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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/21 00:19:16
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Apprehensive Inquisitorial Apprentice
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Great color choice on this guy! The black and gold armor paired with the khaki pants and blue accent really sell it for me. I DO think that he has a bit too much contrast around his groin, to the point of being comical. From what I know about his character, he isn't the one to walk around with a giant, flesh-colored testicle-pouch on display for everyone to check out. Other than that, I think he's really great so far.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/25 14:19:20
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Khorne Chosen Marine Riding a Juggernaut
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Cheers, Dexter! So glad you like him! As for his groin, sheesh, that stupid codpiece! I originally had it in a different colour, but that looked even worse. Anyway, maybe I'll return to it at some point, but only if inspiration strikes  Until then, here's Esteban Revas, complete with base. I think I am going to call him finished:
Not only is Esteban one of my oldest INQ28 conversions, but also one of the characters with the most substantial backstory in my collection, so allow me to share his background with you as well:
Esteban Revas was born the second son to Haaruthian noble and famous war hero Bestrald Salazar Revas (first through the breach at Aisenfeld!). With his brother Ramon inheriting the vast family holdings, it was obvious that Esteban’s career lay with the military. He quickly had to learn, however, that this life pursuit would always be overshadowed by the exploits of a father he had scarcely known and whose only legacy to him, apart from a pair of enormous footsteps to fill, was the service of one Trooper Salvador “Sal” Koltz, a crafty and unexpectedly cunning individual, having sworn his life to serving the Revas family after being saved on the battlefield by Bestrald Revas.
Esteban served diligently in the Haaruthian military, making Captain rank in the 126th Haaruthian Dragoons before his 30th birthday and earning his fair share of recommendations and orders of merit. However, he could never quite shake off the feeling that he wasn’t living up to the Revas family name.
As is the norm with Haaruthian aristocrats, Esteban lived by a code of honour and chivalry that, though romantic, was often thoroughly at odds with the realities on the battlefields. So while the upper echelons of the Haaruthian Dragoons would pride themselves on being chivalrous and gentlemanly, the rank and file would quickly find out that honour and sportsmanship held very little value in trenches and on battlefields across the sector. To Esteban’s merit, and maybe through regular contact with his rather down to earth retainer Koltz, he saw the problems of the clashing philosophies of warfare, and while imbued with a certain arrogance and pompousness, wouldn’t tolerate unfairness and wanton wasting of lives by fellow officers. However, this led his superiors to suspect that “Bestrald’s boy” might be too soft for the soldier’s life, and Esteban found himself relegated to more and more pedestrian assignments, which enforced his feeling of failing the family name.
His one escape from this feeling was to seek out an area of expertise that would not fall under the long shadow cast by his late father, so he took up Haaruthian fencing, dedicating himself to becoming a swordsman without compare. His performance in the various contests held both on his homeworld and between different guard regiments earned him the praise of his superiors and the rank of “Regimental Champion”.
It was in this capacity that Revas was called back to Haaruthia along with his regiment when the world was hosting the Festival of the Sword Saint: The aim of this event, held every ten years in honour of the Imperial martyr Sabasto, was to select the best swordsman of the entire sector.
Esteban trained for the festival like he had never trained for anything in his life, seeing this as his one chance at eclipsing his father’s glory and thus finally proving worthy of the family name. And his efforts were even magnified when it became known that Lord Sebastianus Danver Balzepho Vlachen, the sector governor’s own grand-nephew would be attending the festival: The man’s enthusiasm for swordplay was well known, and Esteban hoped that he would maybe even be able to suitably impress him to be offered a position in his personal retinue. That would give him a chance to finally gain advancement and prove his worth.
Esteban was overjoyed when he was among those selected to serve as liaison officers for Lord Vlachen’s retinue, hoping to earn his ear and sympathies even before the actual festival began. Those hopes were rebuked, though, when Esteban’s superior told him that he was not to serve the lord himself, but rather Inquisitor Erasmus Gotthardt, travelling with the retinue. Esteban had heard whispers of the man, of course: Gotthardt had been suspected of being an accomplice in the attack on a fellow Inquisitor, but the Inquisitorial Conclave at Pervatia Secundus had exonerated him. Still, even beyond the Ordos, a shadow of doubt remained. Esteban felt like he had been passed over yet again.
