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Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

yup...patrick is one honorific ork by himself^^ or was that horrific?^^

   
Made in us
Rogue Inquisitor with Xenos Bodyguards





Eastern edge

Both! ^^

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
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Eastern edge

When Needa-Breatha arrived, Magnotz' Nobz escorted him to the main warpavillion. Magnotz and all of the other bosses and Nobz were there as well. Magnotz spoke then. "You'z done good! but ta be honest, I am surprised wit how runty yer are." Magnotz had to add that dig. "Dat makes dis even better fer ya!, Now we rename yaz Neednotz., An now ya get yer own warband, not just da Kommando mob ya been runnin' with." Need blinked, his own warband? "Now go out der an' let 'em know who's da boss, make it snappy, we got a WAAAGH!!! ta run ya know." Three days it took to beat his mobs down, all of the Nobz in charge bested by Neednotz! but his Kommandos got to call him Needa-Breatha when they were alone.

News of a new warband leader came eventually to the attention of the human command, and they knew that this was a bad sign, to them it meant the WAAAGH!!! was a growing threat that needed to be dealt with and fast.

While Magnotz' Zagnotz' and Neednotz" forces were having success on Narkutzk Prime, Gragnotz on Secundus and Ragnotz on Tertius were dealing with refreshed human forces as the Konfederation had landed fresh men, tanks and artillery on those worlds. Airpower was deadlocked on these worlds as the humans would also have air craft to match the Orks own air assets.

The situation was severe enough that new kunnin' plans were to be drawn up and made reality by the Bruvva's notz.







"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

hmmm now needa with his own warband... i am contemplating the thought if this will be ablessing ore a curse fr the waaaagh!...because needa somehow was succesful as he faught in new ways and that worked.... i think now might be a case to fall in in the ways of his brothers....migt cause some problems...but a good narrative idea nevertheless and makes me eager to se how this turns out!

   
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Eastern edge

Viktor von Domm wrote:hmmm now needa with his own warband... i am contemplating the thought if this will be ablessing ore a curse fr the waaaagh!...because needa somehow was succesful as he faught in new ways and that worked.... i think now might be a case to fall in in the ways of his brothers....migt cause some problems...but a good narrative idea nevertheless and makes me eager to se how this turns out!


The Bruvvas Notz will show how Kunnin' dey are.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

aha... we will see and we will be waiting^^

   
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Eastern edge

Viktor von Domm wrote:aha... we will see and we will be waiting^^


Some of the solutions to the problems they are running into will be amazing ly complex and kunnin' others shall be brutally simple in their kunnin' execution.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

lol kunnin`all over

   
Made in us
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Eastern edge

Kunnin' yet brutal or brutal ye Kunnin'

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in us
Armored Iron Breaker




Lookin' fur daemons ta' fight!

Very nice depiction of the ork language/society.
Hope to see more soon about the exploits of Warboss Magnotz!

Teh Emprah Protects
 
   
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Eastern edge

Beastmaster wrote:Very nice depiction of the ork language/society.
Hope to see more soon about the exploits of Warboss Magnotz!


Thank you kindly, I have been in a slump of late, but I have a chance now to re-kindle the story so keep watching.

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

about time mate -.-

   
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Eastern edge

Sorry vik, you know what happens when the creative juices get bottled up and no longer flowing. But now they are a flowin' again!

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
Made in de
Shroomin Brain Boy





Berlin Germany

creative juices bottled up.... sounds like you might write your stories with blood? *shudders* let it flow but don“t spill too much of it^^

   
Made in us
Agile Revenant Titan






Oregon

This is a great story! I love the Orkish language!

Eldar -5000 points 
   
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Eastern edge

Ogryn wrote:This is a great story! I love the Orkish language!


Careful now! GW might recruit me or sumfing!

"Your mumblings are awakening the sleeping Dragon, be wary when meddling the affairs of Dragons, for thou art tasty and go good with either ketchup or chocolate. "
Dragons fear nothing, if it acts up, we breath magic fire that turns them into marshmallow peeps. We leaguers only cry rivets!



 
   
 
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