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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/23 19:09:40
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Fixture of Dakka
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Female Rough Riders would look really cool
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/23 19:13:18
Subject: Female Commisar
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Decrepit Dakkanaut
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Side-saddle rough riders? lol
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"dave you are the definition of old school..." -Viktor Von Domm My P&M Blog :
It's great how just adding a little iconography, and rivets of course, can make something look distinctly 40K-adamsouza
"Ah yes, the sound of riveting.....Swear word after swear word and the clinking of thrown tools" "Nope. It sucks do it again..."- mxwllmdr
"It puts together more terrain, or else it gets the hose again...-dangledorf2.0
"This is the Imperium, there is no peace, there are only rivets" -Vitruvian XVII
"I think rivets are the perfect solution to almost every problem"- Rawson
More buildings for the Building God! -Shasolenzabi
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 14:27:26
Subject: Female Commisar - Done with the build - 9/26/11
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Frenzied Berserker Terminator
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dsteingass wrote:Side-saddle rough riders? lol
Side-saddle is only for "ladies", I don't think I would have to worry about that!
Update time!
I think I'm DONE! It's taken about a month all together, but I did't get much time at night, and sometimes no time on the weekends even to work on it (and sometimes I just didn't feel like it). So, maybe 15 to 20 hours total? Seems about right, maybe more.
Anyway, here she is:
A couple of close-ups of her face and axe:
And of course, the cleavage shot:
So, anything I missed? Anything I need to add? Now is the time to get the last of the WIP comments in! Either way, I'm submitting these pics as my WIP shots for a painting contest. 4 days before the deadline! Not bad for me!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 14:31:41
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Black Captain of Carn Dûm
Were there be dragons....
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Anything you missed  Oooooghhhhhh, let me see ..............  The Paint!
Nice job on her
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"As a customer, I'd really like to like GW, but they seem to hate me." - Ouze
"All politicians are upperclass idiots"
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 14:46:58
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Frenzied Berserker Terminator
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Optio wrote:Anything you missed  Oooooghhhhhh, let me see ..............  The Paint!
I needed unpainted pics to submit for the contest, so paint is just around the corner! I swear!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 15:57:40
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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She looks totally awesome, he hair looks great, and the hat looks a lot better that little bit shorter. You have done an outstanding job and shoul dbe proud of your work.
Next step painting, now i hope you do her justice
NB her boobies look lovely.  ( Y )
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 16:08:51
Subject: Female Commisar
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Crazed Spirit of the Defiler
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Major improvement on the hat
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 16:19:42
Subject: Female Commisar
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Decrepit Dakkanaut
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Fan-frakkin tastick!
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"dave you are the definition of old school..." -Viktor Von Domm My P&M Blog :
It's great how just adding a little iconography, and rivets of course, can make something look distinctly 40K-adamsouza
"Ah yes, the sound of riveting.....Swear word after swear word and the clinking of thrown tools" "Nope. It sucks do it again..."- mxwllmdr
"It puts together more terrain, or else it gets the hose again...-dangledorf2.0
"This is the Imperium, there is no peace, there are only rivets" -Vitruvian XVII
"I think rivets are the perfect solution to almost every problem"- Rawson
More buildings for the Building God! -Shasolenzabi
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 16:26:48
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Frenzied Berserker Terminator
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M0rdain wrote: her boobies look lovely.  ( Y )
Gotta love boobies! I am really glad you guys (and a few girls - including my wife) got me to re-do them!  They did look a bit silly on the first go.
Same goes for the hat! It only took like 20 comments about the hat being too high to get me to re-do it!
@dsteingass- Thanks! I take that to mean I don't need to re-do anyhting else?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 16:27:29
Subject: Female Commisar
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Decrepit Dakkanaut
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No, I think it is perfect!
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"dave you are the definition of old school..." -Viktor Von Domm My P&M Blog :
It's great how just adding a little iconography, and rivets of course, can make something look distinctly 40K-adamsouza
"Ah yes, the sound of riveting.....Swear word after swear word and the clinking of thrown tools" "Nope. It sucks do it again..."- mxwllmdr
"It puts together more terrain, or else it gets the hose again...-dangledorf2.0
"This is the Imperium, there is no peace, there are only rivets" -Vitruvian XVII
"I think rivets are the perfect solution to almost every problem"- Rawson
More buildings for the Building God! -Shasolenzabi
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 17:38:33
Subject: Female Commisar
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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That really is awesome. You've done a grand sculpting job there my friend
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 19:28:25
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Frenzied Berserker Terminator
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Thanks Tipios, I'm proud of it, but it was exhausting! I'm glad I'm on to the next stage!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 19:58:17
Subject: Female Commisar - Done with the build - 9/26/11
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Dipping With Wood Stain
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RSJake wrote:I think I'm DONE! It's taken about a month all together, but I did't get much time at night, and sometimes no time on the weekends even to work on it (and sometimes I just didn't feel like it). So, maybe 15 to 20 hours total? Seems about right, maybe more.