His first meeting with Inquisitor Gotthardt did little to put his mind at rest: Gotthardt seemed like a frail and broken man, still weak from his questioning at the hands of his fellow Inquisitors. Still, Esteban was determined to perform admirably in his service as a guide and liaison to the Inquisitor, even though he was barely able to mask his disappointment.
Over the next days, though, Esteban had little time to lament his misfortune, for as a Regimental Champion, he was himself a participant in the festival, trying to excel for the honour of his regiment. The rest of his time was filled with answering all kinds of questions from Inquisitor Gotthardt, whose frail appearance couldn’t conceal a razor sharp mind.
Esteban’s performance in the contest was flawless: Where his superiors might have been able to stall his advance in the regiment, they were powerless against his brilliance with a pair of fencing irons: Though the festival had attracted noted swordsmen from all over the sector, one enemy after another was defeated by Esteban’s superior swordsmanship. And even Lord Vlachen had begun to notice the young captain winning such honour for both his regiment and his homeworld.
The presence of such a high dignitary was not a coincidence, of course: Haaruthia’s noble houses had long been trying to elevate their world in the sector, and they hoped to be able to interest Lord Vlachen in Haaruthia’s young ruler, archduchess Cyrine di Cristofalo Civatte. If they were able to arrange a marriage, Haaruthia’s ruling family would finally have ties to the Imperial house governing the sector, elevating the world’s importance above that of its rivals. So the Haaruthian aristocrats made sure that Lord Vlachen and the archduchess met each other at as many social functions as possible, and the fact that a Haaruthian had managed to become such a likely candidate to win the contest was an additional boon to the plan.
The final day of the competition came, and the fight between Esteban and his last remaining rival, a master swordsman from the Alcain system, drew a massive crowd. Many nobles from all around the sector were in attendance, as were the archduchess and Lord Vlachen. It was in front of this crowd that Esteban managed to best his opponent, winning the contest and becoming, for all intents and purposes, the best fencer in the whole sector.
Esteban was beyond himself with joy. He had managed to become the pride of both his homeworld and regiment, and he nearly burst with pride as Lord Vlachen himself toasted his victory during the lavish celebrations. In fact, the sector governor’s relative suggested a friendly sparring between Esteban and himself, wanting to “sample the best Haaruthia had to offer”. It seemed like Esteban was at long last given the recognition he had craved for such a long time. Only Inquisitor Gotthardt seemed taciturn and sullen, which Esteban saw as petty jealousy on the old man’s part.
In any case, Esteban was determined to perform at his absolute best during the sparring match with Lord Vlachen: The latter seemed like a man of honour, and Esteban was reasonably certain Lord Vlachen was testing him, trying to ascertain whether Esteban was worthy of his time.
Shortly before the fight, Esteban’s superior requested his presence. Esteban suspected that it was merely to wish him luck, but he was wrong. The superior made it perfectly clear that Esteban was to lose the match. Haaruthia’s future was at stake here, and the petty ambitions of one man could not be allowed to stand in the way of Haaruthia’s manifest destiny. In order for a possible match between Lord Vlachen and the archduchess to remain an option, the lord was not to be slighted by losing a sparring match against a mere soldier.
Esteban’s insides turned to ice. But he was a soldier, so he obeyed.
The fight came, and Esteban quickly found out that losing convincingly could be just as difficult a task as winning: Lord Vlachen may have been a powerful noble, but he was an average fencer at best. But Esteban did as he was told, losing the match to the nobles’ polite applause.
Then, with the battle already decided, Lord Vlachen contemptuously gave Esteban a deep cut on his cheek, using the sharp point of his dueling irons. Turning away from his bleeding opponent and facing the crowd, Lord Vlachen announced that he was disappointed that even Haaruthia’s best fencer was not able to best him, claiming the title of the best swordsman in the whole sector should, by all rights, be his. The Haaruthian nobles were only too happy to oblige.
