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Legendary Master of the Chapter





Chicago, Illinois

Well. Heres what is here. The Storm Crusaders have different campagians and are spread across the Gaxaly. The Chapter has not been together since the 32nd millienia. The Chapters companies are thrown randomly. If another company comes into contact with another one it is incredibly rare. Calnor gets 4 companies only because he is a Grand Templar. Which is the 2nd Highest Rank. He controls these compainies because the 4 of them are usually joint with each other in huge campagains. The Crusades are different in that they are sent all over the place.
And it orginially came down to that each 1,000 Storm Crusaders is different in their doctrines, organization, tactical abilities. Etc. So it is 3 different chapters in a sense. But it only shows one color. The Dark Green. Because all Storm Crusaders are Masters of Jungle Fighting. But it is extremely rare for anyone to meet a Captain of the Storm Crusaders. They Chapter is also spread so thin. That It would break the back of any ordinary chapter.
And also. I have named 6 chapters. Storm Jackals, Sons of the Phoenix, Black Fists, Blade Knights, Storm Crusaders, and the Red Ravagers.
(sorry guys was away at work. Damn Scouts.)

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The Storm Crusaders Iron Stone Chapter 2.
Loken stood at attention. His company's colors were shown next to him. His Command Squad silently stood at attention as well. Unmoving Statues.
Calnor Walked towards Loken and his command.
"Loken, I will be on your Command Ship, with a handful of my Guardians." Loken nodded. He was overwhelmed. But who could blame him? He was standing infront of Calnor Alrnia a Grand Templar, the equal of Marneus Calgar of the Ultramarines. Calnor was Inspirational to Loken. He was his hero and Commander. Loken would Follow Calnor to hell and back, if it was necessary.
"Calnor." Loken began, his voice shaking. "Who else is joining us?"
The 10th Company Chaplain, Chaplain Maretus. Spoke.
"Loken, I may be able to answer that for you." Maretus, was a highly respected Chaplain, and friend to Calnor Alrnia. Maretus was the Chaplain that even inducted Calnor into the Storm Crusaders. He was older than Calnor. Who Calnor himself was over 850 years.
Calnor Looked at Maretus with his golden eyes. And Nodded. Relaying that it was alright to speak.
Maretus breathed. "The 1st, 2nd and 22nd compainies are joining. All 3 of these compainies are well known and honored by our Company."
Loken Smilied. Finnaly, he thought, a chance to show my worth to my Brothers, for it has been too long since the War for Drancoris.
"Loken, I must attend. This Second a very important matter with an Inqusitor Cortez. If you will excuse my vanity." Calnor Bowed. And he walked away swiftly.
Loken turned to his fully assembled company. Loken yelled with Power and it did not falter.
"Iron Wolves, We leave in 0200 Hours for war! Let the Emperor Bless our company as we fight in the Grimnar System! And Our Grand Templar Calnor Alrnia joins us! And we must prepare for a war that could make us Legends or Dishonors! We will Win this Campagin! For thy Emperor and For the Peoples of the Imperium!"
A Loud cheer roared from the Company.
Maretus put his hand on lokens shoulder. Loken Nodded. His days of glory had come. For it was he who was leading the Attack.
O-------------------------------------------------------O

So how was it? If i need to improve just say so. But I'm not good at writing down a good flowing story.

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Well with nothing further to add this week
I will post the Most epic videos ever. *cough* today *cough*

Warning these may not be funny. They are just something i found one day. lol

























Just found this one, Hope you guys like it, My army right now is kinda slow right now. As I am addicted to Starcraft 2

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Asherian Command wrote:Well with nothing further to add this week
I will post the Most epic videos ever. *cough* today *cough*

Warning these may not be funny. They are just something i found one day. lol

























Just found this one, Hope you guys like it, My army right now is kinda slow right now. As I am addicted to Starcraft 2


Thank you. That was the best 20 minutes I have ever killed.

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Chicago, Illinois

Your Welcome. I'm here to give fun and joy to the masses. And Explosives to Justin Bieber.

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pictures?

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Chicago, Illinois

Uhh. Well I have them in my gallery. Haven't updated my army for a long time.

