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**Asherian Command**

Arch Templar of Drancoris.

**Battle Brother Lucifer**

See? Doesn't that sound way bad ass?

I'm going to go start my own thread for chapter you helped with the color scheme. While it was just going to be a small thing, I have fallen in love with the ideas etc I have come up with in the last day or two.
(I decided on a scheme slightly different than the ones in the thread)

**Asherian Command**

battle Brother Lucifer wrote:See? Doesn't that sound way bad ass?

I'm going to go start my own thread for chapter you helped with the color scheme. While it was just going to be a small thing, I have fallen in love with the ideas etc I have come up with in the last day or two.
(I decided on a scheme slightly different than the ones in the thread)

Good. Glad to of helped.
Anyway. I will make new lore soon.

**Battle Brother Lucifer**

I'm too lazy to start the thread today, but it'll happen eventually.
Since you always seem to pop up in the threads of mine that need advice, you'll probably see it

**vignor**

@Asherian Command-- I Bought a new omnibus the ultramarines one to see how people write from the Astarte prospective And i dont know why i am stating this here but i am still juggling between fluff for the shields and sections of yours trying to figure out ways to stop people from flaking you so much...so i will be back with some more idears for you latter on in the week andd i am also looking through my mason handbook also i am a legacy of masons :O TBH and i could delve deep into that lore for you i mean heck the masons are the children of the knights templar....

**Asherian Command**

vignor wrote:@Asherian Command-- I Bought a new omnibus the ultramarines one to see how people write from the Astarte prospective And i dont know why i am stating this here but i am still juggling between fluff for the shields and sections of yours trying to figure out ways to stop people from flaking you so much...so i will be back with some more idears for you latter on in the week andd i am also looking through my mason handbook also i am a legacy of masons :O TBH and i could delve deep into that lore for you i mean heck the masons are the children of the knights templar....

thank you very much need to get lore up later on today. I have to go to school.

**Asherian Command**

OK GUYS I AM BACK!
And I am here to tell you of a cool thing I have come by. A Cool set back for my chapter...
Being too human.

That way my characters and space marines will seem a little more Human. Not people with absolutely no feelings. Meaning they will develop their own personalities. But their past memories are wiped after their induction into the chapter.
Also if you have ideas please email me at
tassadarzealot@aol.com
I will take good requests!
So if you guys want to add to my lore I will be happy with that!

**Asherian Command**

Hello again my wonderful dakkites.
I promised army pics a while ago.
And now i am showing you. Them all!

Anyway I am not the greatest painter...
Heres my scenery

Anyway thats it for my update

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comments would be appreciated....

Anyway I think lore will be up soon...

**Asherian Command**

If you guys want me to. I can do a battle report. Against one of my friends. You guys can vote for what army you want me to play against heres my list of armies I have
Orcs 500
Eldar 2000
Tau 850
Imperail Guard 500
Space Wolves! 2500
Daemon Hunters 1500
I can combine the IG and Tau and the Orcs together to form a huge multiracial army.
I usually play 2,000 point army of Space Marines.

Anyway the 10th company will be getting an update. Like a new roster. And I will always try and write a campagin of what they are doing right now.

Current Events of the Chapter

M41-Current The Grimnar Campagin begins.
Asherian is Malnar.
Venerable Garane kills a Greater Daemon.
Grand Templar Calnor Alrnia Kills a Daemon Prince and reclaims the Grimnar System
The Storm Crusader Chapter is split in half. As the Crusading Companies gene-seed is no longer recognizable to their brothers. The Son's of Asherian Chapter are born.
The Storm Crusaders chapter under Calnor's and Malnar's Command send all the Chapter successors to fight in the wars across the Imperium.
The Black Fists chapter is decimated by a Dark Eldar fleet.
The Son's of the Phoenix Successor Chapter's homeworld is destroyed. Half the chapter is destroyed.
The Son's of Asherian Fleet fight in the eye of Terror. At least 1,000 Son's appear. The other 2,300 Son's are spread across the Galaxy.
The Storm Crusaders chapter's companies are spread across the Ghoul Systems and the Drancoris Systems as Chaos forces start to attack the systems in the Lakios Systems.
The Ultramarine's chapter Ask for aid. The 4th Company of the Storm Crusaders Respond.
First Knight Amand and his Sternguard squad are aiding a Inquisitorial force defeat an Alpha Legion force that have a relic of the Storm Crusaders Chapter. Amand has been instructed to Destroy the Relic.
Inquisitor Cortez killed by Calnor Alrnia after it was found the Inquisitor was a Radical that was undermining the chapter. The Storm Crusaders no-longer abide to the Inquisition. After a flaw was found in the geneseed.