For the rest of the night, Esteban was left to nurse his wound as well as his wounded pride, while the nobility was quick to congratulate Lord Vlachen on his victory and his newly acquired trophy. Then, as the small hours of the morning drew near, Vlachen and the archduchess rose. In a bid to woo the powerful noble, Haaruthia’s young ruler had invited him to a tour of the palace gardens by night. Vlachen accepted, and requested none other than Esteban to guard the both of them, along with Vlachen’s personal bodyguard. This was to be Esteban’s “consolation prize”. Again, he obeyed.
After strolling through the gardens for a while, Vlachen and the archduchess retired to one of the luxurious parlors to have a conversation in private, ordering Vlachen’s bodyguard and Esteban to stand guard outside. Esteban was feeling ridiculed and uneasy in equal measures, but what was he to do?
After a while, a female scream came from within the parlor, making Esteban draw his weapons and run inside to protect the archduchess. Only for a split second did he wonder why Vlachen’s own bodyguard seemed largely unfazed, even amused, by the situation.
Inside the parlor, Esteban witnessed Lord Vlachen forcing himself upon the young archduchess. Lady Cyrine was trying her best to fight him off, but this only seemed to make him even more aroused. Esteban knew about the nobility’s plan to offer up the archduchess to Vlachen in a bid for more power and influence, yet when he now looked at Cyrine, he saw nothing but a frightened child. So he demanded that Vlachen step away from the archduchess and be arrested for his crimes against House Civatte. But the powerful noble only laughed, leering at Esteban that, after all, he had promised to sample the best Haaruthia had to offer.
When Esteban remained steadfast, Vlachen ordered his bodyguard to take care of the matter, and the man drew his own weapon, engaging Esteban in a fencing duel to the death. Vlachen’s bodyguard was a masterful fencer in his own right, but in the end, he was no match for the regimental champion of the 126th Haaruthian Dragoons: Esteban killed the man and tried again to apprehend Vlachen. The noble was furious by now, proclaiming that he would succeed where his subordinate had failed. After all, he had already beaten Esteban once. Drawing his sword, Vlachen flew at him in a blind rage.
But Vlachen wouldn’t have been able to best Esteban during the contest, had the fight been on equal footing, and he learned so now to his detriment: Only a few flurries of attacks and ripostes, then Esteban sliced Vlachen's face open with a well-placed attack. Howling with pain, the lord collapsed, surrendering his weapon, while Esteban tried to console the shaken archduchess.
But then, the palace guards arrived, alerted by the commotion. Vlachen ordered them to arrest Esteban, who he said was a dangerous traitor that had killed his trusted servant and friend, and had also attempted to assassinate the archduchess. Only by Vlachen’s intervention had the worst been averted, but his bravery had seen him grievously wounded by the traitor’s hand. Esteban was immediately seized and taken into custody.
After a night of questioning and thorough beatings, Esteban’s superior arrived to present him with a rundown of the situation. The case seemed simple enough: His ambition and pride spurned by losing to Vlachen, Esteban had tried to get his revenge on the noble. He had also tried to hurt or even kill the archduchess, seeing her as the reason his personal ambitions had been shattered. He was sure to be found guilty, and death by firing squad was the obvious outcome.
Esteban professed his innocence, pointing out the archduchess would be able to vouch for the purity of his motives. His superior coldly claimed that the archduchess would do no such thing: Once again, Haaruthia’s fate was at stake. One man’s life was a small price to pay. With that, he left Esteban. Then the interrogations resumed.
After a day and a night, the questioners suddenly let up, and the door to the interrogation room opened, admitting none other than Inquisitor Gotthardt. The Inquisitor claimed that, as a member of the Ordo Hereticus, he was claiming jurisdiction over Esteban’s case on the grounds that there might be a heretical background. Though Esteban’s superior protested, Gotthardt told him in no uncertain terms that his authority in this was absolute and had best not be questioned.
