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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Madison, WI

Well... I *AM* an old man. At least I'm consistent!

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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Very Calvin's Dad.

Shot of hull with proto wing. does the nose need stretched?

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Berlin Germany

dunno what else you´ve planned for the nose... but a lil something to make it not look too skull like

and at git...I like the smell of integrity at high noon

   
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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Madison, WI

I think if you add a cowl (like the model on the previous page) you'll be just fine.

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Green Bay, Wisconson

Not sure where your going with it, but it 's getting intresting!

 
   
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Chaumont, France

Well, that piece is wondrous...

Can't believe what you achieve with your reds !!

You're an inspiration (and I just love the LS Storm )

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Fixture of Dakka






Wiltshire, UK

Looking very interesting Gadget.

   
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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Thanks guys

This clarify?


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Tail, rather than nose, needs to be longer, methinks.

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Fixture of Dakka






Wiltshire, UK

hmm I think the green part needs to connect to the engine like the original.

Looking good though, reminds me of the pod racers from Star Wars.

   
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Liche Priest Hierophant






Also, increase the angle of the wingtips. Make them closer to the horizontal than they currently are.

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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

GiraffeX wrote:hmm I think the green part needs to connect to the engine like the original.

Looking good though, reminds me of the pod racers from Star Wars.

Yeah, I agree, the plan is for them to connect - I just haven't figured out how yet. And I think Thanks for the pod race comment!

Anvildude wrote:Also, increase the angle of the wingtips. Make them closer to the horizontal than they currently are.

Yup, again, that's the plan!

Really appreciating the feedback on this guys, am definitely feeling positive!

graven

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Berlin Germany

for connecting the green with the rest I think you should use the very thinnest plastic card you have at hand... on both sides... once riveted it will blend in

one question tho...the SM flyer and the COD parts all mimic the eagle in parts... any chance you could shape the green stuff you used for the wings to look a bit like an eagle? it is still a bit blocky looking and once you´ve solved that it will be a perfect thing!

   
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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

I shall indeed Vik! The green plastruct is the frame, if you like - detailing is to be overlayed still. Also there will be 7 small circles along the leading edge of each wing (4+3) as that's part of the original's aesthetic.

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Berlin Germany

ah, I see...me of little faith I never should have doubted^^

   
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Mastering Non-Metallic Metal







Nice bit of conversion work you have going on there, Graven.

Watching with interest.

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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Thanks chaps! Couple of hull/wing shots, you can see the las and missile mounts; also, thoughts on wing icon?



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Have moved stubber slightly also. Thoughts?

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Earlobe deep in doo doo

Personally I think the straight line doesn't work right of bat I can't think of an aircraft with a dead straight wing it would need aerofoiling for a start. Personally I'd say cutting the central plate down so it meets the engine just in from the nacelle would do a world of good.

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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Curse you llama! fixed, also, I've taken the feathered wings off (for now).

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Berlin Germany

good decision... the wings just don´t mix that well with the blocky GW look on that vehicle...

   
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Mysterious Techpriest







Thats a really great idea, I'd have to agree with lama on the wings, have you given the tail any thoughts yet?




 
   
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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Tail is the part I'm going to fret over last How do we feel about rhino top hatches (the round cupola variety) over the flat green spaces?

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Earlobe deep in doo doo

To be honest I feel it would clutter it up to much. To improve the shape of the wing I'd cut it back and then take a file to the edge to at least take the straight 90* of the edge of the wing.

"But me no buts! Our comrades get hurt. Our friends die. Falkenburg is a knight who swore an oath to serve the church and to defend the weak. He'd be the first to tell you to stop puling and start planning. Because what we are doing-at risk to ourselves-is what we have sworn to do. The West relies on us. It is a risk we take with pride. It is an oath we honour. Even when some soft southern burgher mutters about us, we know the reason he sleeps soft and comfortable, why his wife is able to complain about the price of cabbages as her most serious problem and why his children dare to throw dung and yell "Knot" when we pass. It's because we are what we are. For all our faults we stand for law and light.
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Affton, MO. USA

I'm digging where this is headed. glad you moved the pintle bolter down, it was looking too high up there. I think if you save the angel wings for decorative attachment to the tail section later it will look much better as well. I'd skip the rhino top hatches on the green part, maybe add another layer of plastic card on the green spots in areas to break up the large flat. Or to emphasize where the wing guns are at you could add a strip of pc to those locations going back, then a piece connecting them together so the ammo can travel from the hopper to the guns.

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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Here's some progress, thanks for all the input.

Obviously some smoothing to be done!
I'll try to get a shot of the underside asap.

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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Madison, WI

Ah, now that's beginning to look like something. How did you do the green stuff plates?

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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Cheers! That's flames of war bases I've used.
butt shot:

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Mastering Non-Metallic Metal







Yeah that's working.

What are you planning for the gap between the green and the engines? Fill it? Leave it? Match the other side with a semi-circle hole?

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Berlin Germany

I am glad you didn´t went for the hatches... where would have been the point of these? the fleur de lils looks very good there! the flat one even better!

   
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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Mostly, on my phone.

Fill it, probably. There may be cabling or struts for support, not fully settled yet

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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far, away...

Looking mighty fine. I'm a fan of flyers and this one is going to be great

No suggestions at present, think you've covered most bases from what I can see and read...

   
 
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