-End-

Anyway there is the current news of the chapter

**Battle Brother Lucifer**

My nit picks, I don't think you can kill Cortez, because he is a character who is still living. I think. That would be like saying in my chapter's fluff, my chapter master killed Marneus Calgar because he was evil

**Asherian Command**

battle Brother Lucifer wrote:My nit picks, I don't think you can kill Cortez, because he is a character who is still living. I think. That would be like saying in my chapter's fluff, my chapter master killed Marneus Calgar because he was evil

Different Cortez. Its Cortez Mangola. NOT THAT inqusitor lord. I would rather die than kill that cortez off!
My fault. Its just i choose random names from the middle evil days and roll a dice to see who wins. So as you can tell Amand is a Knight Templar Grand Marshal.

**vignor**

Big army there o'.'0

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And also play the biggest point army

**purplefood**

I like that terrain piece

**Asherian Command**

The best part about our terrain. It was completely free XD

**Asgeirr Darkwolf**

That... that is a massive army. GOD HELP US HERETICS!

I like the way you've kinda mixed BT with normal marines- it works well in the fluff, really cool.

If you're looking for a battle cry , how about this one? "The Storm is upon you!" has a nice ring to it. or "We are the Storm!"

battle Brother Lucifer, I'm looking foward to seeing your thread.

Definitely liking what I'm seeing here. I honestly enjoy a bit of lore now and then! Keep it up, looking for more!

I've got my own lore for a loyalist- turned regenades chapter, the Night Wolves, that I've put up, based mostly on mutations.

**Battle Brother Lucifer**

OT, I've changed the name of the chapter.
Its now the Sons of Ouroboros, and I'll let you guys know when I start it today

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My thread is up http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/319163.page

**Asherian Command**

I need an idea of how to put together my Thunderhawk O.o

**Asherian Command**

The Storm Crusaders
The Flaw
Shortly After the 5th War of Drancoris. The Storm Crusaders inspected the geneseed of the Storm Crusaders, after months of anaylizing it, the Arch Traitor Calis had left a curse on the chapter. His blood was fused with theirs. All of the Storm Crusaders inducted into the chapter were now going to be give two more tasks. The tests of purity, and the tests of will. As failed asprints are sometimes now turned into hulking monstrioticities Ripping through anything that stood in their way. Deep below the Fortress monastery the Chapter has sent a redeemer force consisting of the Alpha Squadron and the 15th company to kill any of the remnants of the corrupted.
The blood of Calis has mutated the genestore of the 25th, 26th, 27th, 28th, 7th, and 8th companies. This has severely weakened the chapter as the augmentations were given to these companies and just in a few days their forms changed into hulks and the chapter has been fighting a secret war with the mutants in the fortress monastery. Not even the inquisition knows of this secret war.