When they were alone, Gotthardt asked Esteban to present his own side of the story. Esteban told him about the events that had transpired, and Gotthardt seemed thoughtful. Then he left.
The next day, Esteban was visited by his brother Ramon. Once again, he professed his innocence, but his brother only told him that he had brought an irrevocable stain to their family’s proud name. He also informed him that, as far as he was concerned, he no longer had a brother. Then he too left.
Esteban was shattered. His whole life had been spent striving to do the honourable thing and thereby doing justice to his family name. But now, he had damned both himself and his family by doing what was right. And nobody was prepared to acknowledge the truth. Esteban was just about ready to face the execution detail, and that is what he told Inquisitor Gotthardt when the old man returned to his cell.
Gotthardt had other plans. He told Esteban that Lord Vlachen had already left the planet, furious and eager to never return. Haaruthia’s nobles were in an uproar, most of them crying for blood. Esteban’s blood. However, Gotthardt had also talked in private with the archduchess, and Lady Cyrine had corroborated Esteban’s version of events, if only unofficially. In any case, there would be no way to rehabilitate Esteban, for Haaruthia’s ruling class had simply chosen not to acknowledge the truth. He would lose his rank, his title and his name would be struck from the regimental records. And he would die by firing squad. Or he could join Inquisitor Gotthardt, to become a member of his retinue.
Esteban laughed at the idea: Everything he had ever cared for was lost to him now. Why take the coward’s way out just to save his life? If that was his only option to survive, he would rather die. This was his choice, if he had any say in the matter.
Gotthardt agreed that the choice was ultimately his. However, Esteban had learned that there was a distinction between doing what was accepted and doing what was right. He had taken a decision, and that decision now made him eligible for service in Gotthardt’s retinue. The old man told Esteban that he was not offering him a stay of his death warrant. He was offering him a chance to do the Emperor’s work. He also informed him that one Trooper Koltz had tried, repeatedly and in danger of being executed himself, to intervene on Esteban’s behalf. Then he left Esteban once more, to give him time to think.
Shortly afterwards, Inquisitor Erasmus Gotthardt of the Ordo Hereticus and his retainers left Haaruthia for destinations unknown.
To date, there is no mention of a soldier called Esteban Revas in the regimental records of the 126th Haaruthian Dragoons. Lord Ramon Gaius Belsazar of House Revas has repeatedly distanced himself from the actions of his late brother who was, by all accounts, a notorious felon at best and maybe even a dangerous heretic.
The last remaining trace Esteban has left on his homeworld Haaruthia is the boarding list in the memory engrams of a servitor doing service in the hangars of the Asuncion spaceport, noting that Inquisitor Gotthardt’s retinue numbered exactly two persons more when he left Haaruthia than when he arrived.
As always, let me know what you think!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/25 23:00:32
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Arch Magos w/ 4 Meg of RAM
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Absolutely awesome. Loved that. Nicely written and a cracking wee piece of fluff. What will the future hold for fallen Esteban?!!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/26 22:38:35
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Khorne Rhino Driver with Destroyer
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Please say Lord Vlachen and most of the Haaruthian nobility are secretly heretics! it would be interesting to see Lady Cyrine join the retinue as well. Psyker maybe?
Good model and background!
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my chaos marine blog-http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/30/462647.page
Eating Michael Douglas to know what its like to get some action from Catherine Zeta Jones probably wouldn't work |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/26 22:40:33
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Unhealthy Competition With Other Legions
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Esteban looks great, I love the black armour with the gold trim, am I right in thinking that the black is metallic? (Just because to me it looks like it is and just wondering if my eyes are old!)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/27 13:09:59
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Khorne Chosen Marine Riding a Juggernaut
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Cheers, guys!
@ Januine: Thanks -- as for Esteban's future, he may be Interrogator material, this one
@ Chaos Emperor: Haha, the Haaruthian nobles are basically just opportunists, but the young Lord Vlachen will turn out to be a bit of an evil bastard. I haven't decided yet whether or not he'll be an actual heretic -- maybe he's just a shrewd political animal whose maneuvring puts him dangerously close to very dangerous people...? We'll see...
