophyte he is allowed to continue to the 11th Trial, if he fails he is killed immediately. The 11th Trial you are implemented with the geneseed, after you are you are subject to even more punishment and you are given no food for 1 month, and you must stay in chamber until your body reheals. The 12th Trial is the Trial of Death, this Trial is where you fight against your personality and you are sent on a fight to kill a Legendary beast that is native to the planet, like the Iron Wolf, or the Flawed ones, or the Dangerous Black Draconian.

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Hey Guys I am planning on adding a new marine army to my current collection except they will be drawn from 2 chapters.
The Wanderers and the Emperor's Shields.
This is what I am planning on buying
1x battle Force. (1 assualt Squad 1x combat squad 1x tactical squad)
2x tactical squad
1x devastator squad
1x combat squad (will become stern guard squad)
1x Black Templar Upgrade Sprue.
This will give me if my math is right a 1500 point list or so. As I am planning using the extra legs from the rhino and the few i have laying around to make a few characters using the Black Templar stuff. Anything I should add?
If I buy this from a current person I know it will cost 196$ should i do it? This army is for my battle table in my basement so we have more varieties.

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Once again sir, good fluff, but check your spelling and grammar. I think your trying to talk about the recruit's TRIALS, not TRAILS or TAILS

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Inquisitor Lord Bane wrote:Once again sir, good fluff, but check your spelling and grammar. I think your trying to talk about the recruit's TRIALS, not TRAILS or TAILS

opps I'll run it through the Spell check on Microsoft word. I just started editting while I am at school (shh don't tell anyone.)

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Behold the New Color Scheme and Symbol!

As you can see it has been fully mastered! Finally eh?
Well anyway this chapter will get some updates as well as some new stuff when I Get time today


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Anyway I am thinking of a few captain names and I came by this which was kinda hilarous in a way
http://bible-baby-names.com/names

Then I stumbled upon
http://www.angelsbysharae.com/ArchangelsList.html
http://www.steliart.com/angelology_angel_names_A.html
http://www.angel-guide.com/names-angels.html
I am thinking about using these names for my chapter now. As my chapter is heavily based on Templars it would make sense that they would have angel names.

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I agree with a few of the others. If you have time to write as much fluff and lore and comment elsewhere on Dakka, we want to see painted models. This thread started out in P&M, and that's what the people are demanding.

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Inquisitor Lord Bane wrote:I agree with a few of the others. If you have time to write as much fluff and lore and comment elsewhere on Dakka, we want to see painted models. This thread started out in P&M, and that's what the people are demanding.

Yeah Not the greatest painter in the world. Trying to get the painting down first. I will work on painting when I get time. But the lore stuff i actually do at school. So when I am sometimes on dakkadakka I'm actually at school trying to avoid doing some homework.
See right now I am going to buy a huge amount of stuff and then I am going to get settled with painting then I will move onto the Storm Crusader's as their painting scheme is complex. Unlike the Emperor's Shields and the Wanderers which is very basic.
Plus someone needs to teach me how to set up my crappy digital camera so that I can take better pictures and learn how to make a pro pictures of single miniatures as the pictures I take now do not give my chapter justice.

UNLESS!
If you guys want me to show you my brothers painting! Which is Space Wolves. He almost has his entire Space Wolves army done painted! And he also has 12 grey knights and at least 250 spearmen of elves?

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If you look in the P&M tutorials you'll find a whole bunch on how to take good pics. And if you put up pics of your painting, no matter how bad it is, you can get pointers on how to improve it.


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And this is your thread, not your brothers

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Well the picture problem is more of a busy thing. I rarely find to do anything. This current eagle scout project has really taken alot of my time.

About the brother thing. Yeah Its my bro, hes better than me at this. But I better at writing lore and making stories that people would like to read.

But yes I will try practicing to get my painting skills down. I have only ever started to paint 10 times. And i get a little bit better.


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That also reminds me how do i strip some of my guys D:. Because alot of them are painted when I was younger and I want to save the models of having to paint over. I would rather just restart them.

