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Maverick swore under his breath.

"Commissar. Commander Coc0 is still down there."

Nikev typed a few commands on the comms-panel he had, in the navigator's seat.

"I have instructed him to get aboard my personal ship. He can wirelessly command it to take off from there. It has no defenses, though, so we'll have to fly cover for it."

Gregersen looked upon the battlefield, littered with the dead and dying. TGN had disapeared along with Ludd, with the Thruster commander gone the battle was quickly won by the combined effort of Gregersen Space Wolves and the other commanders forces.

Raising his voice Gregersen roared to his wolves, "Sons of Russ we have won, this planet is ours. We must now go to Commisar Nikevs' aid and slay the traitor Warlord Maverick, prepare to move, we have the coordinates, that would pay for imprisoning "The Fang."

With this said Gregersens' forces moved to Nikeves location, not knowin anything that had transpired there. But soon they would find out, the wolves would be suprised by an enemy they could not possibly fathom.

Gregersen wrote:Gregersen looked upon the battlefield, littered with the dead and dying. TGN had disapeared along with Ludd, with the Thruster commander gone the battle was quickly won by the combined effort of Gregersen Space Wolves and the other commanders forces.

Raising his voice Gregersen roared to his wolves, "Sons of Russ we have won, this planet is ours. We must now go to Commisar Nikevs' aid and slay the traitor Warlord Maverick, prepare to move, we have the coordinates, that would pay for imprisoning "The Fang."

With this said Gregersens' forces moved to Nikeves location, not knowin anything that had transpired there. But soon they would find out, the wolves would be suprised by an enemy they could not possibly fathom.

IGNORE POST

The battle still rages on the planet.

The battle can not be won through 1 post.

OOC -He meant a particular part of the battle a skirmish i think the one i was in that involved ludd and that fething vortex grenade. ( HA i fixed it)

The glass ninja wrote:He meant a particular part of the battle a skirmish i think the one i was in that involved ludd and that fething vortex grenade.

IGNORE POST

(He didn't say OOC xD)

My bad, triple post :S

The glass ninja wrote:He meant a particular part of the battle a skirmish i think the one i was in that involved ludd and that fething vortex grenade.

IGNORE POST

(He didn't say OOC xD)

Maverick wrote:

The glass ninja wrote:He meant a particular part of the battle a skirmish i think the one i was in that involved ludd and that fething vortex grenade.

IGNORE POST

(He didn't say OOC xD)

(OOC - HAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAH! No he summed it up. He said the Thruster Commander, of course being Maverick, being gone the forces wraped up the ground battle.......not possible.....at all...the battle on the ground still wages. There are many more tricks up this sleeveless guys jimmies....just you all wait)

Commissar NIkev wrote:

Maverick wrote:

The glass ninja wrote:He meant a particular part of the battle a skirmish i think the one i was in that involved ludd and that fething vortex grenade.

IGNORE POST

(He didn't say OOC xD)

(OOC - HAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAH! No he summed it up. He said the Thruster Commander, of course being Maverick, being gone the forces wraped up the ground battle.......not possible.....at all...the battle on the ground still wages. There are many more tricks up this sleeveless guys jimmies....just you all wait)

Oh, yes. Nikev and I have plotted an "excrement tornado" for you lot to deal with, so have fun with this xD

Coc0 charged forward with all his bulk through half a dozen walls. Bashing aside many corrupted troops along the way.

After a few more walls he burst through one final wall and had a peculiar feeling. He looked to the left and saw Nikev and Maverick run through the hallway he had burst into and coming to a halt before him.

Both Nikev and Maverick looked at this dreadnought that had just burst through the wall in wonder. When Nikev said:

"Who are you?" After which Maverick unsheathed his sword, preparing for the worst.

"It... is... I, commissar. "Commander... coc0... at your... service." The dreadnought answered in its deep mechanical voice.

The dreadnought then grabbed maverick with his left dreadnought claw and held him before the sarcophagus.

"So...., we... meet again... lord... Maverick..." He said to him.

Coc0loc0 wrote:Coc0 charged forward with all his bulk through half a dozen walls. Bashing aside many corrupted troops along the way.

After a few more walls he burst through one final wall and had a peculiar feeling. He looked to the left and saw Nikev and Maverick run through the hallway he had burst into and coming to a halt before him.

Both Nikev and Maverick looked at this dreadnought that had just burst through the wall in wonder. When Nikev said:

"Who are you?" After which Maverick unsheathed his sword, preparing for the worst.

"It... is... I, commissar. "Commander... coc0... at your... service." The dreadnought answered in its deep mechanical voice.