As for Cyrine, while she won't join any retinue (she is a planetary governess, after all, if only as a figurehead), there will be a character by the name of Elisha Gorgo (daughter of a noble family and a hidden psyker), whose relationship with Esteban will be somewhat complicated due to the fact that she reminds him of Cyrine:
@ Calibanite Lion: You are quite right -- well spotted! I did mix the slightest touch of Leadbelcher into the black, in order to give a very slight metallic sheen to the armour, then added a generous coat of gloss varnish on top.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/27 17:08:51
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Pyromaniac Hellhound Pilot
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KrautScientist wrote:
As for Cyrine, while she won't join any retinue (she is a planetary governess, after all, if only as a figurehead), there will be a character by the name of Elisha Gorgo (daughter of a noble family and a hidden psyker), whose relationship with Esteban will be somewhat complicated due to the fact that she reminds him of Cyrine:
I like Cyrine  Fantastic arm/hand positioning for a psyker! My only quibble would be the size of her feet: she's got some clown shoes on just now
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The 104th Vostroyan Mechanized
Rawson's Reboot
Viktor von Domm: nope... can´t do that for the sake of all lving creatures that dwell on earth....
dsteingass: That's like saying "I forgot to tell you who your real father is"
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/28 11:37:00
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Strangely Beautiful Daemonette of Slaanesh
Canada eh?
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Great work, keep it up!
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Yeah... Not the best person to talk to no more, great fandom(sarcasm)
Ordeo Xeneophiliac Mechaneo Safietus Obligatorum Division
Tau Obsidian cast
Saim-Hann Skirmishers
Random deamonette devision
Band of brothers
Gallant Pulsers(DiamondRamz)
Ravaging Raptors
Tyranid Khimera Genom
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/579207.page#6527715
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/579184.page |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/28 16:49:09
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Painting Within the Lines
Hamburg Germany
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Didn't know Theo Lingen had the role of Esteban in the movie.:-)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/28 16:56:30
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Been Around the Block
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Where did you come by that torso on the woman? It's really neat =)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/28 20:29:07
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Khorne Chosen Marine Riding a Juggernaut
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Cheers for the feedback, guys!
@ Rawson: Thanks! Like I said, that's not Cyrine, though, but Elisha Gorgo. But don't feel like you have to keep track of all of my little plastic characters
@ Hruotland: Damn you, I simply cannot unsee that now! The resemblance is uncanny!
@ JensDK: She's one of the vampiresses from the WFB Coven Throne kit.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/30 16:51:24
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Khorne Chosen Marine Riding a Juggernaut
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/30 18:38:07
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Wicked Ghast
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i think he is really cool whats he made from
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/30 18:51:19
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Unhealthy Competition With Other Legions
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Nice familiars, that is something I am missing atm, I will have to remedy that. The flaming skull head one is cool and I think I might have enough bits to completely rip that idea off
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/30 19:05:30
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Calculating Commissar
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he's sooo cute!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/04/30 22:29:52
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Xenohunter with First Contact
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Really cool familiars! Very creativ and unique.the flaming skull is great. So simple, but sooo effective. They all fit so well in the crazed 40k universe
(Btw. Congrats to the 400.000)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/05/01 13:20:36
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Apprehensive Inquisitorial Apprentice
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Aw, he's adorable
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/05/01 13:44:21