Congratulations! It seems like it was a long way, but the result is amazing: such a sexy and dangerous appearence, and mad somehow. Hats off to your sculpting skills.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 20:30:19
Subject: Female Commisar
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Screaming Shining Spear
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I've been paying attention to your project since you started it. It's amazing to see your efforts from start to finish. At the start I was "meh", but I wanted to see how it would turn out. It's awesome. I hope you win your contest, paint this baby up, and post some more pics for us. I totally think you're going to get props as long as you keep bringing her to the table. Great job man!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 20:59:53
Subject: Female Commisar
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Pyromaniac Hellhound Pilot
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Great work overall! She certainly turned out better that if I would have tried a sculpt from scratch! It is very cool to see you progress through the sculpt of this whole model! Focus on the light at the end of the tunnel!  Keep your momentum going on the last few details. 95% finished is the worst enemy to 100% finished!
A few last pieces of CC:
You have a well executed conversion with the axe there, but you still have a sharp edge where the square bit (power generator or something) meets the haft. It takes away from the realism. Also, it still feels a bit elven, even with the Khorne icon. Have you thought about shaving off the top part and having it be more executioner style?
I think the back of her left arm could use a little extra meat. She looks a bit too twiggy on that side. I think it would look more natural.
The tails of her jacket could use some sanding. There are some sculpty seams that are still visible.
Sorry for the list, I hadn't been by to see her for a while. It seems a little bit like a jerk move to throw a bunch of comments down after the artist has said "I think I'm done!", so I hope these aren't discouraging!
Keep up the good work!
Rawson
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The 104th Vostroyan Mechanized
Rawson's Reboot
Viktor von Domm: nope... can´t do that for the sake of all lving creatures that dwell on earth....
dsteingass: That's like saying "I forgot to tell you who your real father is"
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 21:51:23
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Frenzied Berserker Terminator
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@ishkatar- Thanks! I appreciate that! And, yeah I suppose she would be a bit mad!
@MightyGodzilla- Thank you! I will have at least the base coat on before the weekend, we'll see where we are by then!
@Rawson- Thank you for the C&C! And it's not a jerk move, the arm has been bothering me,I'll see if I can make it look right, it kind of looks like a clay-mation arm...maybe I'll add a bit more to the back of the arm.
The coat doesn't sand well in that area, becasue it is thin and flexes when I try to sand it...I'll try some more.
As for the axe, I'll clean up the Generator area, you are right it seems out of place. I think just cutting off the top of the axe would make it kind of small, but if I clipped the whole blade and moved it all down, that might just do the trick! Kind of like this:

I put the mock-up next to the original...I'll think about it.
I'll see what improvements I can do, and seriously, thanks for the critique.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/26 23:10:18
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Fixture of Dakka
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She's looking fantastic all that hard work payed off in the end.
Best Commisar I've seen
Looking forward to seeing her painted and of course the Rough Riders.....
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 01:22:59
Subject: Female Commisar
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Maniacal Gibbering Madboy
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Fan-Freakin-Tastic!  I also like the possible change to the axe, but it looks good now as well. I'm excited for the paint!
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Check out my Project (B)log! I would love any suggestion or comments you may have.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 14:17:41
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Frenzied Berserker Terminator
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@GiraffeX- Thank you very much! Paint soon! I swear!
@NakedBatBoy- Thanks! I hope you like the altered axe as much as I do! I still need to sand it down a bit and add the arrows back on. But I think it turned out well! Much more Khornate.
I also tried to sand down the rough part of her coat seams, I still have some clean-up to do there, but it's coming along. I might try to add some wrinkles on the sides.
Other side of the axe...ignore the cat hair stuck to her boot.
Here you can see the re-worked left arm. It looks much less like she appeared in a Wallace and Grommit episode. And my attempt to sand down this side of the coat. Fail. but I will work on it.
And last but not least...a scale shot! I can't belive no one has asked me for one yet!
As you can see, she towers over the guardsman! I guess that is OK, since she should be a very imposing figure.
Even considering she that she has on high heels and a tall hat, her eye level is a good head above the gruardsman's.
Well, there you have it. I probably won't add any more pictures till I have the base coats of paint on her, just for a paint-in-progress shot. Thanks again to Rawson for the Final Critique, and thanks to everyone for the support. I know I'm not the only one who posts on Dakka for inspiration and techincal help.