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finnaly a Calnor Alrnia pic. Not mine. Just Borrowed it from a website. This pic is by razorsteel. Thanks for the pick

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Chicago, Illinois

Hiya Dakkadakkites!
I have been working on some stuff for a while but not on my chapter.
Its called the Daily Peon.
Me and group of Terrainiers from the Hiveworkshop made a social group and rped in it
If you would like to check it out go here
But the only thing is. We are not recuriting anylonger.
http://dailypeon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Daily_Peon_Wiki
Here is the website.
Please do not edit them D: we are still finishing up the Wiki.
And the best part is. i'm the only american in the entire group

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Chicago, Illinois

Alrighty Here is one of my chapters more Iconic Characters. And a Character that I completely made from scratch criticism would be helpful....
See new updated Version in ASherian Commands.

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Wheyhey over-powered and under-costed if I'm honest.

Relic Blade that re-roll's wounds combined with the usual Chapter Master statistics means that he's very deadly in close combat.
2+,4++, FNP and 3 wounds means that he's very tough.
Astartes Launcher, Combi-melta and a relic blade would require him to have 4 arms and makes him deadly at range.
Jump pack gives him mobility.
So he's tough in close combat and range, fast and tough and has incredibly powerful rules.

As for his combat tactics special rule, it puts Vulkan to shame. Power weapons are more common than thunder-hammers, the only real flaw of plasma weapons - gets hot - is nullified due to TL and to top it all off you get TL bolters. The furious charge one is a much more reasonable idea IMHO.
Making Sternguard scoring is very powerful, particularly as they'll all be having combi-plasmas let alone allowing more honour guard.

I apologise for being so critical but he really is very over-powered, particularly for his price. Compare him to the 275pts Logan Grimnar and you may see what I mean.
Oh and his fluff is a bit OTT as well.

Maybe i'm just being too harsh but it really needs reviewing IMHO.

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Yeah I will fix that. Some people said it was fine. I said Shouldn't he be 285?
Fixed

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HMMM HHMMM HMM well i just read your entire thread and in conjunction with the shields id love to work with you and your many storm named chapters i think the first bit of business is to consolidate your chapter/chapters so that there is not so much up in the air and work it out so that the other dakkites dont flak your ideas so much

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Yeah the character Calnor Alrnia actually was a model i came up with one day. And said ok this is my segerant Calnor Alrnia. First game ever. Calnor Alrnia beats up an entire 10 gaunt force with his powersword. 2nd game of using him. He gets into combat with a chaos lord. Kills him. 3rd game kills a demon prince. 4th game is now a Libarain and destorys a Warlord Titan. 5th game Fights a primarch, Calnor kills him in one turn. 6th game full fledged Captain kills Gazghul. 7th game takes a wound kills a entire squad of Marines. 8th game full fledged Chapter Master kills 2 chapter master jumps into combat destorying a whirlwind in the process. 9th game owns a demon prince of khorne with his melta-bolter.
And i agree i need to fix up parts of my lore. But the Calnor Alrnia stuff i'm not touching. Because he is just too badass of a character as he has only died in one game. And that one was only because this cherck decided to place my company in the worst place. and I got bombarded by orbital bombardments.
But yeah. I will work on some parts of the lore and add to it. The Flaw thing i'm still thinking about. Because this chapter is too perfect.

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Well your flaw let me think about your flaw dun dun dun DUN DUN well you know you have a force of marines that have well exceeded the normal chapter size of 1000 marines well what if
there was a cult formed by ordinary imperial citizens like how you know like the free masons in real life or the secret organization could be made up of Astarte's who the inquisition
selected to thin the numbers of your chapter escape from there custody and travel the cosmos following secert signs left behind until they can fulfill there duties to the chapter or left with a clandestine mission to destroy some thing i dont know just shooting you some idea;s ..

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it could work. But the Flaw thing is just a test. Its not like something that i like pacticular. I just needed something to make them have a drawback like all chapters.

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i dont really get this rule, "*Twisting Fates- If your army includes Calnor Alrnia, half of your total infantry elite choices." what do you mean?

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All Infantry units like terminators, or Sternguard will become scoring units. Sorry about that O.o
but half of your units.

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It says in his background he has the Angel Armour but in his wargear he has the Armour of the Crusader.
Is the Angel armour that valuable he doesn't wear it?

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He killed a Primarch? What game were you playing? (Apoc, I assume)
And, which Primarch was it? (*crosses fingers*)

   
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battle Brother Lucifer wrote:He killed a Primarch? What game were you playing? (Apoc, I assume)
And, which Primarch was it? (*crosses fingers*)

Angron. And all of his greater demons with some help from a few grey knights that teleported in. We were doing a Legends battle. My Libarian (calnor) teleported in and killed the bastard in one turn of combat by using a legion relic. And combined with might of heroes = instant win.
purplefood wrote:It says in his background he has the Angel Armour but in his wargear he has the Armour of the Crusader.
Is the Angel armour that valuable he doesn't wear it?