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Khorne Chosen Marine Riding a Juggernaut
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Cheers, guys! @ kencotter: Hmm, the skeleton is an ornament from the WFB Coven Throne kit, the wings came from the Sanguinary Guard kit, the head is from a servo-skull, the "cable-spine" was cut off from the servo-skull that comes with the Tempestus Scions. The purity seals on the scythe are from lord knows where  Oh, and I added a small vent to the model's back that came from a CSM backpack. That should be about it Another small update today: I came up with a small background vignette involving my true scale Astartes as part of a writeup on my blog, and I'd like to share it with you: Praetor Janus Auriga, of the Golden Legion Astartes Chapter Seneschal Secundus Goswinus Baehrn stood at the edge of the landing platform, his robes flapping about him in the icy breeze. Baehrn prided himself on being a thoroughly unemotional person, but even so, he had been extremely nervous, ever since the news had reached him half an hour earlier: The Astartes gunship “Falco Aureus” had made planetfall and was approaching the Hive Primus with an urgent dispatch for the Lord Governor himself. Direct dealings with the Chapter were few and far between these days, and mostly limited to the most prestigious social functions, which was why Goswinus Baehrn had never actually laid eyes on a member of the Adeptus Astartes up close during his fifteen years in his fairly prestigious position. Under normal circumstances, the task of welcoming a representative of the Legion on Bastold would have fallen under the purview of Senschal Primus Mathewelin, but the old man had retired to his chambers the prior night, with a generous supply of amasec and Obscura and, it was whispered, in the company of several women of questionable renown. In any case, Baehrn had been unable to rouse his superior, which now left him the highest-ranking official to deal with this unforeseen event — He could only suspect that the Seneschal Primus would have to say something about this breach of etiquette at some point in the near future. In fact, there would almost certainly be hell to pay later in the day, not a doubt about it, yet even this prospect was nothing against the mounting sense of dread filling Baehrn as he saw the Astartes vessel approaching: The gunship came in low against the rising sun, as if for a covert attack run. It was a blunt, brutal shape, not unlike a fist, the roar of its engines growing from clearly audible to almost unbearable, as it drew close to the landing platform. The gunship touched down at the very centre of the platform. Baehrn could see its golden bulk, the exquisite scrollwork and lettering in High Gothic proclaiming its many glorious years of service, yet also the scars and welts that spoke of a life of constant battles. The Seneschal Secundus drew himself up to his full height as the front ramp opened with a hiss, taking a deep breath and sending a silent prayer to the God-Emperor to grant him composure. “They have sent us a statue!” That was his first thought as he saw the massive golden figure standing at the top of the ramp: A perfect rendition of an Astartes in gold, its armour beautifully detailed, its arms clutching a boltgun across the chest in the most iconic pose imaginable. Baehrn almost laughed out loud as relief flooded through him — the Golden Legion merely wanted to provide an overwrought – and fairly narcissistic – gift to the rulers of Velsen, doubtlessly to be unveiled during a suitably extensive and garish ceremony. This feeling was short lived, however, and quickly replaced by utter dread as the golden figure started marching down the landing ramp in precise, measured steps. It was all Goswinus Baehrn could do not to cringe in fear at the approaching giant, and he bowed his head in supplication instead, making the sign of the aquila. When the low purr of active power armour finally emanated from directly in front of him, setting his teeth on edge, there was only a very slight quaver in his voice as he intoned the formal greeting in High Gothic: “We welcome thee, protector of Velsen, in this hallowed fulcrum of our realm. It is our honour to lay eyes upon thee, and thine every wish shalt be our command, honoured battle brother of the Legio Aurea. The Emperor Protects.” “Who are you?” The armour’s speaker systems lent the voice a slightly metallic quality, but it was powerful and deep underneath. A voice that demanded instant obeissance. “Seneschal Secundus Goswinus Baehrn, my lord, member of the household of House Vlachen and most obedient servant of the Lord High-Protector, the Emperor bless his name.” The giant in golden armour kept staring at Baehrn through glowing blue eye lenses for what seemed like an eternity, but could only have been a few heartbeats, then he lowered the massive bolter, securing it to his thigh with a soft metallic clank. He reached up towards his laurel crested helmet, disengaging the seals with a hiss. When he lifted the helmet free of his head, Baehrn