If I don't have PIP shots by monday, one of three things happened; 1) I didn't get finished with cleaning up her coat. 2) I didn't get as far as I wanted to on the base coats. 3) My wife had a baby.
I'm hoping none of these happen, and I can show some progress on Monday! (this sounds heartless, but she's not due to give birth 'till the 11th, and I'm not ready!)
Wish me luck!
RSJake.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 14:47:47
Subject: Female Commisar
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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She does look very menacing next to the guard!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 14:50:58
Subject: Female Commisar
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Phanobi
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would of thought she would of been Slaanesh looking like that.
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http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/463976.page (Space Sharks and Tau)
DJ @ http://www.rockindocradio.net
Mon, Thursday+Fri 06am - 09am EST
We refuse to take sides in this anymore. And we refuse to let you turn us against one another. We know who we are now, we can find our own way between order and chaos...
It's over because we've decided it's over. Now get the hell out of our galaxy! Both of you.
"Whoever takes purple sash is purple, and follows purple leader." I follow purple tau. Theophony
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 15:09:42
Subject: Female Commisar
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Focused Fire Warrior
Where you least expect it...
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Miss Dee wrote:would of thought she would of been Slaanesh looking like that.
Quted for truth
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just because i'm swedish doesent mean that i'm blonde. I just hapen to be anyway |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 15:14:57
Subject: Female Commisar
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Phanobi
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MrTau wrote:Miss Dee wrote:would of thought she would of been Slaanesh looking like that.
Quted for truth
Now where are my boots? and who's gonna pay for my boob job?
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http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/463976.page (Space Sharks and Tau)
DJ @ http://www.rockindocradio.net
Mon, Thursday+Fri 06am - 09am EST
We refuse to take sides in this anymore. And we refuse to let you turn us against one another. We know who we are now, we can find our own way between order and chaos...
It's over because we've decided it's over. Now get the hell out of our galaxy! Both of you.
"Whoever takes purple sash is purple, and follows purple leader." I follow purple tau. Theophony
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 16:57:49
Subject: Female Commisar
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Frenzied Berserker Terminator
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Miss Dee wrote:would of thought she would of been Slaanesh looking like that.
Why can't she be mean and nasty and a brutal, blood thirsty killer who takes skulls for the skull throne and not dress nice? She's not a Berzerker after all....
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 23:20:54
Subject: Female Commisar
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Maniacal Gibbering Madboy
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I think people are just being sexist! She can dress however she wants! I think I prefer it this way actually...
But yeah, she's frackin' huge! I like that's she's a bit larger than others. Maybe that's why no simple guardsman would dare make a move on her without her ok.  I also like the new axe a lot! It's a lot more menacing.
Also, where did you get those skulls? They look good!
Best of luck with painting and with the baby!
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Check out my Project (B)log! I would love any suggestion or comments you may have.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 23:27:11
Subject: Female Commisar
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Lord Commander in a Plush Chair
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Wow, that's some improvement from the first page.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 23:34:31
Subject: Female Commisar
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Plummeting Black Templar Thunderhawk Pilot
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Wow....just skipped from the first pictures of her with the beginnings of her coat to this and for a moment didn't believe it was the same model...this is amazing!!!!!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/27 23:48:17
Subject: Female Commisar
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Decrepit Dakkanaut
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I think she makes the first...and last move on many traitor guardsmen.
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/09/27 23:48:54
"dave you are the definition of old school..." -Viktor Von Domm My P&M Blog :
It's great how just adding a little iconography, and rivets of course, can make something look distinctly 40K-adamsouza
"Ah yes, the sound of riveting.....Swear word after swear word and the clinking of thrown tools" "Nope. It sucks do it again..."- mxwllmdr
"It puts together more terrain, or else it gets the hose again...-dangledorf2.0
"This is the Imperium, there is no peace, there are only rivets" -Vitruvian XVII
"I think rivets are the perfect solution to almost every problem"- Rawson
More buildings for the Building God! -Shasolenzabi
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/28 02:06:55
Subject: Female Commisar
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Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker
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<<a happy traitor guard
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Chaos rules you all drool! Blood for the Blood God!
10,000 pts Black Legion
2,000 pts Traitor Catchian Guard (1067th).
8,000 point Sam Hain Eldar.
2,000 pts Squat Biker Force.
1,500 Orc Hoard (painting for a friend).
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/09/28 02:12:36
Subject: Re:Female Commisar
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Nasty Nob on Warbike with Klaw
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Pretty decent job. Better than I could do.
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Read my story at:
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/515293.page#5420356
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