Yeah. He guards it. It is the originial armor of the first Chapter Master. It is Terminator Armor. But i'm waiting till the grey knight/ inquistion book comes out so that i can place him as a psyker. As he is a pysker in lore.
Armor of the Crusader is his armor.

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Chapter Name: Storm Crusaders

Founding: Second Founding

Chapter Master: Grand Templar Calnor Alrnia and Asherian

Battle Cry: (need one )
Chapter no: 124

Chapter Symbol: Angel of Time

Homeworld: Drancoris Sector.

Number of Compaines: 50

Geneseed: (expunged)

The Storm Crusaders are a massive chapter containing at least 6,000 Space Marines. (inculdes every space marine, except scouts.) Due to its large size it is often sent on campagians, that are long and bloody. The Chapter is orgainized into compaines like normal space marine chapters but this chapter differs in its names and its orginzation of its compainies. The 2-5 Compaines are Battle Compaines, that are usually sent on campagians in the Ghoul Stars, the 6th-9 compaines are reserve compaines that protect the fortress Monestary from harm. The 10th,14,16,17,18th,19th,20th,22nd and the 23rd are all Campagianing Companies, These are the main bulk of the chapter, but unlike battle compaines they specialize in a certain type of Battle Brother (Devastor and Assualt Squad). For Example the 10th Company Nicknamed the Iron Wolves by other Imperail Orgainzations has 4 Tactical Squads, 3 Assualt Squads, and 3 Devastor Squads. Compared to the 20th company which consists of 4 Tactical, 4 Devastors, and 2 Assualt Squads. All of the companies are very indepedent from the Chapter, each company holds a fortress or Outpost in which to recurit more troops for the chapter and their company. The reason why none of the compaines that are above do not have any numerals passing 31 is that the rest of the chapter that is the 31st-50th compaines are all Crusading Compaines.

Unlike Most Chapters the Storm Crusaders have 5 Elite Compaines. They are orgainized into these 5 orgianzations, they so follow, the 15th The Guardians-The Defenders of the Storm Crusader's Fortress Monestary. Alpha Squadron has no company marking but is instead the special forces of the chapter, as their name dicates they deal with some of the most fearsome oppenents in the gaxaly. (Bascially DeathWatch but in the chapter instead). The 31st Company is the Brothers of the Sword, a large company only consisting of Vanguard and SternGuard Veterans. The 21st Company is a company only consisting of Termiantors. And finnaly the 1st Company Consisting of a Mix between Vanguard, Sternguard, and Terminators.

The Chapter History!
The Second Founding-The Chapter is formed into the Dusk Legion.

The First War-no offical name exists of its history, the Dusk Legion is attacked by chaos forces, Asherain put into stasis

The Refounding-The Chapter is renamed and remodeled after their First Chapter Master Asherain.

The Second War-Grand Commander Malnar leds defence of Drancrois and defeats the (SUPPRESSED) Empire, all knowledge of the event has been wiped

-Alpha Squadron Formed-

The Grimnar Campagin- Malnar Is killed in the Campagin, offical knowledge is lost after the third war

The Crusades- The Storm Crusaders are Recolored and renamed to better fit the standards put on them, the chapter is split and the compaines act indepedently

The Third War- Grand Templar (SUPPRESSED) leads an attack on a Orc Warlord, Orc Warlord retalitates and fights agianst the Drancorain Empire

Discovery- Long lost Technology found in The Vaults, Geneseed (SUPPRESSED) also found.

The Lost Campagain- Arrival of Calnor Alrnia in the Chapter, Calnor Quickly masters and 150 years in the chapter and He joins Alpha Squadron

The Fourth War- Grand Templar Malis is killed in combat, Calnor Alrnia is named his successor, Loken and his 10th company fight off 10,000 Cultists.

The Fifth War-Tyranid Infestation, Tyranid hive fleet attacks. Hive Fleet Successfully destoried.

The Sixth War- Ongoing war.. No Current news
The 10th company!

The 10th company is lead by Captain Loken Malicith, a tactican and a great warrior. His 10th Company are his elite warriors that would follow him to the pits of hell itself. Loken is a strange figure in that he is very "human" his emotion spikes at times and can be seen as a juvenile compared to his older battle brothers. The 10 Segearnts under his command are all warriors without peer and most of them specialize in the way of the sword, the company usually takes to the field in an armored assualt. The 10th company is known as the Iron Wolves, this name shows with their usual tactic of an armored assualt and ambushes.

