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yep that's right, but who knows. The Astartes could turn into a disaster everything...and knowing enough the Imperial Fists...

1) They are hitting themselves with the pain glove just because they didn't notice the AI.
2) While hitting themselves will try to destroy the Demiurg.

and thanks to their head strong attitude... they will not retreat. Iron Cage part 2.

*please delete... damn internet connection*

wow!!! i mean WOW!!! this is pure unadulterated class! dark lord seanron, you sir are shakespear in power armour, dickens with a lasgun, or sun tzu screaming WAAAHHHHH!!!!!! just read this whole thread and loved it keep up the amazing work! cant wait for the next installment! thank you!

AI nanobots?
This will not end well, for someone.

Not for anyone, very likely.

You've mention the Tau Eldar SM IG DE and Orks. But the death of a huge warp presence would most certainly wake almost all the Necron worlds. They're attack would grow significantly. and the first order of the Night bringer would be to get his scythe back and awaken the outsider seeing as the Eldar are almost powerless to stop him.

Following on from Zarco, do the Kriin only destroy life forms (like everything that is gribbly).
Or do they destroy EVERYTHING? Cos if they don't...


Ol' Mr. Necron got something to say to you, mate... *clicks neck*




Still loving the fluff!

Awesome fluff....love the Jervis lol

Sweetness!!! Awesome stuff I kinda worried about the Fist tho, those freakin nanobots are gonna try and save the squat heretics. Hope The Fist got some EMP on em great story wondering about alot and cant wait till more more hahaha!

Zarco wrote:You've mention the Tau Eldar SM IG DE and Orks. But the death of a huge warp presence would most certainly wake almost all the Necron worlds. They're attack would grow significantly. and the first order of the Night bringer would be to get his scythe back and awaken the outsider seeing as the Eldar are almost powerless to stop him.

Actually, much like the Tau, the Necrons and the C'Tan know of the Warp, but have no perception of it themselves. The only indicator they would get is the awakening of the Void Dragon (whose awake now, btw, saying I don't pay attention to the old 'crons :p). The Dragon is currently rousing his specialist 'crons from slumber and is 'kicking the proverbial' out a Tyranid Hive Fleet!

It wrote:do the Kriin only destroy life forms (like everything that is gribbly).
Or do they destroy EVERYTHING?

They are semi-biological nanobots, and they go for the gribbly and the shiney no-one is safe not even me! lol


• The Imperial Fists have violently pulled away from the Demiurg Nation. They cripple the Hammer of Ancestry before immediately making for the borders of the Nation. The Chapter begin ‘extracting’ as many pure-bread humans as possible from Demiurg colonies, along with key Mechanicum personnel and ‘liberated’ pieces of Demiurg Technology.


• The Demiurg are slow to react with the crippling of their government, but soon a vast Demiurg warfleet is in hot pursuit of the Fists.


• The Demiurg demand the Kriin also give chase, however the Kriin refuse. The Kriin claim that internal wars are nothing to do with them. The Demiurg postulate that the Fists are no longer part of the Nation, and it is the Kriin’s duty to stop the Fists. The Kriin say they will consider joining the fight then go silent.


• The Fists head west, in the direction of Old Terra.

Dark Lord Seanron wrote:Actually, much like the Tau, the Necrons and the C'Tan know of the Warp, but have no perception of it themselves. The only indicator they would get is the awakening of the Void Dragon (whose awake now, btw, saying I don't pay attention to the old 'crons :p). The Dragon is currently rousing his specialist 'crons from slumber and is 'kicking the proverbial' out a Tyranid Hive Fleet!

In one of the Cain books, the Necrons are awakened on a planet after a space hulk appears in the system. It is mentioned that the warp disruption caused by it arriving woek up the Necron, so if there is a big warp event they might well all wake up.

I think some Necron worlds now in the enlarged Eye of Terror might well have joined the party at least

And here it goes.... computer rebelling once again!

This thread is actually fantastic! I love the way we now have a potential grey goo doomsday scenario on the go.

I love how even the characteristically slow SM are the Demiurg's 'Lightning Fast' attackers.

Nanobots are going to wiped out by the Void Dragon and his Necrons.

IvanTih wrote:Nanobots are going to wiped out by the Void Dragon and his Necrons.

and what if they are going to be used as Necrons ?

a Norm Queen feels it and tyranids eat all

KOS wrote:

IvanTih wrote:Nanobots are going to wiped out by the Void Dragon and his Necrons.

and what if they are going to be used as Necrons ?

Then Void Dragon has bolstered his forces.

A truly brilliant story. More please.

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Just read through, and I must say this is freaking awesome. While my Dark Angels and Necrons aren't getting the spotlight yet, I am thoroughly enjoying the rest of this great fan fiction. I enjoy reading more.