Sorry guys i had to write this quickly this is the mud in their blood. The traitors from their chapter are mutants D:

Malnar
Malnar is a very important individual in Storm Crusader history. AS he lead the chapter at least 9,500 years ago. And he fought an alien race known simply as the Shifters. Malnar lead the entire chapter into action against it and he began the inquisitional doctrine. Malnar was known for wielding 2 ancient swords stolen from the aliens that were said to make the construction of the Emperor's Primarchs look like satires. These beautiful swords were never found again after his exile in the imperium as he asked for help from a rouge trader. And took the place of the rouge trader and traveled the imperium, but he later after 20 years of serivice as a Rouge Trader, went into a deep sleep where the rouge trader that had agreed to help him. Worked to ensure no one knew of this, and he erased all the memory of the crew, and the cargo of the ship soon was forgotten over 9,400 years of a deep sleep. Malnar was awoken as the Rouge trader ship had been not only left in isolation but the entire crew were retiring the ancient ship after 9,500 years of service. The surprise of the entire crew was when the Ancient Astrates walked out of the ships cargo bay and onto the space station. Where Malnar was seen in complete surprise and many of the crew cowered in fear as they saw the Astrates. Not knowing that they were about to destroy the Astrates in the ship. Malnar told them to go to a secret planet. That had plans for a lost STC of a ship thought long lost to the Imperium. Simply known as the Helios Class Battle Ship. An ancient battle ship that made mockery of the Current Ships of the imperium to this day. No one knows how Malnar had discovered this STC and the technological wonders of the Planet. But many other secrets were found on the planet. Malnar with the STC returned back to the Storm Crusaders in his Battle Armor. Expecting to find a chapter long dead or destroyed by the ravages of time. But he found something alittle brighter, hope and the Storm Crusaders still took breath, and they had been waiting for the day for their Hero to return. But many of the Storm Crusaders believed it to be Asherain who had been killed 9,800 years ago. Malnar after the fifth war of Drancoris dismissed this claim and told the truth of what had really happened and of what had happened to many of the primarchs. Now the Crusaders know the truth. And have now started a campagin to reconquer the Worlds taken by the Traitors.
(Testing lore. Not very good, i know needs work in my opinion.)

1st Company
Captian Naivous
Chaplian Takin
Apothecary Bonius
Standard bearer
Company Champion
Squads
20 Vanguard
60 Sternguard
20 Terminator Squads
4 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders 2nd Company
Captian Calick
Chaplian Ponius
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads
60 tactical Marines
40 Assault Marines
4 dreadnoughts
2 landraiders 3rd Company
Captain Vinus
Chaplian Ilon
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Squads
20 tactical marines
60 Assualt marines or 40 biker marines
20 devastars
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders 4th Company
Captian Flenix
Chaplin Navios
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Squads
60 Tactical Marines
20 Assault marines
20 devastar
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders

5th Company
Captain Phoenix
Chaplin Vardian
Apothecary Valn
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads
60 Tactical Marines
20 Assault marines
20 devastar
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders

6th Company
Captain Prometheus
Chaplin Amaury
Apothecary Roche
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads\
100 Tactical marines
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders

7th Company
Captain Baal
Chaplin Imbert Peraut
Apothecary Peter
Standard Bearer Sir Gustaf
Company champion Sir Robert Turvile
Squads
100 Devastars
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders

8th Company
Captain Archimedes
Chaplin Troy
Apothecary Johnson
Standard Bearer Emilio
Company champion Steve
Squads
100 Assault squads
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders

9th Company
Captain Amadeus Morestello
Chaplin Alsto
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads
100 tactical marines
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders
10th Company
Lord Commander Loken
Chaplin Telicin
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads
50 devastars
50 assaults squads
3 dreadnoughts
2 land Raiders
11th Company
Captain Robert Saunfordel
Chaplin Nocturne
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads
100 Scouts

12th Company

Captain Altorick
Chaplin
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads
100 scouts

13th Company
Captain Najaris
Chaplain Vain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company champion
Squads
100 Scouts/squires
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14th Company
Captain Amberaldus
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
100 Deva
and 25 Templars
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15th Company
Captain Vinis
Chaplain Calin
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Squads
60 Guardians
40 Stern Guards
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16th Company
Captain Nack "The Wolf"
Chapalin
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Squads
70 Deva
30 Tactical