The 2 leaders dispatched with Loken are Chief Libarian Talnar and Chaplain Roquir. Chief Libarian Talnar is one of 5 Chief Libarian's who maintain the chapter's massive libariarus. Chaokaub Roquir is loken's tutor and trainier, the Chaplain is also the oldest living member in the 10th Company.

Following the 10th Company to war is former 1st Company Captain Garane. Garane is entombed in a Dreadnought, due to his venerable status he is never put out into the front lines, but he does usually ignore this and fights in the fronts of battle.

The 10ths Tactical Squads all are equiped with anti infantry weaponry. The two leading tactical squads are Lucius and Logar. Lucius is a swordsmen with intellgence and tactical intuition, Logar is the shoot first ask questions later type of Segreant. The last Two Segerants are Valicorn and Brother Segerant Kalin. Valicorn is a swordsmen as well but he is mostly known for his skills with a storm bolter, he has accounted for 20 marksmen honors. Brother Segerant Kalin is the youngest of the 4 tactical Segerants, he bears a poweraxe a incredibley rare version of a power weapon, but he gained this after he slew a necron lord in combat (true story).

The Assualt Squad Segerants are Jackal, Goron, and Jenkins. Segerant Jackal is the hot headed leader of the insertion squad beta, a squad that has deemed many honors for striking in the heart of the enemy. Goron is the pyschotic warrior weilding a twin thunder hammer, till this day noone knows why he carries them. Jenkins is the fool hardy joker of the 10th, his inspirational deeds have gained him status in the Chapter itself.

The Devastor Squad segerants are by far the greatest marksmen in the entire chapter they are Yain, Helis, and Balin. Yain is the second oldest member of the company but he is one of glory day warriors. Helis is the hot headed heavy bolter expert with the finest aim in the company. Balin is the patient hunter whose tank hunting skills are behind imaginable.

The 10th company also has 2 sternguard squads and a Terminator Squad that is joint with it.
The Stern Guard Segerant is Templar Garro, and Templar Nihilus. Garro is a patient, cunning warrior, he is also a bearer of the Iron Halo and the Sword of the Temple with the sword arm of even Loken Himself. Nihilus is a sword master as well but unlike Garro he is more tacticful and bolder than Garro.

The Terminator Squad Segerant is Ulrius, he is one of the most daring of all the squads. He and his squad deepstrike into the heart of the enemy. He is bold and he is known as the "The Devil's Fool".
. The Storm Crusaders have different campagians and are spread across the Gaxaly. The Chapter has not been together since the 32nd millienia. The Chapters companies are thrown randomly. If another company comes into contact with another one it is incredibly rare. Calnor gets 4 companies only because he is a Grand Templar. Which is the 2nd Highest Rank. He controls these compainies because the 4 of them are usually joint with each other in huge campagains. The Crusades are different in that they are sent all over the place.
And it orginially came down to that each 1,000 Storm Crusaders is different in their doctrines, organization, tactical abilities. Etc. So it is 3 different chapters in a sense. But it only shows one color. The Dark Green. Because all Storm Crusaders are Masters of Jungle Fighting. But it is extremely rare for anyone to meet a Captain of the Storm Crusaders. They Chapter is also spread so thin. That It would break the back of any ordinary chapter.
And also. I have named 6 chapters. Storm Jackals, Sons of the Phoenix, Black Fists, Blade Knights, Storm Crusaders, and the Red Ravagers.
A Legend Among the Storm Crusaders Calnor Alrnia is the Grand Templar of the Storm Crusaders. His services in the Imperium date back over 8 centuries. His first years of a Space Marine Showed a promising young Neophyte with the honor of a Warrior, he's ambitions to be the best, and to one day save humanity grown even more closer. Calnor Alrnia was once part of the Alpha Squadron along with Val and Malick. And the three of them are now brothers in arms and Leaders of the Chapter. As a Grand Templar Calnor Alrnia is the embodiment of the Chapter. Calnor is proud, taciturn, intelligent, a natural leader. He is fearless as a warrior and his swordsmanship is only matched by the Black Templar's High Marshal. Calnor is also bearer of two relics of the chapter. The Talnris, a sword of an ever burning spirit and the Angel Armor, the self repairing armor and the spirit of the chapter. Truly Calnor is a legend, as he has taken slew of enemies. Killing of a Daemon Prince in the Griminar System, Assassination of a Chaos Lord, Killing of a Dark Eldar Lord, and even banishing over 200 demons in his time in the Storm Crusaders, this is but a small fraction of acts he has done. As the missions of his time in the Alpha Squadron are still shrouded in Mystery. But Calnor Alrnia Bears a secret that all of the Members of the Chapter Council hold as a burden. To speak of it would mean death. And those outside of the Council would meet their death because of this secret.