We have ourselves an evolving timeline.
You sir are awesome!

The return of Russ is EPIC! Would the lost great companies (not just the 13th) be reunited with the legion by now or still not?

Also, how do the kriin communicate?
And what's happening with Fuhrer Guilliman?

Also, just a point that may have been debunked (i not know)
Ferrus Manus was beheaded by Fulgrim yes. However, upon his death his body exploded did it not...?
This just reminds me of what happened to the Nightbringer when he was defeated by (enter name here).
Now, there was a theory floating around that the Great Silver Wurm that Ferrus drowned in lava was, in fact a C'tan and that it bonded with him (hence the hands and eyes of liquid silver). So, Nightbringer, as C'tan can be reborn or whatever it is (I'll Be Back)...Ferrus?

Just though it might give you the option.

Stygian Mole wrote:We have ourselves an evolving timeline.
You sir are awesome!

The return of Russ is EPIC! Would the lost great companies (not just the 13th) be reunited with the legion by now or still not?

Also, how do the kriin communicate?
And what's happening with Fuhrer Guilliman?

Also, just a point that may have been debunked (i not know)
Ferrus Manus was beheaded by Fulgrim yes. However, upon his death his body exploded did it not...?
This just reminds me of what happened to the Nightbringer when he was defeated by (enter name here).
Now, there was a theory floating around that the Great Silver Wurm that Ferrus drowned in lava was, in fact a C'tan and that it bonded with him (hence the hands and eyes of liquid silver). So, Nightbringer, as C'tan can be reborn or whatever it is (I'll Be Back)...Ferrus?

Just though it might give you the option.

It's a good idea but the Nightbringer wasn't defeated. It simply escaped after being released by Dark Eldar

In that case I stand corrected, thanks... Still like the idea of Ferrus as a C'tan, it creates...possibilities...

Stygian Mole wrote:In that case I stand corrected, thanks... Still like the idea of Ferrus as a C'tan, it creates...possibilities...

It is a very good idea, in fact it could be that Ferrus as a C'tan (not necessarily the Nightbringer) is some sort of "Synapse" consience holding the Kriin together, or maybe the Kriin are a new form of Necron?

Farther to the east, in the Dead Solar Body designated Antigone’s Tear

• Beneath the crust of the third planet is a vast obsidian pyramid, it’s blackened faces constantly shifting and changing from one geometric configuration to the next. The Pyramid is vast, spanning 3 continents of the dead world.


• The Lord of the pyramid dwells within its central chamber, casting its unfeeling emerald eyes over its latest experiments. Serrated claws on the end of almost a dozen arms slice and probe at living Xenos Flesh.


• Each new cut, each new atrocity is designed to probe into the great mystery of the Xenos Species: its hive mind, and the shadow that precedes it. To harness such a power could finally win a war started at the birth of all known matter.


• With precision belying it’s frightening visage and terrifying nature, the Void Dragon pours its immense intellect and horrifying powers into the unlocking the Shadow in the Warp, the horrifying soul-fear that grips all in their path. The Void Dragon had tinkered with such things before in the form of the Pariah Gene, however actually extinguishing Warp Presences in the way of its army would prove most beneficial indeed.


• To this end, the Dragon has engaged the Tyranids wherever it can locate them. Its silent host slices into the Tyranid Bio-hordes with aplomb, with the Tyranids attempting to avoid the creatures at all costs. The Dragon however has yet to claim its most desired prize: a living Norn Queen. To possess a living queen would give the Dragon its greatest link to the Hive Mind and possibly it’s key to exploiting the Shadow of The Warp.



• However, unbeknownst to the Dragon, on a barren moon littered with both Necron and Tyranid dead, a single injured bio-ship rises from the scorched skies into the upper atmosphere. Its horrific injuries heal with frightening speed, and bio-mechanical appendages start to sprout from its vast bulk. It has succeeded in a task that millions of Tyranids have tried and failed before: it has successfully absorbed and assimilated Necrodermis.

I'm not reading through the all the posts but isn't the emperor forced to sit on the golden throne pre pseudo death to stop demons from coming through?

With his death wouldn't unspeakable horrors be released onto the holy Terra?

Sgt.Sunshine wrote:I'm not reading through the all the posts but isn't the emperor forced to sit on the golden throne pre pseudo death to stop demons from coming through?

With his death wouldn't unspeakable horrors be released onto the holy Terra?

If you're not going to read the posts then there's no point in answering you, the previous posts being the answer to your question!

*Meanwhile somewhere out in space on a planet far far way a Tyranid hive fleet battles an ork waagh......... 10k years later the planet is home to hte biggest baddest orks and the most evolved tyranids.... and the fight still goes on