The dreadnought then grabbed maverick with his left dreadnought claw and held him before the sarcophagus.

"So...., we... meet again... lord... Maverick..." He said to him.

This cannot be correct. Nikev and I are already in a fighter plane leaving...

Maverick wrote:

Coc0loc0 wrote:Coc0 charged forward with all his bulk through half a dozen walls. Bashing aside many corrupted troops along the way.

After a few more walls he burst through one final wall and had a peculiar feeling. He looked to the left and saw Nikev and Maverick run through the hallway he had burst into and coming to a halt before him.

Both Nikev and Maverick looked at this dreadnought that had just burst through the wall in wonder. When Nikev said:

"Who are you?" After which Maverick unsheathed his sword, preparing for the worst.

"It... is... I, commissar. "Commander... coc0... at your... service." The dreadnought answered in its deep mechanical voice.

The dreadnought then grabbed maverick with his left dreadnought claw and held him before the sarcophagus.

"So...., we... meet again... lord... Maverick..." He said to him.

This cannot be correct. Nikev and I are already in a fighter plane leaving...

(OOC -
I think we should fill him in on the 'idea'. I'll PM him with the info....


But pretty much, Coc0loc0 is in a shuttle that has no outer defenses already and is flying with me and Maverick. Maverick flying as escort.......so....thats how it is so far.)

OOC - ok, so we're leaving this fortress world behind?

IC: Craxas shook slightly at the g-force this thunderhawk produced,personally he did not like thunderhawks or the idea of flying through planetary atmospheres, 15 thunderhawks headed towards the surface none would fire the imperium would believe that that they are space marines coming to reinforce the battle & would not be suspicious of where they landed
Suddenly Craxas communicator came online although it he found it eventually it took him a while to find it it was not his left power-glove he slid the panel to the side to reveal the communicator screen .

Moroses face appeared on the screen "Craxas....*static*....you'll be landing on.......the*static*...side in fifteen minutes...*static*....once there you'll lead your brothers around the battle between the imperium & slaneeshe forces ...*static*....stop for no one imperial or definitely not slaneesh kill them if they get in your way....*static*....now the path you'll take is through many underground sewers that is probably crawling with monster or such to kill....you'll start off deep in the jungles of the planet along the way there will be many slaneeshe skulls to claim for the skull throne....over and out" with that final gesture the screen went black & Craxas stared around the ship the chaos marines were doing last minute tweaks & checks to their weapons.

At last Craxas thought as he felt the familiar feeling of landing on the ground the thunderhawks landed in an orderly fashion & his marines walk off the ramps as Craxas unfastened himself and walked he could the sounds of battle though they were far away he still would keep an eye out. "Alight you miserable scum the enemy stands in the way of my prize....we have donned the loyalist power armour so we may surprise & destroy as many of them as possible...but that is not our objective...you'll stay in line & not get carried away with...." "My lord!!!...someone or something is approaching" Craxas turned around to see maybe three dozen frightened guardsmen running through the bushes.

"boy .....are......we......glad *pant*...to see marines" one of the guardsmen said cheerfully as he came to the closest marine which he noticed was a terminator, he noticed the terminators weaponry how it had a evil look about it. "What the fu...." was all he could say before Craxas swiftly chopped off the guardsmen's head "Kill them all spare no one!!!" Craxas roared the terrified gaurdsmen tried to sprint back into the bushes but they were brought down by bolter fire the dying guards had there heads ripped off one by one and their skulls offered to khorne.

Craxas docorated his loyalist armour with the skin of the foolish guardsmen who dared to stand in front of him. "We move out now no rest no pause!!" Craxas roared and then marched onward his warband following closely behind

occ: to be continued

OOC - The above post lacks punctuation, I will not read an endless wall of text. Did he even receive that codex dictionatus?

Coc0loc0 wrote:OOC - The above post lacks punctuation, I will not read an endless wall of text. Did he even receive that codex dictionatus?

The Codex Dictionaratus is an important tome of the Ordo Grammaticus, responsible for producing all the other codexes in existance. The Ordo Grammaticus is lead by Inquisitor Lord Grammarus Nazus, and he is solely responsible for spellchecking the imperium's paperwork.

Maverick wrote:

Coc0loc0 wrote:OOC - The above post lacks punctuation, I will not read an endless wall of text. Did he even receive that codex dictionatus?

The Codex Dictionaratus is an important tome of the Ordo Grammaticus, responsible for producing all the other codexes in existance. The Ordo Grammaticus is lead by Inquisitor Lord Grammarus Nazus, and he is solely responsible for spellchecking the imperium's paperwork.