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17th
Captain Bane
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Squads
10 Tactical squads

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18th
Captain Malice
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
10 Assualt Squads
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19th
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
10 Deva Squads
------
20th
Captain (NEEDS A NAME!)
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
6 Tactical
2 Assault
2 Deva
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21st
Captain Gabriel Val
Chaplian Tyriel
Apothecary Helyn
Standar Bearer
Company Champion
Squads
100 Termintors
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22nd "the Fated"
Captain Night Stalker/Bringer
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
60 Tactical
20 Assualt
20 Deva
------
23rd
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
60 tactical
20 assualt
20 deva
------
24th
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
60 tactical
20 assualt
20 deva

25th
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
60 Tactical
20 Assualt
20 Deva
------
26th
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
100 Assualt
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27th
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
100 Tactical

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28th
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
100 Assualt

29th
Captain
Apothecary
Standard Bearer
Company Champion
Chaplain
Squads
100 Assualt

30th
Captain Carter
Apothecary Roche
Standard Bearer George
Company Champion John Doe
Chaplain
Squads
60 Tactical
20 Assualt
20 Deva

Fleet
60 Thunder Hawks
10 Battle Barges
20 Strike Cruisers
1 Helios Capital Ship
1 Forge Ships
500 other ships.

Apothecarain
Chief Apothecary Malviric
200 Apothecaries

Head Quarters Staff Chapter Masters
Calnor Alrnria Lord of Asherian and Grand Templar
Honor Guard 30
Chapter Masters

Calistro-Lord of Assualt Forces
Talick-Regent of Asherian
Val- Lord of the Defenders
Kais- Lord of the Alpha Squadron
Ganja- First Guardian
Other Masters
Loken Master of the Library
Flenix Master of the Armory
Prometheus Master of the fleet
Amand First Knight
Jericho First Templar

Armory
50 Predators
20 Land Raiders
40 Whirl Winds
40 Razor Backs
120 Rhinos
30 Vindicators
Librarians
Chief Librain Malick
60 Epistories
120 Lexicuams
250 Codicers

Alrighty guys I think this was a little too much for one chapter D:

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Oh no. It looks like a wall D:

**Asgeirr Darkwolf**

Actually the flaw, though a bit generic, adds a little of the depth that it was lacking.

Also, you may want to do a leetle editing: The Storm Crusaders inspected the geneseed of the Storm Crusaders. After months of anaylizing it.

Just replace periods with commas.

**Asherian Command**

Yeah thanks for that I will get on that tomorrow. If you don't mind me i will be eating some curry and thinking of a way to take over the world. I mean the high school I am at.

**Asherian Command**

FAQ!
This is for people who no idea who some or what things in my chapter are for.
Q: Who is Calis?
A: Calis the Arch Traitor was originally a Storm Crusader. But he betrayed the entire chapter, and took the 23rd company with him at least 2,000 years ago. Calis was removed from the Chapter Records as ever being part of the chapter. He then became part of a renegade force that strive to destroy the Storm Crusaders chapter. He and Calnor in the fifth war for Drancoris Fought in the geneseed store. And Calnor Beheaded Calis and the Arch Traitor was killed.

Q: Why are there so many marines in the Storm Crusaders?
A: Well just recently the entire chapter was split up to form a new chapter. The Son's of Asherain (the Crusaders formation). And also due to corruption in their geneseed at least 6 companies neophytes were turned into mindless beasts. The 6 companies geneseed have been taken and destroyed. But the geneseed storage device is fully activated holding enough to ensure the survival of the chapter.

Q: How Many Librarians are the chapter and if it is a Templar Theme then why do they Have psykers?
A: There are around 250. (Includes the Guardians.)
For the 2nd question I can answer it this way. The Black Templars don't know anything. And The Storm Crusaders act like a military force from the modern times. As they work together and calibrate and think for themselves. So why not?