could see a grizzled face, stern and lined, yet with broad features that instantly marked its owner as something more than human, and crowned by a crest of hair so bright that it appeared white. The Astartes’ eyes were of a piercing blue, and as Baehrn did his best to hold their gaze, he felt as though he were being evaluated, no, …targeted. Then The giant spoke: “I am Praetor Janus Auriga of the Golden Legion, envoy to Lord Commander Prabian. I am here on the Lord Commander’s orders, to speak with Lord Governor Vlachen, that I might advise him in the the governing of Velsen.” “Advise…the Lord Governor?” Baehrn almost spluttered: “My lord, that…” Auriga interrupted him briskly: “The Lord Commander feels that, in the light of current events, the Chapter should take a more active role in guiding the sector. I have therefore been commanded to take the legion’s customary seat on the council.” Baehrn could barely keep his emotions in check, reeling as he was from the implications of the Praetor’s words: The Golden Legion’s seat on the council had been vacant for a very long time – so long as to make the office seem more than a symbolic gesture than anything – and he doubted even the older members of the noble houses could remember when a member of the Chapter had actually traveled to Bastold to speak on behalf of his Lord Commander on the council. The mere revelation of this latest development would throw the council in an uproar. All of this went through Baehrn’s head, as his mind raced to find an appropriate reply. A non-committal “…my lord” was all he could safely come up with. “I will need accommodations for myself and my retainers.” The Praetor indicated a small group of robed figures exiting the gunship. “It will be done, my lord!” Baehrn was glad the conversation seemed to be on terra firma. “It shall be attended to at once. And I will send notice to your quarters, once the council is back in session, so that you may speak to the representatives…” “Negative!”, Auriga interrupted: “I will address the council now!” Baehrn almost reeled back, as the terror came flooding back in full force. “NOW? But, my lord,…the council is in recess right now. The council members will…” “Are the council chambers still located in sector C-34 of the central spire?” “Y…yes, my lord.” “Good. Then I will meet the council members there.” With these words, the giant in golden armour started to march towards the Hive’s interior, with a very agitated Senschal Secundus doing his best to keep up. Things on Bastold were about to change. As always, let me know what you think!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/05/01 13:55:57
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Arch Magos w/ 4 Meg of RAM
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Next part please......
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/05/02 09:27:46
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Death-Dealing Ultramarine Devastator
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Agreeing with Januine... we need a part 2 of that story
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/05/02 09:59:03
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Hollerin' Herda with Squighound Pack
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Awesome! Thirded(is that a thing?) for wanting next part.
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"Skull First into WAARRGGHHH" The motto of the Savage Psykers |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/05/02 14:43:31
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Jealous that Horus is Warmaster
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That tau samurai is fantastic!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/05/02 22:12:47
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Blood Angel Captain Wracked with Visions
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Really nice fluff. Are the Golden Legion descended from the Ultramarines?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/06/06 14:31:37
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: "Go ahead, make my day!"
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Khorne Chosen Marine Riding a Juggernaut
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Haha, cheers, guys!
Regarding a possible second part for Praetor Janus Auriga's story -- it doesn't even exist in the back of my head yet. This first piece was really only intended to set the scene, so to speak  That said, I believe we'll be hearing from the guy, never fear.
@ Dreadclaw69: I originally wanted them to be Ultramarine successors, but DexterKong convinced me that Imperial Fists successors were ultimately more interesting. And he was right, there are lots of cool narrative avenues worth exploring if these guys are descended from the Fists: The penchant for guarding and fortifying places, the trauma of having failed the Emperor during the Heresy becoming a double trauma, because the Golden Legion failed to protect St. Sabasto -- the list goes on and on...