Calnor Alrnia Stats
WS BS S T W I A Ld Sv
6 5 4 4 4 6 3 10 +2 ++4
Points 285
Special Rules
And they shall know no fear, Independent Character, Combat Tactics, Orbital Bombardment, Feel No Pain.

Chapter Tactics
If you include Calnor Alrnia then all your army lose the Combat Tactics special rule. If you include Calnor Alrnia then all your army lose the Combat Tactics special rule for Furious Charge.

*Twisting Fates- If your army includes Calnor Alrnia, half of your total infantry elite choices.

*The Sword Master- Calnor is deadly in combat espically with the blade. He may reroll all failed attempts to wound. (no reroll-rerolls!) OR

Wargear
Eagle Helm (iron halo). Armor of the Crusader (artficer armor). Jump Pack. Melta Bomb, Frag and Krak Grenades. Astartes Launcher, Combi-Melta, Hell Fire Rounds, Sword of the Grand Templar (relic blade)

The 1st Company.
The 1st company is lead by Captain Navious..
Captain Navious is Relatively new to his position . Though his experience is not questioned. It is merely his youth. As he is a replacement for the Late Captain Garane. Even though he may not live up to the Captain's Legendary performance as a captain. Navious is a extraordinary leader and tactician. Navious is also a great warrior and he can easily adapt to any situation that arises. Though he is inexperienced has his sergeants to aid hin this new endeavor...
The 1st has 6 Sternguard squads, 3 Vanguard Squads, and 1 Fully Equipped Terminator Squad. The First is where the recruits of 21st and 15th companies arise from. Needless to say they are technically the greatest soldiers in the chapter. But they are just recruits for the 2 other companies.

The Flaw. -Appending Approval-Unofficial lore-
One of the chapters most guarded secrets is Something called the 13th Sign. This sign is when the pyschi of the Astrates goes rampant and instead of normaly function goes into a state of change. His body slowly grows faster but his sanity slowly slips away, and a mutations all over the Astrates body is slowly twisted. This is believed to of been started by the Demon Lord Calis. As his blood was split on the geneseed of the 25th and 5th compaines. Needless to say. Any Neyphote given this even after passing the 19 Trails. Are tainted and have been known to randomly turn into a beast of carnage. As his new form shows no recognizable to the old Astrates. It sometimes takes years for the 13th sign to appear on Asprints. But this Flaw is very rare. As only the geneseed of 25th and 5th Companies show the most of these failed Aspirants.

The Founding Legion
The Founding Legion of the Storm Crusaders is still unknown today. But many Imperial Scholars point towards the possible 2nd or 11th lost legions. As their geneseed shows no similarities to any other chapter's geneseed. But many Scholars and scribes point towards the Blood Angels, or even the Ultramarines. As their visionary ways of setting up a better Future for Humanity is Abundant in the Storm Crusaders. Truth is that No one except the Guarded secrets of the Council know the Answer to this question.


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just thought i would consolidate your post so i wouldnt have to click and scroll so much


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Ok one thing that i could think of to make your chapter more flawed is to give them a mongrel gene seed mix it up up a little dont make them so pure give em a lil mud in there blood..Second why wouldn't there be any scouts IMO i think the only reason why so many chapters can field chapters at full strength is the fact that neophytes make up a good portion of there back bone...i mean your doing a knight themed army so why wouldn't there be a squire to your knight...6,000 marines in 50 companies so each company fielded at least 120 marines thats not a ridiculous sized company but when you combine that into a chapter of 50 gee Louise monstrous and a lil bit unrealistic what if some companies were just half marines and scouts you know to act like a knight and squire training groups and at least one or two of your companies could be just pure neophytes and these chapters could called the masonic compaines as they await for a master to build them into marines dun dun dun

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mwnciboo said 40K Tours just because the Galaxy's Burning doesn't mean you can't enjoy the heat

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Asherian Command wrote:
battle Brother Lucifer wrote:He killed a Primarch? What game were you playing? (Apoc, I assume)
And, which Primarch was it? (*crosses fingers*)

Angron. And all of his greater demons with some help from a few grey knights that teleported in. We were doing a Legends battle. My Libarian (calnor) teleported in and killed the bastard in one turn of combat by using a legion relic. And combined with might of heroes = instant win.
purplefood wrote:It says in his background he has the Angel Armour but in his wargear he has the Armour of the Crusader.
Is the Angel armour that valuable he doesn't wear it?