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Alrighty new lore!
Updated Stats
Chapter Masters: Calnor Alrnia and Malnar Greston
Chapter No: 124
Homeworld: Drancoris (8 systems)
Geneseed: Unknown (may be descended from the 11th legion)
Manpower: 3,200-3,500 (unknown)
Specialty: Prolonged Campaigns, Tactical Movements, Insertions, Behind enemy lines, Defensive and offensive Actions on sieges, Tactical Assaults, Pysker assaults, Alpha Squadron.
War-cry: The Storm Has come for you!
Famous Quotes:
"To be a Storm Crusader is to be a signal of hope and light."

"Daemons, Traitors, Orks, Eldar, Tyranids, and Tau, sounds like an even fight, all cannons fire at their flanks and wipe them from existence." Captain Prometheus at the battle of Grimnar.

The Book of Ignatius
The Books of Ignatius are the Storm Crusaders and their chapters version of the Codex Astrates. But instead of it never being updated to fit the demands of the changing battlefield it is constantly updated by Great tacticians of the Imperium. It states Strategies, tactics, orginization, ship to ship interaction, codes, laws, training, ranks, Command Structure, Chapter Councils, and the Formations of the Chapters. Truly the Book of Ignatius was written by the most talented of the Chapter. As the Ultramarines and the Son's of the Storm usually get into disputes over this. But with the backing of the Inquisition the Storm Crusaders may continue.
But do to recent times. The Storm Crusaders have sensed a Corruption in the so-called Holy Warriors of the Inquisition as Alpha Squadron members have not returned from campaigns. And are being used as assassins instead of their usual tactics. Seeing the promise broken by the Inquisition the Storm Crusaders have called the aid of the Ordo Heretics to deal with the Corruption within the Inquisition.

The Guardians
The Guardians are the chapters pyskers and guards of the Daemon Hunting forces. The Guardians are only numbered around 600 pyskers and 90 Specialists. The Guardians draw its number from all the Pyskers of the Storm Crusader's Successors. And they are not included in man power as their are 12 chapters that give the guardians recruits. In theory, it is believed the Guardians came to be after the Horus hersey in order to combat any Daemon Incursion in the Ghoul Stars. A single guardian squad can turn a battle that was once seen as lost into a victory.

(uses grey knight rules)

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metallifan wrote:The Inquisition already have the GK though. Why would they want/need another Chapter when they can just pull a mandate out of their arseholes and comandeer a chapter whenever they need to?


The Inquisition has no direct authority over a SM chapter. They may feel as if they can "Comandeer" anyone they want, but in truth, they would be hard pressed to do so.

And I can see that the GK would probably be stretched pretty thin if they were the only one's doing Inquisition business.... so yeah it make perfect sense to "loan" out a few companies on INQ business.


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Well I can definately see your point. Thanks for the support.
I have a few things I am working on. Like the Alpha Squadron.
And the Grimnar Campagin Conclusion. (which has been a pain in my butt, as it litterally has so many armies fighting each other it is insane...)

Pics are coming for you people.
I'm not proud of my painting. AT ALL


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Captain of the 3rd Company


Alpha Squadron



22nd company WIP





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Anyway offtopic here is my two other armies.

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When you take pictures, don't take them head on. Take them at a slight elevation, looking down. That way you can see more of the model, and it doesn't look as awkward.

 
   
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PraetorDave wrote:When you take pictures, don't take them head on. Take them at a slight elevation, looking down. That way you can see more of the model, and it doesn't look as awkward.

Thanks for the help anyway.

Guardian WIP

Yeah I got kinda bored and I need to find a way to make a custode but my funding will come soon. Let me take pictures of the rest of the army.
And let me not forget about my most famous model! And yes it Azrael's Body! Filed and worked for like 3 weeks on!

Notice how his head is sticking out. Can't really fix that. But it looks pretty good. This Night Hunter/Bringer/Tracker


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Ah yes I also have built a few stern guard squads. Which I have more than anything. I will also take a picture of my work in progress stuff like my land raider that was destroyed :(




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