Q: What is the Current Location of the Chapter?
A: Well the chapter right now is everywhere. At least 300 of them are in Armaggedon, and 600 of them are in Ultramar helping the Ultramarines with the coming war. And 400 of them are located in the Grimanir system which is basically in the Ultima Segmenta. Then at least 1000 of them are defending the borders against the Tau, The Ghoul Stars, The Tyranids, and the Necrons. Then 400 of them are spread out in the Eye of Terror. And the other 300 are in the Home systems.

Q: How many Transitions has the chapter gone through?
A: At least 6 or 8. I've lost count. Originally they were called the Storm Guards, The Dusk Legion, The Purgers of Light, Storm Blades, and Blade Legion. Yep there's been alot. Don't even get me started on the color scheme. I've gone through like 50.

Q: How long has it taken you to make up your lore?
A: 10 Months. And entire days devoted to it. 10 months of somewhat doing it. And somedays of every single hour i do something with my chapter.

Q: Can I ask you for help?
A: Sure. Just Email me. Its not just for show.

-End-

Anyway I've been planning on going onto Amazon.com right now and trying to see any cheap prices for models.....

Anyway good Day to Dakkites! And please comment if you think the FAQ satisfied your needs for more lore.

**purplefood**

Why did you make you chapter/psuedo legion so god damn big?

**Joyous_Oblivion**

I briefly read most of this blog...I now want to punch babies...

You should really take some of the suggestions to heart, most of your fluff or justifications run completely contrary to 40k lore, making you army quite unbelievable.

Also, get painting...I don't see one painted squad in your entire collection. A painted army (even a tiny one) will be much more rewarding than a million plain plastic bare figures.

**Asherian Command**

Joyous_Oblivion wrote:I briefly read most of this blog...I now want to punch babies...

You should really take some of the suggestions to heart, most of your fluff or justifications run completely contrary to 40k lore, making you army quite unbelievable.

Also, get painting...I don't see one painted squad in your entire collection. A painted army (even a tiny one) will be much more rewarding than a million plain plastic bare figures.

I don't know if that is a insult...

purplefood wrote:Why did you make you chapter/psuedo legion so god damn big?

Well. 1,000 Space Marines could not make their own personality. So I thought it would be better, to make it 1,500. Did not work. Still a Demand for more marines! Then 2,000 didn't work. But finnaly I hit 3,000 and it worked with the fluff. And Also I Like the Number 300

**Asgeirr Darkwolf**

I think if you wokr on the fluff, check for infractions... then it would be amazing. As to the painting thing... I'm afraid oblivion is right. Just painting a squad will make them stand out SO much more. If you don't have the time, we understand that too.

**Asherian Command**

Asgeirr Darkwolf wrote:I think if you wokr on the fluff, check for infractions... then it would be amazing. As to the painting thing... I'm afraid oblivion is right. Just painting a squad will make them stand out SO much more. If you don't have the time, we understand that too.

I rarely have time anymore. It actually takes alot of effort to even get onto Dakkadakka.
But painting is a different story. I have a squad painted. But I need to finish the details.
The Lore and fluff. I work on alot. But only when i find time.

**Asherian Command**

New Battle Cry: The Storm Has come for you!
Geneseed: Unknown, Slightly corrupted.

Yeah thats my update. Not much else to post.
Special Thanks to
Asgeirr Darkwolf

**Asgeirr Darkwolf**

Yay! My battle cry got used!

**Asherian Command**

OK I need Some help with making a Company That the community will help me make!
Basically it is the 29th or the 8th company. As both of them are companies that I have not yet covered.
Basically they are unknown captains and companies. Basically The community will help me make the lore for the company and also I am also creating more in-depth lore for the infamous 22nd company. Which is lead by Night Bringer, a commander that is basically the equal-vent of Shrike of the 3rd company.

**Asgeirr Darkwolf**

Hmm... sounds good. I kinda like the idea of night bringer... but that's a C'tan god, so....

You seem to write basically alot (not to be critical ).