Anyway, I have something to show you today: You may have noticed that, in spite of the abundance of AdMech bitz and conversion options the latest releases have brought us, I haven't really boarded the AdMech train yet, the Kastelan conversion notwithstanding. The reason is that I just haven't managed to come up with anything that doesn't feel like a cheap knock off of one of Jeff Vader's conversions. Until today, that is. So allow me to share some of the AdMech things I am currently working on:
Here's the whole crew. I am not sure whether or not this will become a dedicated AdMech warband or whether the models will end up in various INQ28 warbands. That said, I really like the idea of a warband representing a gathering of high-ranking Magi from the Velsen Sector's resident Forgeworld of Korhold and a few of their Skitarii bodyguards. One image from the 40k lore that really speaks to me is the idea of a gang of Tech Priests where each of the Magi looks very different (and rather inhuman), and the one thing where I think the AdMech releases have let us down a little is how they haven't actually given us all that many actual Tech Priests. Anyway, let's take a closer look at the models:
Something simple for starters: I picked up this servitor a while ago, because I think he makes for an excellent Tech Priest (I want him to be a Magos Xenobiologis). I switched his original left hand with a creepy claw that came from the Datasmith model, and while it's a very small detail, I really like the change: In spite of his slack face, he looks rather keen now to dissect come Xenos, doesn't he?
I also definitely had to pick up the Tech Priest Dominus, because I simply love the model. I have started assembling it, and this is what it looks like right now:
I only made two very small changes: I clipped off the proboscis-like piece of tech dangling from the Tech Priest's facemask, because I like it better that way. And I am considering swapping out his right weapon arm with a kitbashed forearm with a converted Necron hand, because the gun option seems rather OTT for an INQ28 character. What do you think, should I keep the arm I have or go back to one of the guns after all?
There's also the first member of the Skitarii bodyguard:
In the interest of full disclosure: Both the pose and the parts were lifted wholesale from one of Dave Taylor's Skitarrii. Lazy, I know, but I just loved his recipe so much
So, nothing all that exciting so far, right? Well, here's the kitbash I am really happy with: A floating Magos entirely built from leftovers:
The arms are still WIP at this point -- I may still swap them for something different. Nevertheless, I am pretty taken with this guy right now.
As always, let me know what you think!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/06/06 15:18:29
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: Toll the great bell once...
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Arch Magos w/ 4 Meg of RAM
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Cracking stuff as ever. Had to pick up one of those tech priest Dominia as well. Absolutely gorgeous fig. Heaven only knows when I'll have time to get it painted up though lol
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/06/06 17:03:36
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: Toll the great bell once...
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Ragin' Ork Dreadnought
Deep in the Outer Boroughs of NYC
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I love your conversions, especially the Dominus. I think true to form, he should not be armed with any weapon. Like he's above that sort of thing. Guns and other crude implements are what his minions carry.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/06/07 03:18:12
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: Toll the great bell once...
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Blood Angel Captain Wracked with Visions
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Awesome work on the Ad Mech group. Your Imperial Fist successors idea is a lot better than an Ultramarine successor chapter
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/06/07 04:15:36
Subject: Re:KrautScientist's INQ28: Toll the great bell once...
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Apprehensive Inquisitorial Apprentice
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My Mechanicum stuff is in the mail, and I'll be converting up a Dominus as well. I think you made the right decision to leave the volkite blaster off, but I think the empty hand isn't the best way to go. Instead, why not a tool of some sort? The Dark Eldar Talos is a great source of creepy surgical bits that would look great on him, but there's really not end to the different tech bits you could have on the end of that arm. Also, your floating Magos is stunning! Where did his head come from? I think that either arm works for him, but not together. I would either add a sleeve to his left arm somehow, or make his right arm bare. I could (and probably am) be alone in this opinion, but I think the nature of the two arms are a little too juxtaposed with one another to really sell the model at the moment. But man, those cables on his head. He looks like something Blanche drew in the 90s.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/06/07 05:47:38
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: Toll the great bell once...
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Purposeful Hammerhead Pilot
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Y'know, after seeing how those arms work on a Stormvermin body, the Mechanicus sets might actually make a good source of parts for a Skaven Warlock Engineer!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2015/06/07 08:25:25
Subject: KrautScientist's INQ28: Toll the great bell once...
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Potent Possessed Daemonvessel
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Glad to see you go down this way, but now I need a Magos Dominus. This floating Magos is a very good call, loving the
"You will get shot in the face" posture. Maybe he could use more cables/ dangling parts to have the cape look less monolithic ? But you are the bloke with the fig on you desk, you know best ^^
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