Emperor Save you if you misspell!

Commissar NIkev wrote:

Maverick wrote:

Coc0loc0 wrote:OOC - The above post lacks punctuation, I will not read an endless wall of text. Did he even receive that codex dictionatus?

The Codex Dictionaratus is an important tome of the Ordo Grammaticus, responsible for producing all the other codexes in existance. The Ordo Grammaticus is lead by Inquisitor Lord Grammarus Nazus, and he is solely responsible for spellchecking the imperium's paperwork.

Emperor Save you if you misspell!

There are fates worse than death, Commissar.

TGN was walking down a corridor towards the bridge of his ship when one of the bridge crew walked past him "Sir your personal dictator class vessel has arrived. I was told to tell you by the captain that your family is well and your daughter misses (snigers) her Daddywadykins " .With that TGN snapped he grabbed the man by the throat, his eyes flashed blue and the mans eyes and ears and nose started to bleed he dropped him as as he started to thrash and blood began to seep from his pores " all crew look at the footage from camera A165 if anyone repeats what they heard in the last transmission then that will happen to them." TGN mutters into his whole ship commlink. He was almost to the forge world and wanted to be prepared.

The glass ninja wrote:TGN was walking down a corridor towards the bridge of his ship when one of the bridge crew walked past him "Sir your personal dictator class vessel has arrived. I was told to tell you by the captain that your family is well and your daughter misses (snigers) her Daddywadykins " .With that TGN snapped he grabbed the man by the throat, his eyes flashed blue and the mans eyes and ears and nose started to bleed he dropped him as as he started to thrash and blood began to seep from his pores " all crew look at the footage from camera A165 if anyone repeats what they heard in the last transmission then that will happen to them." TGN mutters into his whole ship commlink. He was almost to the forge world and wanted to be prepared.

IGNORE - no fleets, and the grammar is poor enough to make me, a brit, cry with pain at the failings in this use of the queen's english.

It isn't a fleet and ill try and sort my grammar and i thought this was Nikevs thread anyway and if people keep moaning about grammar and restricting things that any one of the commanders could have then i am leaving this thread.

(OOC Listen i didnt mean the planet, but the battle for the city, and also, sense Maverick was gone I was referinng to Ludd being gone, he is a thruster commander if im not mistaken dont ignore the post, i was just saying that the battle was one...)-_-)

(ooc: Also realy our grammer needs to be better. Were trying to speak English, not American slang.)

ooc: Really use logic dont correct, others peoples forums, and say to ignore, them, no one person here is better than another, so yeesh get over your superiority complexes, just voicing oppinion here.

OOC:Nikev i refered to the battle around the city being won, just to clarify.

OOC-I agree i may have overreacted about the grammar thing. i don't actually know whats wrong. Oh and i forgot to mention this but English is Germanic and dosen't belong to the Monarchy anyway i am Scottish and not British. It may be a part of Britain but it is clearly a different country. we have a different flag crown jewels and history for Feth's sake.

The glass ninja wrote:OOC-I agree i may have overreacted about the grammar thing. i don't actually know whats wrong. Oh and i forgot to mention this but English is Germanic and dosen't belong to the Monarchy anyway i am Scottish and not British. It may be a part of Britain but it is clearly a different country. we have a different flag crown jewels and history for Feth's sake.

I think Braveheart was enough to clear up any confusion about that. Good on ya for knowing bout the crown jewels btw

The glass ninja wrote:OOC-I agree i may have overreacted about the grammar thing. i don't actually know whats wrong. Oh and i forgot to mention this but English is Germanic and dosen't belong to the Monarchy anyway i am Scottish and not British. It may be a part of Britain but it is clearly a different country. we have a different flag crown jewels and history for Feth's sake.

Shusht, bawbag, i'm a scotsman too. Dismount the high horse. xD

Literally, your posts are just a wall of text. Without punctuation, it's just words, and it's a proper mission to try to read it. Please, for the love of god and all that is holy, use the codex dictionaratus!

OOC- Ludd's back people... where do the thrusters want my psyker goodness and how can I fit into this plot?

Cadet_Commissar_Ludd wrote:OOC- Ludd's back people... where do the thrusters want my psyker goodness and how can I fit into this plot?

Just unload a massive aching ball of thrusting psychic firepower into anything that has legs and isn't thrusting.

OOC- Nice to see .you ludd were is your heretical rear in this RP so i can hunt you down. And Maverick i am an SMP supporter for life especially the old fashion one.

OOC- I am awaking from my sleep, energised with the magyks of the warp and thrusting power. Where my 'rear' as you heathens call it is wherever the hell I want it to be...