Yeah. He guards it. It is the originial armor of the first Chapter Master. It is Terminator Armor. But i'm waiting till the grey knight/ inquistion book comes out so that i can place him as a psyker. As he is a pysker in lore.
Armor of the Crusader is his armor.

Phew. I was afraid it was going to be Sanguinius.

   
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vignor wrote:...large page of text...

Thank you so much
I'll think about it. I've been working on the lore.
I've actually decided to split the 6,000 chapter. The crusaders are nolonger recongizable to their ordinary battle brother from the campaigning portion of the chapter.
Plus 6,000 is a huge number of marines. SO in order for me to get rid of that number. I was planning splitting the chapter in half. 3,000 would stay the Crusaders and the other 3,000 the crusading elements would become a new Chapter.
I forgot to add that lore. My bad :S
But anyway i will try and find a good drawback that would break a chapter if it was ever found out.
I liked the idea of Rampancy where a marine basically starts to develop individualism. Thats what i have decided to do. Make a more Individualistic chapter. Where each marine seeks his own dependencies. This is a great strength but a great risk at the same time. Like how I have marines that are extremely bold and go immedately into the fight without a second thought. And the rivalery in the chapter is huge.
Plus i was planning on adding the Ranking System sometime.
I forget it. But it is completely different than any other chapter.
So basically i'm going to have unlucky amount of aspriants turn into a darker thing where their psychic potential devours them. So I am going to give them a drawback.
But I don't know what D:
I would like some ideas on it.

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Sorry my fault.
Forgot about that.

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The Storm Crusaders Ranks
Neophyte- First rank of the chapter, first inducted into the chapter
Initaite- Astrates getting use to new physiclogical state. Subject to 5 tests. And sent to become a Warrior or a Guardian.
Warrior- Primary rank of the chapter ( Tactical, assault, devastor marine)
-Crusader (2nd rank)- Crusaders rank in the Crusading Companies
-Master- Rank given to those who exceed in tank command
Knight- Leaders of the warriors and Knights. (Sergeants)
Librarian- Mage- Sorcerer- Magi- Pysker of the rank of Lexi
Templar-Veterans of many campaigns. (Veterans, SternGuard and Vanguard Veterans who have claimed full status and have been allowed to access relics like powerweapons and relicblades. SternGuards are allowed to use plasma weaponry, and new weaponry.)
Guardian-pyskers with exceedingly powerful pyschic powers. Trained to use the Nemsis Force Weapons are all part of the 15th company.
Librarian-Master Mage- Higher rank of the Libarius. Main bulk of Libarius.
Master Librarian- 2nd highest rank of the Libarius
Chief Librarian- Lord of the Mystics- At least 6 Chief Librarians at one time.
Lord- Veterans who bare terminator armor. (Also veteran sergeants)
Regent- Command Squad members of the Commanders
Commander- Captains of the chapter. (3rd,4th,5th,6th,7th,8th,9th,11th,12th, 14th, 16th, 17th, 18th, 19th. 30th companies have captains) Are all part of either the 1st 21st, or Alpha Squadron
First Knight- Honor Guard of the chapter
First Templar- Leader of the outer council.
Lord Commander- Leaders of the chapter. (1st, 2nd, 10th, 13th, 21st, 22nd, 23rd, 24th, 25th, 26th, 27th, 28th 29th)
First Guardian- Captain of the 15th
Grand Guardian- Leader of the High Chapter Council (only 6 members.)
Grand Templar- Chapter Master of the Storm Crusaders.
Grand Commander- Lord and leader of all Chapters of the Storm Crusaders Geneseed.
-note- this is just a rough draft. If you guys believe this is a little too much just tell me. As it was confusing to write.

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Just saying, Grand Commander doesn't sound nearly cool enough for the leader of multiple chapters.

   
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battle Brother Lucifer wrote:Just saying, Grand Commander doesn't sound nearly cool enough for the leader of multiple chapters.

Couldn't think of anything
My mind went blank.
It was either that or Commander Commander.

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How about something cool, like the Arch Templar of (insert name of the main Planet/ solar system of your chapters)

   
 
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